Hello my name is ian5019 and i would love to join your server..
The Reason why i would love to join your server is because i love to interact with other players and have a good time.. I also love to make friends and i am very respectful to players, staff, ect. I love to build, and LOVE to have fun. i may be a bit talkative at some times but thats just because I'm weird.. and its true.. I have also enjoyed watching videos about this server with my siblings.
I am skilled at pvp and talented with building. I would be more than happy to help any player with anything. I like to be funny and i am very nice and respectful to all players. I don't swear much and i love small servers such as this one.. i can be sarcastic at times and act weird.. Anywho, i have played mine craft for almost 4 yrs now so i have more than enough experience and i like to break up fights (weird, right?)
5 Random Facts
1. I Love crackers and cheese.
2. I like to skateboard
3. I am very weird
4. im in 7th grade
5. I own a mac osx and is surprisingly amazing for running minecraft
If adventurous, you have the right to build and live in public thematic maps such as the Cheese
Quest house, provided your habitation positively contributes to, rather than negatively impacts, the
thematic value of the map. I have chosen this because its a good reminder that players should respect other players along with their home.
Cheese = Money
Well, on the other forum I usually can edit quotations in easily, but it's late, my fuse is short, and this quotation system is especially bothersome. So, double-post!
Anywho, on to your actual app... which, just a heads up, will need a re-do. But I'll narrow things down for you so you aren't left to guessing.
Your reason to join our server specifically basically just boils down to, 'you enjoyed our videos'. While that's great, it'd be nice if you had a more solid reason for sticking around. If another Gulliver server popped up and suddenly got popular, why would you still stick around with us?
As for your next answer about skills, it's pretty good. Though I do want to clarify that, depending on what you consider 'small', our server is anything but. Well, okay, having 10-12 players is considered 'crowded', but there are a lot of players that just come on at different times, since our community comes, quite literally, from around the world. Also, considering your habit of breaking up fights, do not be a vigilante - that will probably get you in trouble. Just gather evidence (especially times. Those are very useful for when we look through the server logs), and contact the staff via forum or PM.
Anywho, on to your facts! Which... well, are kind of short. If you think -really- hard, I think you could squeeze a couple more words into the first four, and maybe give a precise explanation of what kind of 'weird' you are, for fact 3. We've run into several kinds of weird, and while you don't seem like the bad kind... it'd be nice to know for sure. ^^;
Ooh, your Right/Responsibility section is basically perfect! Nice ^^
Aaaand naturally, you got the currency right
So, just read through all that, revamp what needs revamping, and also try to work on your app's formatting. Adding a number above each answer in bold, and quoting the original question in bold really helps make it easier to read the thing, and makes it pretty, too.
Once you get all, or most (but preferably all, please :3 ), of that down you should be clear for a whitelist ^^
Hello my name is ian5019 and i would love to join your server..
The Reason why i would love to join your server is because i love to interact with other players and have a good time.. I also love to make friends and i am very respectful to players, staff, ect. I love to build, and LOVE to have fun. i may be a bit talkative at some times but thats just because I'm weird.. and its true.. I have also enjoyed watching videos about this server with my siblings.
I am skilled at pvp and talented with building. I would be more than happy to help any player with anything. I like to be funny and i am very nice and respectful to all players. I don't swear much and i love small servers such as this one.. i can be sarcastic at times and act weird.. Anywho, i have played mine craft for almost 4 yrs now so i have more than enough experience and i like to break up fights (weird, right?)
5 Random Facts
1. I Love crackers and cheese.
2. I like to skateboard
3. I am very weird
4. im in 7th grade
5. I own a mac osx and is surprisingly amazing for running minecraft
If adventurous, you have the right to build and live in public thematic maps such as the Cheese
Quest house, provided your habitation positively contributes to, rather than negatively impacts, the
thematic value of the map. I have chosen this because its a good reminder that players should respect other players along with their home.
Cheese = Money
Well, on the other forum I usually can edit quotations in easily, but it's late, my fuse is short, and this quotation system is especially bothersome. So, double-post!
Anywho, on to your actual app... which, just a heads up, will need a re-do. But I'll narrow things down for you so you aren't left to guessing.
Your reason to join our server specifically basically just boils down to, 'you enjoyed our videos'. While that's great, it'd be nice if you had a more solid reason for sticking around. If another Gulliver server popped up and suddenly got popular, why would you still stick around with us?
As for your next answer about skills, it's pretty good. Though I do want to clarify that, depending on what you consider 'small', our server is anything but. Well, okay, having 10-12 players is considered 'crowded', but there are a lot of players that just come on at different times, since our community comes, quite literally, from around the world. Also, considering your habit of breaking up fights, do not be a vigilante - that will probably get you in trouble. Just gather evidence (especially times. Those are very useful for when we look through the server logs), and contact the staff via forum or PM.
Anywho, on to your facts! Which... well, are kind of short. If you think -really- hard, I think you could squeeze a couple more words into the first four, and maybe give a precise explanation of what kind of 'weird' you are, for fact 3. We've run into several kinds of weird, and while you don't seem like the bad kind... it'd be nice to know for sure. ^^;
Ooh, your Right/Responsibility section is basically perfect! Nice ^^
Aaaand naturally, you got the currency right
So, just read through all that, revamp what needs revamping, and also try to work on your app's formatting. Adding a number above each answer in bold, and quoting the original question in bold really helps make it easier to read the thing, and makes it pretty, too.
Once you get all, or most (but preferably all, please :3 ), of that down you should be clear for a whitelist ^^
-BurgerWarrior, Whitelisting Moderator Extraordinaire
2. I saw your trailer, and i just wanted to join the fun straight away, i always wanted to be on a modded server
3. People tell me im a really nice person, maybe i could help somebody out if they need some help,also im a really good builder, i'd be happy to build stuff for the server
4. Im a very smart pupil (6th class) im preety good in the kitchen, making salads I show love to animals, Hamsters in perticular Im a very fast runner, fastest in my school i LOVE helping poeple out, i dont know how some people just hate others
5. I like the gulliver mod because it works so nice in multiplayer, it would be nice to feel a powerless little thing, and have someone care for me, but also feel so powerful, and huge
6. The currency is cheese (i laughed so hard when i saw that)
Other servers i was on banned me beacause of someone else, please let me say something before you ban me if there is a situation like that
-Adamsuper2002
Dear Adamsuper, after a review of you app, I could tell it needs work, questions 2 and 3 need to be 60-90 words, number four would be better if you formatted it like:
Fact one
Fact two
Fact three
Fact four
Fact five
5 looks like you had no knowledge of what the question is asking, I'm sorry but it's the truth
And six is correct
Servers, as in multiple, well, here you get to give an input, but, it could be dangerous to let you on.
Please rethink if this server is right for you, we have a strict whitelist process... kinda... not really, but you need to take your time, I promise the server is not as strict as this phase, but really think if the server is right for you, good day.
What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")? 1.Hello my name is ian5019 and i would love to join your server..
Please explain why you would like to join the Server 2.The Reason why i would love to join your server is because i love to interact with other players and have a good time.. I also love to make friends and i am very respectful to players, staff, ect. I love to build, and LOVE to have fun. i may be a bit talkative at some times but thats just because I'm weird.. and its true.. I have also enjoyed watching videos with my siblings and some of my friends. But, unlike me, most people just leave after a few days but i always like to accomplish ALOT before i wrap things up and move on but it happens to mostly every body at one point of playing.
Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server. 3.I am skilled at pvp and talented with building. I would be more than happy to help any player with anything. I like to be funny and i am very nice and respectful to all players. I don't swear much and i love small groups of different people such your server has.. i can be sarcastic at times and act weird.. Anywho, i have played minecraft for almost 4 yrs now so i have more than enough experience and i can solve problems, explore, survive, and create with whoever is willing to with me.
Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players. 5. Random Facts
1. I Love crackers and cheese, along with grapes, crab, shrimp, and artichoke dip. (which isn't a very good combination for most people :P)
2. I like to skateboard with my friends and watch movies such as sharknado and pawn stars.
3. I like to act weird with my friends and sometimes my family because i don't know
4.I also like to go to the beach with my friends and go surfing, and body surfing. Oh, and also love going to the pool with family/friends.
5. I own a mac osx and is surprisingly amazing for running minecraft and mods (such as gulliver)
To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most 6.If adventurous, you have the right to build and live in public thematic maps such as the Cheese
Quest house, provided your habitation positively contributes to, rather than negatively impacts, the
thematic value of the map. I have chosen this because its a good reminder that players should respect other players along with their home.
And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Cheese = Money
Well, you didn't quite edit things as I thought you would, but I think I have a better idea of what your character is regardless, and everything more or less checks out now, so... welcome to the server, Ian! ^^ (And try not to get in trouble )
Im so sorry, am I allowed to try again, because I really want to join?
And am i sopposed to have gulliver mod instaled, or do i just need forge?
-Adamsuper2002
You are most definitely required to install the mod before applying, yes. We have 268 registered users, but about a third of those are pure fillers... people who applied and never ever signed on, thus using up valuable whitelist space. Id like to minimize the number of people doing that.
2.I saw your trailer, and I just wanted to join the fun straight away, I always wanted to be on a modded server. And I'd be nice to make new friends
3.Im a very nice person, if in need i could help out somebody, or make someone feel better, if they were griefed or something like that. Im also a very good builder, I could build lots of nice things for the server like a big house for all those huge giants! That way I'd be helping both the poeple on the server and the server itself (Helpception)
4.Im a very smart pupil, I can come up with awesome ideas. I have a LOT of patience. that could be used for a multitude of things, such as, cutting trees, digging for diamonds, building a massive house, and many more. Im very good building, with a very creative mind, unfortunatly im not very good at pvp or fighting mobs, but i can createnice mob traps with redstone, because I'm AWESOME at redstone!
5.For the rights section my favorite would have to be Number 5 which says: If tiny you are allowed to make yourself a home in the spawnington sewers As for responsibilites my favorite is Number 21 whick says: I have to help other novices when they start playing the server with no knowledge. As i stated in Q3 I love helping
6.The money is CHESSE!! (How did you come up with that?!)
This is an upgraded version of my old app so I hope you like it (I read everything twicw over)
And thanks in advance if you let me join!
Dear Adamsuper
here is your updated review for your updated app
======
Question 1: 2002 was a good year
Question 2: Oh dear, it's still too short, you have more explaining to do.
Question 3: It's nice to have helpful players, and I'm glad your one of them this server is a place somebody can escape to when down, so cheering them up would be appreciated
Question 4: You seem to be good at quite a few things, and it's good that you do well with redstone (I don't ):) and for this server you don't need to be good at PVP.
Question 5: Yes, that is a very nice right.
Question 6: Correct, and the server this server is the sister to's owner thought of it, and made sure we read the rules by making us say "I like cheese"
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Status Denied please fix number two, and you may be whitelisted, have a good day.
I would reapply, but already I am not allowed to reapply
Never with that defeatist attitude, and certainly not after unapologetically-bashing our server and my staff the page before. You had a chance to learn from your mistakes, swallow some pride, and fix your application, but didn't -- instead, you mope around like a sore loser expecting some sympathy, and you won't get it so long as you do what you're doing now. Even if we did let you in, you're only demonstrating to us that you'll feel very unhappy and miserable there very quickly, and you'll possibly wreck in some way as a result, so we're simply doing both of us a favor.
Now if you disagree, put some effort into proving otherwise.
Oh yessir, right away sir, your cracked Minecraft makes you mighty and privileged. In addition to disabling our whitelist and allowing you into our server without an application, we will also kick out all our existing players to make your stay more comfy AND we will make you Op, and treat you like our new owner and king and Dear Leader.
But that's not all! Order now and you'll receive TWO FREE SERVERS for the price of one!!!! That's TWO FREE SERVERS!!
And as an added bonus, we'll throw in $1,000,000 worth of cheese, and your very own tropical island populated by hermit crabs.
1. My MC username is avaprimeau2, 2. I really like the gullivers mod and being on a server with this mod seem's so fun ^-^ and i would be on the server everyday if possible :3, 3. (sorry idk how to talk about this one) besides me having alot of friends 4. I luv making statues of players and i am an artist irl and in-game, and i am interested in mythical creatures (Dragons) , and i always play minecraft, and i love cats i have a Himalayan cat :3 5. i like the first paragraph
NOTE: This is my first post on this site so i'm sorry if i didn't write much and i hope i will be able to come on the server
1. My MC username is avaprimeau2, 2. I really like the gullivers mod and being on a server with this mod seem's so fun ^-^ and i would be on the server everyday if possible :3, 3. (sorry idk how to talk about this one) besides me having alot of friends 4. I luv making statues of players and i am an artist irl and in-game, and i am interested in mythical creatures (Dragons) , and i always play minecraft, and i love cats i have a Himalayan cat :3 5. i like the first paragraph
NOTE: This is my first post on this site so i'm sorry if i didn't write much and i hope i will be able to come on the server
Hello.
You can do more than "hope", you can actually "rry" to write a full application based on the application instructions on the main page. As it stands, your writeup is not a valid application and it even omits some questions, so all it shows me is that you're not as interested in joining us as you say you are.
Well, on the other forum I usually can edit quotations in easily, but it's late, my fuse is short, and this quotation system is especially bothersome. So, double-post!
Anywho, on to your actual app... which, just a heads up, will need a re-do. But I'll narrow things down for you so you aren't left to guessing.
Your reason to join our server specifically basically just boils down to, 'you enjoyed our videos'. While that's great, it'd be nice if you had a more solid reason for sticking around. If another Gulliver server popped up and suddenly got popular, why would you still stick around with us?
As for your next answer about skills, it's pretty good. Though I do want to clarify that, depending on what you consider 'small', our server is anything but. Well, okay, having 10-12 players is considered 'crowded', but there are a lot of players that just come on at different times, since our community comes, quite literally, from around the world. Also, considering your habit of breaking up fights, do not be a vigilante - that will probably get you in trouble. Just gather evidence (especially times. Those are very useful for when we look through the server logs), and contact the staff via forum or PM.
Anywho, on to your facts! Which... well, are kind of short. If you think -really- hard, I think you could squeeze a couple more words into the first four, and maybe give a precise explanation of what kind of 'weird' you are, for fact 3. We've run into several kinds of weird, and while you don't seem like the bad kind... it'd be nice to know for sure. ^^;
Ooh, your Right/Responsibility section is basically perfect! Nice ^^
Aaaand naturally, you got the currency right
So, just read through all that, revamp what needs revamping, and also try to work on your app's formatting. Adding a number above each answer in bold, and quoting the original question in bold really helps make it easier to read the thing, and makes it pretty, too.
Once you get all, or most (but preferably all, please :3 ), of that down you should be clear for a whitelist ^^
Well, on the other forum I usually can edit quotations in easily, but it's late, my fuse is short, and this quotation system is especially bothersome. So, double-post!
Anywho, on to your actual app... which, just a heads up, will need a re-do. But I'll narrow things down for you so you aren't left to guessing.
Your reason to join our server specifically basically just boils down to, 'you enjoyed our videos'. While that's great, it'd be nice if you had a more solid reason for sticking around. If another Gulliver server popped up and suddenly got popular, why would you still stick around with us?
As for your next answer about skills, it's pretty good. Though I do want to clarify that, depending on what you consider 'small', our server is anything but. Well, okay, having 10-12 players is considered 'crowded', but there are a lot of players that just come on at different times, since our community comes, quite literally, from around the world. Also, considering your habit of breaking up fights, do not be a vigilante - that will probably get you in trouble. Just gather evidence (especially times. Those are very useful for when we look through the server logs), and contact the staff via forum or PM.
Anywho, on to your facts! Which... well, are kind of short. If you think -really- hard, I think you could squeeze a couple more words into the first four, and maybe give a precise explanation of what kind of 'weird' you are, for fact 3. We've run into several kinds of weird, and while you don't seem like the bad kind... it'd be nice to know for sure. ^^;
Ooh, your Right/Responsibility section is basically perfect! Nice ^^
Aaaand naturally, you got the currency right
So, just read through all that, revamp what needs revamping, and also try to work on your app's formatting. Adding a number above each answer in bold, and quoting the original question in bold really helps make it easier to read the thing, and makes it pretty, too.
Once you get all, or most (but preferably all, please :3 ), of that down you should be clear for a whitelist ^^
-BurgerWarrior, Whitelisting Moderator Extraordinaire
Dear Adamsuper, after a review of you app, I could tell it needs work, questions 2 and 3 need to be 60-90 words, number four would be better if you formatted it like:
Fact one
Fact two
Fact three
Fact four
Fact five
5 looks like you had no knowledge of what the question is asking, I'm sorry but it's the truth
And six is correct
Servers, as in multiple, well, here you get to give an input, but, it could be dangerous to let you on.
Please rethink if this server is right for you, we have a strict whitelist process... kinda... not really, but you need to take your time, I promise the server is not as strict as this phase, but really think if the server is right for you, good day.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
1.Hello my name is ian5019 and i would love to join your server..
Please explain why you would like to join the Server
2.The Reason why i would love to join your server is because i love to interact with other players and have a good time.. I also love to make friends and i am very respectful to players, staff, ect. I love to build, and LOVE to have fun. i may be a bit talkative at some times but thats just because I'm weird.. and its true.. I have also enjoyed watching videos with my siblings and some of my friends. But, unlike me, most people just leave after a few days but i always like to accomplish ALOT before i wrap things up and move on but it happens to mostly every body at one point of playing.
Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
3.I am skilled at pvp and talented with building. I would be more than happy to help any player with anything. I like to be funny and i am very nice and respectful to all players. I don't swear much and i love small groups of different people such your server has.. i can be sarcastic at times and act weird.. Anywho, i have played minecraft for almost 4 yrs now so i have more than enough experience and i can solve problems, explore, survive, and create with whoever is willing to with me.
Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
5. Random Facts
1. I Love crackers and cheese, along with grapes, crab, shrimp, and artichoke dip. (which isn't a very good combination for most people :P)
2. I like to skateboard with my friends and watch movies such as sharknado and pawn stars.
3. I like to act weird with my friends and sometimes my family because i don't know
4.I also like to go to the beach with my friends and go surfing, and body surfing. Oh, and also love going to the pool with family/friends.
5. I own a mac osx and is surprisingly amazing for running minecraft and mods (such as gulliver)
To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most
6.If adventurous, you have the right to build and live in public thematic maps such as the Cheese
Quest house, provided your habitation positively contributes to, rather than negatively impacts, the
thematic value of the map. I have chosen this because its a good reminder that players should respect other players along with their home.
And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide please write down the name of the official server currency.
Cheese = Money
You are most definitely required to install the mod before applying, yes. We have 268 registered users, but about a third of those are pure fillers... people who applied and never ever signed on, thus using up valuable whitelist space. Id like to minimize the number of people doing that.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Hello Ian, can you confirm your username?
ian5019
Let me know if you're still having problems accessing our server.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
Dear Adamsuper
here is your updated review for your updated app
======
Question 1: 2002 was a good year
Question 2: Oh dear, it's still too short, you have more explaining to do.
Question 3: It's nice to have helpful players, and I'm glad your one of them this server is a place somebody can escape to when down, so cheering them up would be appreciated
Question 4: You seem to be good at quite a few things, and it's good that you do well with redstone (I don't ):) and for this server you don't need to be good at PVP.
Question 5: Yes, that is a very nice right.
Question 6: Correct, and the server this server is the sister to's owner thought of it, and made sure we read the rules by making us say "I like cheese"
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Status Denied please fix number two, and you may be whitelisted, have a good day.
GENERATION 36: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature
on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment.
[SSSS]
Never with that defeatist attitude, and certainly not after unapologetically-bashing our server and my staff the page before. You had a chance to learn from your mistakes, swallow some pride, and fix your application, but didn't -- instead, you mope around like a sore loser expecting some sympathy, and you won't get it so long as you do what you're doing now. Even if we did let you in, you're only demonstrating to us that you'll feel very unhappy and miserable there very quickly, and you'll possibly wreck in some way as a result, so we're simply doing both of us a favor.
Now if you disagree, put some effort into proving otherwise.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
But that's not all! Order now and you'll receive TWO FREE SERVERS for the price of one!!!! That's TWO FREE SERVERS!!
And as an added bonus, we'll throw in $1,000,000 worth of cheese, and your very own tropical island populated by hermit crabs.
ORDER TODAY!!! XD
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla
(I have been offline for awhile due to business and YCP obsession. I should get on more...)
NOTE: This is my first post on this site so i'm sorry if i didn't write much and i hope i will be able to come on the server
Hello.
You can do more than "hope", you can actually "rry" to write a full application based on the application instructions on the main page. As it stands, your writeup is not a valid application and it even omits some questions, so all it shows me is that you're not as interested in joining us as you say you are.
Retired owner of the Big Sister Minecraft Server:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/servers/pc-servers/2840492-big-sister-minecraft-server-whitelisted-vanilla