Character Race: Half Drow/Half Dwarf -or full Drow if i cant be a Drorf-
Character Age: 40
Character Description:
Ralne is a Curious yet Cautious kind of person, as in hes more likely to Rend your head from your shoulders if ya look Strange then to kick ya and say Move it. Hes a drow with Dark Red eyes that Flare up when hes gets really Ticked, and his Eyes also start to turn an Onyx-Like Color when he feels Injustice is being done.
Character Quirks:
He Tends to keep to himself, and Ignore everyone around him, except for that one little Thief trying to grab his moneybag, -Thump- yea.. I think that was the thief's Head... and he also tends to stay away from Most of the other Races, an Old Habit from his Child-Hood he keeps to. Hes also somewhat CopyCatish.
Homeland: The Forgotten Lands
Character Backstory:
Ralne Darkne, Offspring of a She-Elf, Revina Darlic-[Drow]- and a He-Dwarf Hu'Gruli Crawne-[Dwarf]-, He Never knew his Mother, since she died shortly after his birth, and his Father acted more like a Mentor/Teacher then a Dad.
He Enjoyed his Time with his dad, but they remained anti-social from Elves and Dwarves Alike, for Fear either side might Take his son and use him against the Other, His Father Died while they were inside there home, His Father was crafting tools, and Ralne was enjoying the Brightness and Happiness of the Candles Hu'Gruli had crafted... [would say HOW, bout id rather not... Think Shrek, nuff' said.], before heading into the Dream-World for the night.
But all was not at all Peaceful that night , Bandits had learned of the Young Boy, and thought they could Sell his Unqiue-Abilites to gain a Considerable amount of Money, They followed the rumors and eventually found the House they inhabited. The Bandits Attacked when they were certain the Young Elf and his Father [they had no idea he was a dwarf] we inside and resting. Hu'Gruli Felt thier Foot-Steps coming slowly, and softly, but Unmistakably Human-Like. He quickly ran/stumbled to a nearby Wall and moved a seemingly have Boulder out of the way, he then motioned Ralquin to come and get in the Cave that was behind the Boulder. when Ral was in, Hu'Gruli shut Ralquin in the cave he had mined out years before, incase his Son was ever found out about, But before he Shut him in, he quickly whispered to Ralne this: "Boy, I have probably never acted like it, or you figured it out, but i am your Father, and your Family name is Darkne, a name i wished to share with your mother one day, but alass, it was not to be. Follow This Cave outside, and Run, and never turn back, I well come see you one day." Hu'Gruli said something else, but Ralne did not succeed in catching it, as Hu'Gruli quickly shut the Entrance to the cave, but to Hu'Gruli's Dismay, he had not shut the Cave off entirely, leaving a Crack Ralquin could see through, and watch, as the horrors unfolded..... -[Slice Slice thump thump battle cries, ya know, the usual]-
note: if ya notice Ralquin, tell me what line and ill switch it to Ralne, its basically the same backstory i used for Ralquin Darkne, hence the last names. was thinking -HELL WHY NOT MAKE EM BROTHAS- but nah, if some one wants they can be Ralquin, but i swear, if they mess up the way Ralquin is, i well hunt them down, and Rend thier Head from thier shoulders -on 2nd thought, don't be Ralquin, only i can be Ralquin-
note: Ralne is one of my characters i Modify overtime, hence why one of his quirks it -CopyCatish-,
nother -and final- note: If any of ya guys find my little Settlement i called Halik, YA TOUCH ANYTHING I KILL YA! -end note-
Character Name: Talfryne Eli (Goes by Eli) Character Race: Human Character Age: 22
Character Description: A rather rough looking man, Eli tends to keep to himself. His voice is deep and scratchy, matching his appearance rather well. Underneath the hard, intimidating furrowed brow and sandpaper cheeks lies many tender secrets, locked away from the world's ever piercing eyes. Even though he prefers a peaceful lifestyle, he will protect himself when in danger. He is a skilled workman, proficient in mining and construction, as well as farming and raising livestock. One may often see Eli in a marketplace, selling his surplus resources.
Character Quirks:
Although strong and independent, Eli has a fear of dying alone that occasionally tingles in the back of his thoughts. He also has a soft spot for children and may make irrational decisions in the possibility of protecting them from danger. He secretly wishes to have his own child someday.
Homeland: Erinn, the "Paradise" land, overrun and destroyed by a dark race of monsters.
Character Backstory: On a crisp Autumn morning, a baby is born.. Unfortunately, not in the comfort of a farm on a sunny hillside. The child is birthed, wrapped in a crude blanket, then left in the back room of a moldy, run-down inn. Attached to the baby is a crumpled note that reads, "My name is Talfryne." The parents are nowhere to be found, and are completely unknown. Leave it to the widowed seamstress to find the abandoned baby on a quiet, fateful evening.
Fast forward a few years, young Talfryne Eli lives a privileged life under the roof of wealthy Nora Eli, in the town Dunbarton. The news that she had found the baby escalated from "The poor woman found a baby" to "The brave woman rescued the helpless baby from certain doom!". This had given her much attention, and she was able to earn a modest fortune. She's even made robes for some of the King's officials! Little Talfryne Eli recieved a strong education, and learned many helpful skills for living independently.
As Talfryne grew, he eventually became curious about his biological parents. The story that he had been abandoned stabbed and tore his heart like ten swords to a tomato. He learned that if it wasn't for Nora, Talfryne may have never been found, and would have died. Talfryne couldn't handle the facts, and stopped going by his birth name, instead going by his given last name. As time passed, Eli became tolerant of his origins, but kept using the name Eli. He's not entirely sure why.
On a clear, Winter night, a shrill scream slices through the frosted air. Eli, now 19, shoots out of bed in instant alarm. He rushes to his mother's room, and finds a dark figure looming over her bed. It turns slowly, glaring at Eli with piercing, icy blue eyes. Blood drips from its mouth onto the floor and Eli bolts away. The creature belts out a hideous roar and chases after the boy. Through the snow and ice and without shoes, Eli dashes through the streets of Dunbarton, winding through alleys and streets and through the plazas, only to find more creatures, seemingly at every turn. A few soldiers emerge from a tavern and rush after the creatures. The blue-eyed creature grabs Eli's foot and dangles him helplessly in the chilly air. With another hideous roar, Eli blacks out.
He wakes with a jump and a shout, breathing heavily, eyes darting around. He's in a bedroom at the tavern. Music plays on the other side of the door, and a solemn collective mumble hovers in the air. Eli leaves the room and finds a few of the soldiers, and they explain that this wasn't that first attack. Many towns have been attacked in past months. Eli tells the soldier that his mother had been killed, and he barely escaped, and the soldier, named Ranald, offers to bring Eli to his home to train him. Eli agrees.
For a few years, Eli trains for the army. He hones his skills with a sword and bow, and also learns key survival skills, such as finding resources and building shelter. However, after Eli's first real battle as a soldier, he decides that he isn't mentally capable of dealing with the effects of war, and leaves without so much as a goodbye. Using the life skills he learned from Nora, and the battle skills he learned from Ranald, Eli boarded the next ship to the distant land of Aldeiron. Even now, he regrets not saying goodbye or giving his thanks to Ranald. However, now he's stuck in a completely foreign world, now on the verge of war, with no money or goals. But he's not looking back.
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) fearnor falassion
Character Race: (see below for race choices) drow
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 22
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)
Tall thin figure with long brown hair and acts a bit strange around other people is socially awkward and is very unpredictable in most situations
Character Quirks: (anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) dislikes water, fast runner, loves farms
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) ollmoss
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.)
fearnor falassion was born and raised in the small village of olmoss where he had a loving family and many good friends. When he became of age fearnor went out into the dark forests that surrounded ollmoss to kill a giant spider with his still developing magic to prove he was indeed a true drow of the village.
After 2 weeks in the deep dark forest he managed to kill a giant spider and return its head to his village. fearnor falassion returned to his beloved village to find it had been raided there seemed to be no survivors. fearnor now wonders the world in search for his family or friends who he hope is still alive.
Character Name: Talfryne Eli (Goes by Eli) Character Race: Human Character Age: 22
Character Description: A rather rough looking man, Eli tends to keep to himself. His voice is deep and scratchy, matching his appearance rather well. Underneath the hard, intimidating furrowed brow and sandpaper cheeks lies many tender secrets, locked away from the world's ever piercing eyes. Even though he prefers a peaceful lifestyle, he will protect himself when in danger. He is a skilled workman, proficient in mining and construction, as well as farming and raising livestock. One may often see Eli in a marketplace, selling his surplus resources.
Character Quirks:
Although strong and independent, Eli has a fear of dying alone that occasionally tingles in the back of his thoughts. He also has a soft spot for children and may make irrational decisions in the possibility of protecting them from danger. He secretly wishes to have his own child someday.
Homeland: Erinn, the "Paradise" land, overrun and destroyed by a dark race of monsters.
Character Backstory: On a crisp Autumn morning, a baby is born.. Unfortunately, not in the comfort of a farm on a sunny hillside. The child is birthed, wrapped in a crude blanket, then left in the back room of a moldy, run-down inn. Attached to the baby is a crumpled note that reads, "My name is Talfryne." The parents are nowhere to be found, and are completely unknown. Leave it to the widowed seamstress to find the abandoned baby on a quiet, fateful evening.
Fast forward a few years, young Talfryne Eli lives a privileged life under the roof of wealthy Nora Eli, in the town Dunbarton. The news that she had found the baby escalated from "The poor woman found a baby" to "The brave woman rescued the helpless baby from certain doom!". This had given her much attention, and she was able to earn a modest fortune. She's even made robes for some of the King's officials! Little Talfryne Eli recieved a strong education, and learned many helpful skills for living independently.
As Talfryne grew, he eventually became curious about his biological parents. The story that he had been abandoned stabbed and tore his heart like ten swords to a tomato. He learned that if it wasn't for Nora, Talfryne may have never been found, and would have died. Talfryne couldn't handle the facts, and stopped going by his birth name, instead going by his given last name. As time passed, Eli became tolerant of his origins, but kept using the name Eli. He's not entirely sure why.
On a clear, Winter night, a shrill scream slices through the frosted air. Eli, now 19, shoots out of bed in instant alarm. He rushes to his mother's room, and finds a dark figure looming over her bed. It turns slowly, glaring at Eli with piercing, icy blue eyes. Blood drips from its mouth onto the floor and Eli bolts away. The creature belts out a hideous roar and chases after the boy. Through the snow and ice and without shoes, Eli dashes through the streets of Dunbarton, winding through alleys and streets and through the plazas, only to find more creatures, seemingly at every turn. A few soldiers emerge from a tavern and rush after the creatures. The blue-eyed creature grabs Eli's foot and dangles him helplessly in the chilly air. With another hideous roar, Eli blacks out.
He wakes with a jump and a shout, breathing heavily, eyes darting around. He's in a bedroom at the tavern. Music plays on the other side of the door, and a solemn collective mumble hovers in the air. Eli leaves the room and finds a few of the soldiers, and they explain that this wasn't that first attack. Many towns have been attacked in past months. Eli tells the soldier that his mother had been killed, and he barely escaped, and the soldier, named Ranald, offers to bring Eli to his home to train him. Eli agrees.
For a few years, Eli trains for the army. He hones his skills with a sword and bow, and also learns key survival skills, such as finding resources and building shelter. However, after Eli's first real battle as a soldier, he decides that he isn't mentally capable of dealing with the effects of war, and leaves without so much as a goodbye. Using the life skills he learned from Nora, and the battle skills he learned from Ranald, Eli boarded the next ship to the distant land of Aldeiron. Even now, he regrets not saying goodbye or giving his thanks to Ranald. However, now he's stuck in a completely foreign world, now on the verge of war, with no money or goals. But he's not looking back.
Although a few spelling mistakes I really like this application, it pulled on a few heartstrings with the first bit of the backstory and from there progressed quite well! Very Good. Accepted!
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) fearnor falassion
Character Race: (see below for race choices) drow
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 22
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)
Tall thin figure with long brown hair and acts a bit strange around other people is socially awkward and is very unpredictable in most situations
Character Quirks: (anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) dislikes water, fast runner, loves farms
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) ollmoss
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.)
fearnor falassion was born and raised in the small village of olmoss where he had a loving family and many good friends. When he became of age fearnor went out into the dark forests that surrounded ollmoss to kill a giant spider with his still developing magic to prove he was indeed a true drow of the village.
After 2 weeks in the deep dark forest he managed to kill a giant spider and return its head to his village. fearnor falassion returned to his beloved village to find it had been raided there seemed to be no survivors. fearnor now wonders the world in search for his family or friends who he hope is still alive.
Backstory could use some work, Although its a good start. Accepted
Character Description: Thadox is your typical 20 year old male Human. Standing around 5'10",Thadox is usualy very melancholy. Thadox loves to Build structures.
Character Quirks: socially awkward, arachnophobia
Homeland: Trade District, Stormwind City, Eastern Kingdoms (Thadox is actually the name of my lvl 90 DK in WOW)
Character Backstory: Thadox was once the king of the eastern kingdoms go to guy, he was a dragon hunter,blacksmith,and a miner. he has killed many people to protect those who look to him for protection.
Character Description: Thadox is your typical 20 year old male Human. Standing around 5'10",Thadox is usualy very melancholy. Thadox loves to Build structures.
Character Quirks: socially awkward, arachnophobia
Homeland: Trade District, Stormwind City, Eastern Kingdoms (Thadox is actually the name of my lvl 90 DK in WOW)
Character Backstory: Thadox was once the king of the eastern kingdoms go to guy, he was a dragon hunter,blacksmith,and a miner. he has killed many people to protect those who look to him for protection.
Please look into extending your backstory, adding more detail and reason to it. Not Accepted sorry.
Character Description: Flowing black hair and blue, faded eyes. 7 feet 4 inches tall and very defined muscles. A large scar runs down his entire left arm.
Character Quirks: a photographic memory and a keen sense to pick up on things quickly. Yet, a seldom speaker.
Homeland: Qordonia
Character Backstory: From the time he was 10, Mehrunez was fascinated with weapons. His father, a Qordonian soldier was killed in battle. His mom, a servant to the cruel king, Marazak, gets along on meager wages. She has not enough to pay for only pork chops and a shady bungalow, with enough room for only a pig to reside. One day Mehrunez was taken to the castle of Marazak with his mother. Once inside he went off under the permission of Marazak himself. However, he wondered into lost, forgotten corridors and eventually to an old escape route below the castles quarters. He found racks of weapons and chain linked armor. He fought hordes of undead, to claim the amulets of the highest powers, The Verivan. Said to be the amulet of the first ruler over Qordonia, it contained the power to turn a child into a fierce ruler and soldier. Mehrunez had turned into exactly this, killed Marazak and is now, the ruler of Qordonia.
Character Description: Flowing black hair and blue, faded eyes. 7 feet 4 inches tall and very defined muscles. A large scar runs down his entire left arm.
Character Quirks: a photographic memory and a keen sense to pick up on things quickly. Yet, a seldom speaker.
Homeland: Qordonia
Character Backstory: From the time he was 10, Mehrunez was fascinated with weapons. His father, a Qordonian soldier was killed in battle. His mom, a servant to the cruel king, Marazak, gets along on meager wages. She has not enough to pay for only pork chops and a shady bungalow, with enough room for only a pig to reside. One day Mehrunez was taken to the castle of Marazak with his mother. Once inside he went off under the permission of Marazak himself. However, he wondered into lost, forgotten corridors and eventually to an old escape route below the castles quarters. He found racks of weapons and chain linked armor. He fought hordes of undead, to claim the amulets of the highest powers, The Verivan. Said to be the amulet of the first ruler over Qordonia, it contained the power to turn a child into a fierce ruler and soldier. Mehrunez had turned into exactly this, killed Marazak and is now, the ruler of Qordonia.
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka. Prefers to be called Ramm. Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives.
Character Description: Hes a 8 years old Outlaw , He is the son of the famous Austin Custer Warlord of Onyx. In Dangerous Situations he pretty much just cowers in fear and runs away. He is extremely smart for a kid and can last hit minions.
Character Quirks: He tends to yell alot
Homeland: Kingdom of Onyx
Character Backstory: His parents died from aids when he was 7, leaving him to live in the streets of Onyx on his own. A local gang took over his parents house forcing him out on the street. He managed to survive by picking pockets and stealing from local vendors. He stole a trinket from Dylan Valka, once famous actor/bard/adventurer in a well known theater troupe who was now slowly drinking himself to death. Seeing potential in the boy, Dylan made a deal; he would teach the boy everything he knew; how to read, use a sword, play an instrument, and use costumes and misdirection in exchange for keeping him in the drunk.
Brenden spent weeks hunting the thugs down and murdered each one. The first was killed when he pushed him off of the docks with an anchor tied around his foot. The second was dragged along the cobblestone streets of the city behind a horse drawn carriage. The last one, the ring leader was killed when he tried to flee the city. Brenden tracked him down, overpowered him, and then raped and killed him, All of this just after turning 8. He then thought it was time to leave the city of onyx and see and explore the war as an outlaw.
Character Description: Tall build, clumsy, strong, athletic, and noisy
Character Quirks: Whistles to everything, flinches every 10 seconds, sleeps with a blankey
Homeland: Ragnarok
Character Backstory: Nok Flameborn Kagalano was the first Goliath of his tribe born free from the oppression of the red dragon Vaznerakoth. The dragon had enslaved the tribe for as long as even the elders could remember, until a fateful meteor came streaking down and slew him atop the mountain he had claimed. A fire shall forever burn where Vaz's body lies as if the flame were the tombstone of this once great being. After that, Nok's tribe began to pseudo-worship the rock. They emulated its fall from the heavens with their combat technique, and even developed skills to harness the flame that had touched them all. Though they were free, the tribe was not destined to survive. The dragon had left them with too few numbers to repopulate. As Nok laid the last elder to rest, he began a quest to search for another tribe, and to liberate all who were held captive by any and all draconic rulers. Fast forward to the campaign. The group has just landed on the docks of a city under attack by undead. After scanning the horizon for the source, Nok spotted the black dragon necromancer who was creating the undead army. With a bestial roar and murder in his eyes, Nok sprang to the rooftops and chased after the dragon with the cleric-polymorphed-troll following close behind. One of Nok's flaws was that he would auto-rage against anything draconic. He could make a save to avoid it against drakes, half dragons, etc. But true dragons made him fly out of control without question. After Nok got to the tower, the dragon took off into the air. With an assisted jump and more than a little luck, Nok grabbed a hold of the the dragon's ankle and began the most epic grapple battle I have ever witnessed. Nearly 10 rounds of back-and forth had Nok with the upper hand. He pinned the dragon's wings to its body, sending them both hurtling towards the ground. The few short moments before the duo hit the ground, Nok smiled. His grimace of rage became peaceful parting of his lips. He was the destroyer of dragons. He was the fire of the heavens. He had become the meteor.
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka.
Prefers to be called Ramm.
Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives.
Please expand your back story and then you will be accepted
Character Description: Hes a 8 years old Outlaw , He is the son of the famous Austin Custer Warlord of Onyx. In Dangerous Situations he pretty much just cowers in fear and runs away. He is extremely smart for a kid and can last hit minions.
Character Quirks: He tends to yell alot
Homeland: Kingdom of Onyx
Character Backstory: His parents died from aids when he was 7, leaving him to live in the streets of Onyx on his own. A local gang took over his parents house forcing him out on the street. He managed to survive by picking pockets and stealing from local vendors. He stole a trinket from Dylan Valka, once famous actor/bard/adventurer in a well known theater troupe who was now slowly drinking himself to death. Seeing potential in the boy, Dylan made a deal; he would teach the boy everything he knew; how to read, use a sword, play an instrument, and use costumes and misdirection in exchange for keeping him in the drunk.
Brenden spent weeks hunting the thugs down and murdered each one. The first was killed when he pushed him off of the docks with an anchor tied around his foot. The second was dragged along the cobblestone streets of the city behind a horse drawn carriage. The last one, the ring leader was killed when he tried to flee the city. Brenden tracked him down, overpowered him, and then raped and killed him, All of this just after turning 8. He then thought it was time to leave the city of onyx and see and explore the war as an outlaw.
Character Description: Tall build, clumsy, strong, athletic, and noisy
Character Quirks: Whistles to everything, flinches every 10 seconds, sleeps with a blankey
Homeland: Ragnarok
Character Backstory: Nok Flameborn Kagalano was the first Goliath of his tribe born free from the oppression of the red dragon Vaznerakoth. The dragon had enslaved the tribe for as long as even the elders could remember, until a fateful meteor came streaking down and slew him atop the mountain he had claimed. A fire shall forever burn where Vaz's body lies as if the flame were the tombstone of this once great being.
After that, Nok's tribe began to pseudo-worship the rock. They emulated its fall from the heavens with their combat technique, and even developed skills to harness the flame that had touched them all.
Though they were free, the tribe was not destined to survive. The dragon had left them with too few numbers to repopulate. As Nok laid the last elder to rest, he began a quest to search for another tribe, and to liberate all who were held captive by any and all draconic rulers.
Fast forward to the campaign. The group has just landed on the docks of a city under attack by undead. After scanning the horizon for the source, Nok spotted the black dragon necromancer who was creating the undead army. With a bestial roar and murder in his eyes, Nok sprang to the rooftops and chased after the dragon with the cleric-polymorphed-troll following close behind.
One of Nok's flaws was that he would auto-rage against anything draconic. He could make a save to avoid it against drakes, half dragons, etc. But true dragons made him fly out of control without question.
After Nok got to the tower, the dragon took off into the air. With an assisted jump and more than a little luck, Nok grabbed a hold of the the dragon's ankle and began the most epic grapple battle I have ever witnessed. Nearly 10 rounds of back-and forth had Nok with the upper hand. He pinned the dragon's wings to its body, sending them both hurtling towards the ground.
The few short moments before the duo hit the ground, Nok smiled. His grimace of rage became peaceful parting of his lips. He was the destroyer of dragons. He was the fire of the heavens. He had become the meteor.
IGN: (Your minecraft ingame name) Farscape9, will be informed possible new name in 1.8 added name changes.
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) John Brass (Smith)
Character Race: (see below for race choices) Half Halfing, Half Human, due to races of parents.
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 26 years of age, mature as the age.
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)John is as a bit less than the size of his brother, around as big as a tall roman, which Romans are tall when it was history. He has a small beard , and wears glasses when he is examining. John is less known than his brother, because his brother is a famous blacksmith in all the land, along with 2 other great ones. John has Dirty blonde hair and shaggy hair, also a little curly. He has hazel eyes that love to look out at long distances. He also wears the usual ragged clothes farmers wear.
Character Quirks:(anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) When John and his friends are in the market, they tend to avoid the bars, because the looters are always in there. But they usually get wine and go to his house, and have a nice feast. Ever since the village was invaded by the Goblins, John has had a fear of them ever since!
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) Singarh, a land of music, wine, beer and farmland.
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.) John is a guy who almost gets into trouble, he was bullied in his school, but loved to take music, taking 1st place with his friends in their musical contest. He loves to do parkour, and do music at the same time! Then the bully came in and got smacked right back into the pub! As you probably suspected, theives like the bully tried to steal from John, but John fed them, then took them to the constable. And the thing he is known for, is for his kind deed to the elves, when in a dark time, he gave them the best supply of potatoes and apples he grew! So in return, they gave him a tool that can change its uses, a hoe, a sword, a shovel, a plow, a scoop and more! He has always dreamed of exploring lands as a kid, which is one of the things that he did when he gave the elves the food, but this adventure, he has gone on, with the supply of food that will last him only a few days... Can he set up a farm before then?
Character Description:
5 feets 8 inches, silver haired boy with dark purple eyes. Is almost always wearing dark colored clothes,
Character Quirks: mysterious with anyone, Protective to women and children. Deed Hatred against god and worshipped figures.
Homeland: a little farming village
Character Backstory:
Born in a little farming village next to a lake and a river with young parents from middle-class. As years passes his birth,something wasn't quite natural,his snow white skin was very soft and his hairs, hairs that looked like Dark silver silk Years passed again, while kids grew up as teenagers their the first time he opened his eyes his parents were amazed how his eyes were beautiful,they were a deep Ametyste purple with some blood red. Not only his parents were having a smile everytime they looked at him but the villagers were quite appreciating his appearence. Some years later another gift happened to appear in the family, a little girl, his mother gave birth to a gorgeous blue eyes blond-brown haired girl They called Her Maya. Living peacefully with his two parents and working at the farm while keeping his younger sister Maya close to him to pretect her.only 10 years later a court horseman came to their house to bring a letter for his parents saying that they were asked to become one of the high clergy members.Asking him to keep his little sister and the house for themselves with the help of other villagers, they left for the castle far away, promising they will sent them letters. Months later, everything came alright he was taking care of his sister, the house and the farm himself very efficiently but then,something happened that changed his life.
Three whole days of raining turned into a storm, a storm like nobody has saw before that day.The storm changed to be even more powerful as hours passed, he looked outside, seeing what he never though
there would be around, a tornado passing not too far from the village, he closed the curtains before the window and hid with Maya and a villager under the table. The tornado was growing stronguer, after some time the storm was worst, the door was cracking and the windows were breaking, he closed his eyes ,trying not to move. At that moment..the roof flew away, bringing the table in its charge, part of the house blew away from the power of the wind,and he felt like floating,had he opened his eyes and he was falling outside. At the same moment the villager rushed to the wall that was still there, pulling him in, himself trying to not let go from his sisters arm, whatever the strengh he had,he wouldn't have been able to do what he wanted, not at that moment.With the sounds of wind and the cries of his sister,his hold, being now hand to hand with his sister's, he knew but didn't wanted to admit, but still he promised to her, to his sister, to Maya... that everything would be okay and that he will find her no matter what and that she didn't need to worry.....
These were the last words he told her.
He woke up some time later, he felt has if he own body was dead, has he himself died along the rest, but that was not the case. He then stood up and rushed towards the flood seeing nothing more than broken wood everywhere, corpses on the ground and some other debris and people floating in the river.He believe what just happened, he slowed up looking everywhere slowly, eyes wide opened ,stoped seeing that his village was now nothing else but logging woods and corpses under piles of everything. He runned where the river was flowing hoping to find what he lost, trying to go faster than the flow while crying
he slowed, stopped and he finally fell on his knees, crying like he never cried, cryin for his sister, now lost... A day later, still crying under a shelter build from the broken wood with the help of the half douzen of people lasting, the villager that was with him in his house a day before told him that he knew she was still alive and waiting for him to find her like he promised.
Thinking about it for a moment he stood up and asked the helped from everyone to find her. Everyone, looking at the village, if it can be called like this at that moment, agreed and packed up what survived to the storm and began the journey the day after.At dawn, he was the first woke up and they left, following the river now a little more calm.His mind were only for his dear sister Maya. Something inside Alistair was telling him that time was not bound to him. He had lost something else then his sister, but if Life was the price to pay for her, Then so be it.
I will never stop looking for her, The Chains of time do no bind me anymore.
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka. Prefers to be called Ramm. Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives. Ramm is a young man at the age of 22. He travels alone and shows no mercy to his victims. Ramm was known from his past ventures in distant lands for his various different types of poisons and his notorious eye scar. when asked about the scar Ramm is filled with deep hatred and anger. The one target that got away. When traveling Ramm is still searching for the one man while also doing his various schemes.
Character Description: Young White, Male, Brown beard and hair, 7 feet tall.
Character Quirks: Loves to look at terrain, Loves to relax and has a fear of the unknown.
Homeland: Cydrill
Character Backstory: Winton a young human had never known his parents,till he was a war orphan. At a young age he was found by a group of high elves that raised him to become a powerful warrior and a talented mage. At age 17 he went on a journey to find his past and restore his orphan parents legacy. At last he arrived to new continent to stay and rebuild his orphan parents legacy.
IGN: (Your minecraft ingame name) Farscape9, will be informed possible new name in 1.8 added name changes.
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) John Brass (Smith)
Character Race: (see below for race choices) Half Halfing, Half Human, due to races of parents.
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 26 years of age, mature as the age.
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)John is as a bit less than the size of his brother, around as big as a tall roman, which Romans are tall when it was history. He has a small beard , and wears glasses when he is examining. John is less known than his brother, because his brother is a famous blacksmith in all the land, along with 2 other great ones. John has Dirty blonde hair and shaggy hair, also a little curly. He has hazel eyes that love to look out at long distances. He also wears the usual ragged clothes farmers wear.
Character Quirks:(anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) When John and his friends are in the market, they tend to avoid the bars, because the looters are always in there. But they usually get wine and go to his house, and have a nice feast. Ever since the village was invaded by the Goblins, John has had a fear of them ever since!
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) Singarh, a land of music, wine, beer and farmland.
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.) John is a guy who almost gets into trouble, he was bullied in his school, but loved to take music, taking 1st place with his friends in their musical contest. He loves to do parkour, and do music at the same time! Then the bully came in and got smacked right back into the pub! As you probably suspected, theives like the bully tried to steal from John, but John fed them, then took them to the constable. And the thing he is known for, is for his kind deed to the elves, when in a dark time, he gave them the best supply of potatoes and apples he grew! So in return, they gave him a tool that can change its uses, a hoe, a sword, a shovel, a plow, a scoop and more! He has always dreamed of exploring lands as a kid, which is one of the things that he did when he gave the elves the food, but this adventure, he has gone on, with the supply of food that will last him only a few days... Can he set up a farm before then?
I've noticed quite a few flaws with your application backstory, although its nice and long and I do like that part of it the grammar could use some work along with "He loves to do parkour, and do music at the same time! " things like this needing to be changed to fit in with the server more. Parkour was not actually around during this time. If you can tidy up the app a bit more, make it understandable and clear then I will accept it if it seems to be alright. Not accepted
Character Description:
5 feets 8 inches, silver haired boy with dark purple eyes. Is almost always wearing dark colored clothes,
Character Quirks: mysterious with anyone, Protective to women and children. Deed Hatred against god and worshipped figures.
Homeland: a little farming village
Character Backstory:
Born in a little farming village next to a lake and a river with young parents from middle-class. As years passes his birth,something wasn't quite natural,his snow white skin was very soft and his hairs, hairs that looked like Dark silver silk Years passed again, while kids grew up as teenagers their the first time he opened his eyes his parents were amazed how his eyes were beautiful,they were a deep Ametyste purple with some blood red. Not only his parents were having a smile everytime they looked at him but the villagers were quite appreciating his appearence. Some years later another gift happened to appear in the family, a little girl, his mother gave birth to a gorgeous blue eyes blond-brown haired girl They called Her Maya. Living peacefully with his two parents and working at the farm while keeping his younger sister Maya close to him to pretect her.only 10 years later a court horseman came to their house to bring a letter for his parents saying that they were asked to become one of the high clergy members.Asking him to keep his little sister and the house for themselves with the help of other villagers, they left for the castle far away, promising they will sent them letters. Months later, everything came alright he was taking care of his sister, the house and the farm himself very efficiently but then,something happened that changed his life.
Three whole days of raining turned into a storm, a storm like nobody has saw before that day.The storm changed to be even more powerful as hours passed, he looked outside, seeing what he never though
there would be around, a tornado passing not too far from the village, he closed the curtains before the window and hid with Maya and a villager under the table. The tornado was growing stronguer, after some time the storm was worst, the door was cracking and the windows were breaking, he closed his eyes ,trying not to move. At that moment..the roof flew away, bringing the table in its charge, part of the house blew away from the power of the wind,and he felt like floating,had he opened his eyes and he was falling outside. At the same moment the villager rushed to the wall that was still there, pulling him in, himself trying to not let go from his sisters arm, whatever the strengh he had,he wouldn't have been able to do what he wanted, not at that moment.With the sounds of wind and the cries of his sister,his hold, being now hand to hand with his sister's, he knew but didn't wanted to admit, but still he promised to her, to his sister, to Maya... that everything would be okay and that he will find her no matter what and that she didn't need to worry.....
These were the last words he told her.
He woke up some time later, he felt has if he own body was dead, has he himself died along the rest, but that was not the case. He then stood up and rushed towards the flood seeing nothing more than broken wood everywhere, corpses on the ground and some other debris and people floating in the river.He believe what just happened, he slowed up looking everywhere slowly, eyes wide opened ,stoped seeing that his village was now nothing else but logging woods and corpses under piles of everything. He runned where the river was flowing hoping to find what he lost, trying to go faster than the flow while crying
he slowed, stopped and he finally fell on his knees, crying like he never cried, cryin for his sister, now lost... A day later, still crying under a shelter build from the broken wood with the help of the half douzen of people lasting, the villager that was with him in his house a day before told him that he knew she was still alive and waiting for him to find her like he promised.
Thinking about it for a moment he stood up and asked the helped from everyone to find her. Everyone, looking at the village, if it can be called like this at that moment, agreed and packed up what survived to the storm and began the journey the day after.At dawn, he was the first woke up and they left, following the river now a little more calm.His mind were only for his dear sister Maya. Something inside Alistair was telling him that time was not bound to him. He had lost something else then his sister, but if Life was the price to pay for her, Then so be it.
I will never stop looking for her, The Chains of time do no bind me anymore.
Very interesting, Very long, Very well done. Accepted
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka. Prefers to be called Ramm. Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives. Ramm is a young man at the age of 22. He travels alone and shows no mercy to his victims. Ramm was known from his past ventures in distant lands for his various different types of poisons and his notorious eye scar. when asked about the scar Ramm is filled with deep hatred and anger. The one target that got away. When traveling Ramm is still searching for the one man while also doing his various schemes.
Wildwest? Please change your backstory around a bit and repost it, then I will re-review it.
Character Description: Young White, Male, Brown beard and hair, 7 feet tall.
Character Quirks: Loves to look at terrain, Loves to relax and has a fear of the unknown.
Homeland: Cydrill
Character Backstory: Winton a young human had never known his parents,till he was a war orphan. At a young age he was found by a group of high elves that raised him to become a powerful warrior and a talented mage. At age 17 he went on a journey to find his past and restore his orphan parents legacy. At last he arrived to new continent to stay and rebuild his orphan parents legacy.
Please add more detail and reason to your backstory, for example why did the high elves raise him? Where was he when the elves found him? What is the legazy you speak of? Make some minor changes, resubmit your application and I shall review it shortly
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka. Prefers to be called Ramm. Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a dark and dreary land, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives. Ramm is a young man at the age of 22. He travels alone and shows no mercy to his victims. Ramm was known from his past ventures in distant lands for his various different types of poisons and his notorious eye scar. when asked about the scar Ramm is filled with deep hatred and anger. The one target that got away. When traveling Ramm is still searching for the one man while also doing his various schemes.
Accepted
Character Name: Martin Winterborn
Character Race: Halfling
Character Age: 24
Character Description: An average Halfling with brown hair and a beard.
Character Quirks: Gets into odd conversations.
Homeland: the character comes from a Chillendro an island which a Winterborn can only enter.
Character Backstory: After failing a ritual Martin Winterborn was banished from his home. Starting a new life as a farmer in order to hide his shame.
Please extend your backstory and add more detail to it, that would be great! thanks!
Character Name: Talfryne Eli (Goes by Eli)
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 22
Character Description:
A rather rough looking man, Eli tends to keep to himself. His voice is deep and scratchy, matching his appearance rather well. Underneath the hard, intimidating furrowed brow and sandpaper cheeks lies many tender secrets, locked away from the world's ever piercing eyes. Even though he prefers a peaceful lifestyle, he will protect himself when in danger. He is a skilled workman, proficient in mining and construction, as well as farming and raising livestock. One may often see Eli in a marketplace, selling his surplus resources.
Character Quirks:
Although strong and independent, Eli has a fear of dying alone that occasionally tingles in the back of his thoughts. He also has a soft spot for children and may make irrational decisions in the possibility of protecting them from danger. He secretly wishes to have his own child someday.
Homeland: Erinn, the "Paradise" land, overrun and destroyed by a dark race of monsters.
Character Backstory:
On a crisp Autumn morning, a baby is born.. Unfortunately, not in the comfort of a farm on a sunny hillside. The child is birthed, wrapped in a crude blanket, then left in the back room of a moldy, run-down inn. Attached to the baby is a crumpled note that reads, "My name is Talfryne." The parents are nowhere to be found, and are completely unknown. Leave it to the widowed seamstress to find the abandoned baby on a quiet, fateful evening.
Fast forward a few years, young Talfryne Eli lives a privileged life under the roof of wealthy Nora Eli, in the town Dunbarton. The news that she had found the baby escalated from "The poor woman found a baby" to "The brave woman rescued the helpless baby from certain doom!". This had given her much attention, and she was able to earn a modest fortune. She's even made robes for some of the King's officials! Little Talfryne Eli recieved a strong education, and learned many helpful skills for living independently.
As Talfryne grew, he eventually became curious about his biological parents. The story that he had been abandoned stabbed and tore his heart like ten swords to a tomato. He learned that if it wasn't for Nora, Talfryne may have never been found, and would have died. Talfryne couldn't handle the facts, and stopped going by his birth name, instead going by his given last name. As time passed, Eli became tolerant of his origins, but kept using the name Eli. He's not entirely sure why.
On a clear, Winter night, a shrill scream slices through the frosted air. Eli, now 19, shoots out of bed in instant alarm. He rushes to his mother's room, and finds a dark figure looming over her bed. It turns slowly, glaring at Eli with piercing, icy blue eyes. Blood drips from its mouth onto the floor and Eli bolts away. The creature belts out a hideous roar and chases after the boy. Through the snow and ice and without shoes, Eli dashes through the streets of Dunbarton, winding through alleys and streets and through the plazas, only to find more creatures, seemingly at every turn. A few soldiers emerge from a tavern and rush after the creatures. The blue-eyed creature grabs Eli's foot and dangles him helplessly in the chilly air. With another hideous roar, Eli blacks out.
He wakes with a jump and a shout, breathing heavily, eyes darting around. He's in a bedroom at the tavern. Music plays on the other side of the door, and a solemn collective mumble hovers in the air. Eli leaves the room and finds a few of the soldiers, and they explain that this wasn't that first attack. Many towns have been attacked in past months. Eli tells the soldier that his mother had been killed, and he barely escaped, and the soldier, named Ranald, offers to bring Eli to his home to train him. Eli agrees.
For a few years, Eli trains for the army. He hones his skills with a sword and bow, and also learns key survival skills, such as finding resources and building shelter. However, after Eli's first real battle as a soldier, he decides that he isn't mentally capable of dealing with the effects of war, and leaves without so much as a goodbye. Using the life skills he learned from Nora, and the battle skills he learned from Ranald, Eli boarded the next ship to the distant land of Aldeiron. Even now, he regrets not saying goodbye or giving his thanks to Ranald. However, now he's stuck in a completely foreign world, now on the verge of war, with no money or goals. But he's not looking back.
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) fearnor falassion
Character Race: (see below for race choices) drow
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 22
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)
Tall thin figure with long brown hair and acts a bit strange around other people is socially awkward and is very unpredictable in most situations
Character Quirks: (anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) dislikes water, fast runner, loves farms
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) ollmoss
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.)
fearnor falassion was born and raised in the small village of olmoss where he had a loving family and many good friends. When he became of age fearnor went out into the dark forests that surrounded ollmoss to kill a giant spider with his still developing magic to prove he was indeed a true drow of the village.
After 2 weeks in the deep dark forest he managed to kill a giant spider and return its head to his village. fearnor falassion returned to his beloved village to find it had been raided there seemed to be no survivors. fearnor now wonders the world in search for his family or friends who he hope is still alive.
Although a few spelling mistakes I really like this application, it pulled on a few heartstrings with the first bit of the backstory and from there progressed quite well! Very Good. Accepted!
Backstory could use some work, Although its a good start. Accepted
Character Name: Thadox Grimswalt
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 20
Character Description: Thadox is your typical 20 year old male Human. Standing around 5'10",Thadox is usualy very melancholy. Thadox loves to Build structures.
Character Quirks: socially awkward, arachnophobia
Homeland: Trade District, Stormwind City, Eastern Kingdoms (Thadox is actually the name of my lvl 90 DK in WOW)
Character Backstory: Thadox was once the king of the eastern kingdoms go to guy, he was a dragon hunter,blacksmith,and a miner. he has killed many people to protect those who look to him for protection.
Please look into extending your backstory, adding more detail and reason to it. Not Accepted sorry.
Character Name: Mehrunez
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 26
Character Description: Flowing black hair and blue, faded eyes. 7 feet 4 inches tall and very defined muscles. A large scar runs down his entire left arm.
Character Quirks: a photographic memory and a keen sense to pick up on things quickly. Yet, a seldom speaker.
Homeland: Qordonia
Character Backstory: From the time he was 10, Mehrunez was fascinated with weapons. His father, a Qordonian soldier was killed in battle. His mom, a servant to the cruel king, Marazak, gets along on meager wages. She has not enough to pay for only pork chops and a shady bungalow, with enough room for only a pig to reside. One day Mehrunez was taken to the castle of Marazak with his mother. Once inside he went off under the permission of Marazak himself. However, he wondered into lost, forgotten corridors and eventually to an old escape route below the castles quarters. He found racks of weapons and chain linked armor. He fought hordes of undead, to claim the amulets of the highest powers, The Verivan. Said to be the amulet of the first ruler over Qordonia, it contained the power to turn a child into a fierce ruler and soldier. Mehrunez had turned into exactly this, killed Marazak and is now, the ruler of Qordonia.
Accepted
Character Name: Rammler Starlia
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 22
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka.
Prefers to be called Ramm.
Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives.
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Character Name: Brenden Custer
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 8
Character Description: Hes a 8 years old Outlaw , He is the son of the famous Austin Custer Warlord of Onyx. In Dangerous Situations he pretty much just cowers in fear and runs away. He is extremely smart for a kid and can last hit minions.
Character Quirks: He tends to yell alot
Homeland: Kingdom of Onyx
Character Backstory: His parents died from aids when he was 7, leaving him to live in the streets of Onyx on his own. A local gang took over his parents house forcing him out on the street. He managed to survive by picking pockets and stealing from local vendors. He stole a trinket from Dylan Valka, once famous actor/bard/adventurer in a well known theater troupe who was now slowly drinking himself to death. Seeing potential in the boy, Dylan made a deal; he would teach the boy everything he knew; how to read, use a sword, play an instrument, and use costumes and misdirection in exchange for keeping him in the drunk.
Brenden spent weeks hunting the thugs down and murdered each one. The first was killed when he pushed him off of the docks with an anchor tied around his foot. The second was dragged along the cobblestone streets of the city behind a horse drawn carriage. The last one, the ring leader was killed when he tried to flee the city. Brenden tracked him down, overpowered him, and then raped and killed him, All of this just after turning 8. He then thought it was time to leave the city of onyx and see and explore the war as an outlaw.
Character Name: Kagalano
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 29
Character Description: Tall build, clumsy, strong, athletic, and noisy
Character Quirks: Whistles to everything, flinches every 10 seconds, sleeps with a blankey
Homeland: Ragnarok
Character Backstory: Nok Flameborn Kagalano was the first Goliath of his tribe born free from the oppression of the red dragon Vaznerakoth. The dragon had enslaved the tribe for as long as even the elders could remember, until a fateful meteor came streaking down and slew him atop the mountain he had claimed. A fire shall forever burn where Vaz's body lies as if the flame were the tombstone of this once great being.
After that, Nok's tribe began to pseudo-worship the rock. They emulated its fall from the heavens with their combat technique, and even developed skills to harness the flame that had touched them all.
Though they were free, the tribe was not destined to survive. The dragon had left them with too few numbers to repopulate. As Nok laid the last elder to rest, he began a quest to search for another tribe, and to liberate all who were held captive by any and all draconic rulers.
Fast forward to the campaign. The group has just landed on the docks of a city under attack by undead. After scanning the horizon for the source, Nok spotted the black dragon necromancer who was creating the undead army. With a bestial roar and murder in his eyes, Nok sprang to the rooftops and chased after the dragon with the cleric-polymorphed-troll following close behind.
One of Nok's flaws was that he would auto-rage against anything draconic. He could make a save to avoid it against drakes, half dragons, etc. But true dragons made him fly out of control without question.
After Nok got to the tower, the dragon took off into the air. With an assisted jump and more than a little luck, Nok grabbed a hold of the the dragon's ankle and began the most epic grapple battle I have ever witnessed. Nearly 10 rounds of back-and forth had Nok with the upper hand. He pinned the dragon's wings to its body, sending them both hurtling towards the ground.
The few short moments before the duo hit the ground, Nok smiled. His grimace of rage became peaceful parting of his lips. He was the destroyer of dragons. He was the fire of the heavens. He had become the meteor.
Please expand your back story and then you will be accepted
Accepted, welcome to Chivalrous!
Accepted, welcome to Chivalrous!
Character Name: (example: Hue Maulzack) John Brass (Smith)
Character Race: (see below for race choices) Half Halfing, Half Human, due to races of parents.
Character Age: (see below for race life spans) 26 years of age, mature as the age.
Character Description: ( what they look and act like along with what they often do in situations)John is as a bit less than the size of his brother, around as big as a tall roman, which Romans are tall when it was history. He has a small beard , and wears glasses when he is examining. John is less known than his brother, because his brother is a famous blacksmith in all the land, along with 2 other great ones. John has Dirty blonde hair and shaggy hair, also a little curly. He has hazel eyes that love to look out at long distances. He also wears the usual ragged clothes farmers wear.
Character Quirks: (anything from a strange battlecry to a fear of spiders) When John and his friends are in the market, they tend to avoid the bars, because the looters are always in there. But they usually get wine and go to his house, and have a nice feast. Ever since the village was invaded by the Goblins, John has had a fear of them ever since!
Homeland: (A made-up land in which you came from before joining this server) Singarh, a land of music, wine, beer and farmland.
Character Backstory: (no set size, but we expect it to be longer than one sentence.) John is a guy who almost gets into trouble, he was bullied in his school, but loved to take music, taking 1st place with his friends in their musical contest. He loves to do parkour, and do music at the same time! Then the bully came in and got smacked right back into the pub! As you probably suspected, theives like the bully tried to steal from John, but John fed them, then took them to the constable. And the thing he is known for, is for his kind deed to the elves, when in a dark time, he gave them the best supply of potatoes and apples he grew! So in return, they gave him a tool that can change its uses, a hoe, a sword, a shovel, a plow, a scoop and more! He has always dreamed of exploring lands as a kid, which is one of the things that he did when he gave the elves the food, but this adventure, he has gone on, with the supply of food that will last him only a few days... Can he set up a farm before then?
Character Name: Alistair Grey
Character Race: Damphir
Character Age: 16
Character Description:
5 feets 8 inches, silver haired boy with dark purple eyes. Is almost always wearing dark colored clothes,
Character Quirks: mysterious with anyone, Protective to women and children. Deed Hatred against god and worshipped figures.
Homeland: a little farming village
Character Backstory:
Born in a little farming village next to a lake and a river with young parents from middle-class. As years passes his birth,something wasn't quite natural,his snow white skin was very soft and his hairs, hairs that looked like Dark silver silk Years passed again, while kids grew up as teenagers their the first time he opened his eyes his parents were amazed how his eyes were beautiful,they were a deep Ametyste purple with some blood red. Not only his parents were having a smile everytime they looked at him but the villagers were quite appreciating his appearence. Some years later another gift happened to appear in the family, a little girl, his mother gave birth to a gorgeous blue eyes blond-brown haired girl They called Her Maya. Living peacefully with his two parents and working at the farm while keeping his younger sister Maya close to him to pretect her.only 10 years later a court horseman came to their house to bring a letter for his parents saying that they were asked to become one of the high clergy members.Asking him to keep his little sister and the house for themselves with the help of other villagers, they left for the castle far away, promising they will sent them letters. Months later, everything came alright he was taking care of his sister, the house and the farm himself very efficiently but then,something happened that changed his life.
Three whole days of raining turned into a storm, a storm like nobody has saw before that day.The storm changed to be even more powerful as hours passed, he looked outside, seeing what he never though
there would be around, a tornado passing not too far from the village, he closed the curtains before the window and hid with Maya and a villager under the table. The tornado was growing stronguer, after some time the storm was worst, the door was cracking and the windows were breaking, he closed his eyes ,trying not to move. At that moment..the roof flew away, bringing the table in its charge, part of the house blew away from the power of the wind,and he felt like floating,had he opened his eyes and he was falling outside. At the same moment the villager rushed to the wall that was still there, pulling him in, himself trying to not let go from his sisters arm, whatever the strengh he had,he wouldn't have been able to do what he wanted, not at that moment.With the sounds of wind and the cries of his sister,his hold, being now hand to hand with his sister's, he knew but didn't wanted to admit, but still he promised to her, to his sister, to Maya... that everything would be okay and that he will find her no matter what and that she didn't need to worry.....
These were the last words he told her.
He woke up some time later, he felt has if he own body was dead, has he himself died along the rest, but that was not the case. He then stood up and rushed towards the flood seeing nothing more than broken wood everywhere, corpses on the ground and some other debris and people floating in the river.He believe what just happened, he slowed up looking everywhere slowly, eyes wide opened ,stoped seeing that his village was now nothing else but logging woods and corpses under piles of everything. He runned where the river was flowing hoping to find what he lost, trying to go faster than the flow while crying
he slowed, stopped and he finally fell on his knees, crying like he never cried, cryin for his sister, now lost... A day later, still crying under a shelter build from the broken wood with the help of the half douzen of people lasting, the villager that was with him in his house a day before told him that he knew she was still alive and waiting for him to find her like he promised.
Thinking about it for a moment he stood up and asked the helped from everyone to find her. Everyone, looking at the village, if it can be called like this at that moment, agreed and packed up what survived to the storm and began the journey the day after.At dawn, he was the first woke up and they left, following the river now a little more calm.His mind were only for his dear sister Maya. Something inside Alistair was telling him that time was not bound to him. He had lost something else then his sister, but if Life was the price to pay for her, Then so be it.
I will never stop looking for her, The Chains of time do no bind me anymore.
Character Name: Rammler Starlia
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 22
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka.
Prefers to be called Ramm.
Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a wild west place, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives. Ramm is a young man at the age of 22. He travels alone and shows no mercy to his victims. Ramm was known from his past ventures in distant lands for his various different types of poisons and his notorious eye scar. when asked about the scar Ramm is filled with deep hatred and anger. The one target that got away. When traveling Ramm is still searching for the one man while also doing his various schemes.
Character Name: Winton Sinjin
Character Race: Haman
Character Age: 24
Character Description: Young White, Male, Brown beard and hair, 7 feet tall.
Character Quirks: Loves to look at terrain, Loves to relax and has a fear of the unknown.
Homeland: Cydrill
Character Backstory: Winton a young human had never known his parents,till he was a war orphan. At a young age he was found by a group of high elves that raised him to become a powerful warrior and a talented mage. At age 17 he went on a journey to find his past and restore his orphan parents legacy. At last he arrived to new continent to stay and rebuild his orphan parents legacy.
I've noticed quite a few flaws with your application backstory, although its nice and long and I do like that part of it the grammar could use some work along with "He loves to do parkour, and do music at the same time! " things like this needing to be changed to fit in with the server more. Parkour was not actually around during this time. If you can tidy up the app a bit more, make it understandable and clear then I will accept it if it seems to be alright. Not accepted
Very interesting, Very long, Very well done. Accepted
Wildwest? Please change your backstory around a bit and repost it, then I will re-review it.
Please add more detail and reason to your backstory, for example why did the high elves raise him? Where was he when the elves found him? What is the legazy you speak of? Make some minor changes, resubmit your application and I shall review it shortly
Character Name: Rammler Starlia
Character Race: Human
Character Age: 22
Character Description: Rammler is an assassin that prefers that he is not to be known by his physical appearance, but the fear he puts into the lives arounds.
Character Quirks: Hates Soraka.
Prefers to be called Ramm.
Loves to burn the blood of his victims.
Homeland: A wild wild west place where he has written multiple applications prior to this.
Character Backstory: Born in a dark and dreary land, Rammler got bored of the easy kills in this land. He left the wild west and searched for an adventure outside of his known homeland. Traveling around Rammler assassinated rich political figures, former ally men, well known warriors, very wealthy relic hunters, and any foe. He comes to this land to challenge the most worthy possible foe. As stated Ramm prefers not to be told of his physical appearance, but to be known by the fear he puts in men's lives. Ramm is a young man at the age of 22. He travels alone and shows no mercy to his victims. Ramm was known from his past ventures in distant lands for his various different types of poisons and his notorious eye scar. when asked about the scar Ramm is filled with deep hatred and anger. The one target that got away. When traveling Ramm is still searching for the one man while also doing his various schemes.