OOC: IGN: FireBathz Age: 13 Why us?: Because I really like the elder of scrolls series and I have minecraft so in my spear time maybe this wonderfull server will do! Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: I will as soon as I can my browser says that its restricting the URL. But I will as soon as it lets me! Did you join our forum?: Yeah, Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for examples) Roleplaying is when someone plays in there own role of the play/game or any of the above! You have a role in the story and you do it! (I find that fun) Define Meta-gaming in your words: Meta gaming is when you receive information OOC and Bring it IG. Define Power-gaming in your words: Power-gaming is the action of being a god-like figure, or forcing actions upon another player's character without permission.
IC: Name: Zack Brackson Nickname: (Optional) Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Argonian Appearance: Green faced, long nose, spiky red hair, lime eyes and a few scars on his face.
Personality: Zack is a caring Argonian that will not stop for the innocent, he will try to help till his last few steps!
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
(This is a example if he was wanted) [Zack] *Runs from the guards and hides in a bush* [Guard] Where did he go? [Zack] Right here. [Guards] * Try's to attack* [Zack] *Holding a Guard hostage* Now If you want.. [Guard] *Shoots at Zack with a bow. [Zack] *Uses the Guard as a human shield* Pathetic killing your own to get your target *Drops the guard and heads to the guard and gets the bow* [Guards] *Runs off* [Town people] *Cheering* [Zack] If there's any evil around don't hesitate to ask. I will take them down like those guards!
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Zack as a child never got along with anyone really, he just stayed home and looked out the window at the people having fun. He never really had friends till one horrible day... A raider came out of nowhere and stabbed a child Argonian. Zack couldn't just do nothing when there was a bow in his house. So he grabbed the bow and shot him a couple times and he never came back the the village again!
12 years has passed, Zack is now 20 hes in a bar at the time, and it happened once again, but it looked like the same raider from 12 years ago! He took the guards down, all of them. The towns people asked him to kill him, He was in shock he didn't know what to do. Then he made it to the bar they looked at each other. Then Zack knew he was gone at the time they looked. He pulls his bow, then Zack try's to dodge he would have died if a man jumped in front of him and saved his life. Zack runs up to the raider and punches him in the face and he dropped the bow, Zack runs for it when the raider grabs a knife a holds his leg. He fell and kicked him, the raider pulls Zack's Hair back and slightly scarred his face as Zack falls to the floor. The raider then try's to finish him off, Zack gets up punches him and grabs the knife and stabs him in the heart.
3 Years have passed, Zack is the knight of his village. He has been told he needs to head to a place with
much more evil, save lives.Thats what Zack did. He traveled to the land of akavir, and that's where his story begins.
A lot of work put into that app hope you enjoy
Hello FireBathz, I am sorry to say but your app has been denied, here are a few ways you can improve your app if you want to apply again: 1.More in-depth description of Meta_Gaming. 2.More in-depth description of your characters appearance, you gave very little information in this section we need to know more, you only gave information on your characters face we need to know everything about is appearance, what he wears, his stature, skin tone, etc. 3.More in-depth description of your characters personality, you gave little information in this section to, if you want to get into this server you should go into as much detail into these sections as you can. You'll need to add how he acts around people, how mannered he is, etc. 4.Your backstory has very little information about your character and his life growing up and there is no mention of his parents.The only information about his backstory is that when he was 8 he shot a bandit with a bow and 12 years later the bandit came back for revenge we need a lot more then this to let you into the server. Add more information about his childhood and what happened in the 12 years that were skipped things like that. Don't hold back, go into as much detail as you can. 5.Your app appears to be missing something, read the rules to find out what that it. I am sorry but until you make these changes your app is denied.
IGN: IanHershey
Age: 20
Why us?: i love the elder scrolls!
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: yup
Did you join our forum? nope
Name: Ian
Nickname: (Optional) IanHershey
Age: 20
Gender: male
Race: imperial
Appearance: medium build scars on left eye tattoos all over
Personality: rough around the edges but eager to help others
Insta-denied, please use the application template provided on the first page.
OOC: IGN: FireBathz Age: 13 Why us?: Because I really like the elder of scrolls series and I have minecraft so in my spear time maybe this wonderfull server will do! Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: I will as soon as I can my browser says that its restricting the URL. But I will as soon as it lets me! Did you join our forum?: Yeah, Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for examples) Roleplaying is when someone plays in there own role of the play/game or any of the above! You have a role in the story and you do it! (I find that fun) Define Meta-gaming in your words: Meta gaming is when you receive information OOC and Bring it IG. Define Power-gaming in your words: Power-gaming is the action of being a god-like figure, or forcing actions upon another player's character without permission.
IC: Name: Zack Brackson Nickname: (Optional) Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Argonian Appearance: Green faced, long nose, spiky red hair, lime eyes and a few scars on his face.
Personality: Zack is a caring Argonian that will not stop for the innocent, he will try to help till his last few steps!
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
(This is a example if he was wanted) [Zack] *Runs from the guards and hides in a bush* [Guard] Where did he go? [Zack] Right here. [Guards] * Try's to attack* [Zack] *Holding a Guard hostage* Now If you want.. [Guard] *Shoots at Zack with a bow. [Zack] *Uses the Guard as a human shield* Pathetic killing your own to get your target *Drops the guard and heads to the guard and gets the bow* [Guards] *Runs off* [Town people] *Cheering* [Zack] If there's any evil around don't hesitate to ask. I will take them down like those guards!
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Zack as a child never got along with anyone really, he just stayed home and looked out the window at the people having fun. He never really had friends till one horrible day... A raider came out of nowhere and stabbed a child Argonian. Zack couldn't just do nothing when there was a bow in his house. So he grabbed the bow and shot him a couple times and he never came back the the village again!
12 years has passed, Zack is now 20 hes in a bar at the time, and it happened once again, but it looked like the same raider from 12 years ago! He took the guards down, all of them. The towns people asked him to kill him, He was in shock he didn't know what to do. Then he made it to the bar they looked at each other. Then Zack knew he was gone at the time they looked. He pulls his bow, then Zack try's to dodge he would have died if a man jumped in front of him and saved his life. Zack runs up to the raider and punches him in the face and he dropped the bow, Zack runs for it when the raider grabs a knife a holds his leg. He fell and kicked him, the raider pulls Zack's Hair back and slightly scarred his face as Zack falls to the floor. The raider then try's to finish him off, Zack gets up punches him and grabs the knife and stabs him in the heart.
3 Years have passed, Zack is the knight of his village. He has been told he needs to head to a place with
much more evil, save lives.Thats what Zack did. He traveled to the land of akavir, and that's where his story begins.
A lot of work put into that app hope you enjoy
EDIT: I voted :3
-FireBathz
DENIED Thanks for voting BTW. xD But why you are denied is because your backstory is a bit confusing towards the middle. Also I doubt a twelve year old would be able to drive a bandit out of town. Also you never mention how you get to Akavir, or how your getting there. Also please give a more in-depth appearance. Please also give a more in-depth personality. And then go read the rules.
Hello FireBathz, I am sorry to say but your app has been denied, here are a few ways you can improve your app if you want to apply again: 1.More in-depth description of Meta_Gaming. 2.More in-depth description of your characters appearance, you gave very little information in this section we need to know more, you only gave information on your characters face we need to know everything about is appearance, what he wears, his stature, skin tone, etc. 3.More in-depth description of your characters personality, you gave little information in this section to, if you want to get into this server you should go into as much detail into these sections as you can. You'll need to add how he acts around people, how mannered he is, etc. 4.Your backstory has very little information about your character and his life growing up and there is no mention of his parents.The only information about his backstory is that when he was 8 he shot a bandit with a bow and 12 years later the bandit came back for revenge we need a lot more then this to let you into the server. Add more information about his childhood and what happened in the 12 years that were skipped things like that. Don't hold back, go into as much detail as you can. 5.Your app appears to be missing something, read the rules to find out what that it. I am sorry but until you make these changes your app is denied.
Insta-denied, please use the application template provided on the first page.
Working on it right now please stay while I add the finishing touches
OOC: IGN: FireBathz Age: 13 Why us?: Because I really like the elder of scrolls series and I have minecraft so in my spear time maybe this wonderfull server will do! Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: I will as soon as I can my browser says that its restricting the URL. But I will as soon as it lets me! Did you join our forum?: Yeah, Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for examples) Roleplaying is when someone plays in there own role of the play/game or any of the above! You have a role in the story and you do it! (I find that fun) Define Meta-gaming in your words: When you learn something that your character has not yet learnt and then does. Define Power-gaming in your words: Power-gaming is the action of being a god-like figure, or forcing actions upon another player's character without permission.
IC: Name: Zack Brackson Nickname: (Optional) Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Argonian Appearance: Bottle Green Skin tone, long nose, spiky red hair, lime eyes, a few scars on his face, He wears a black robe, Good posture, And round brown shoes and a Sapphire Necklace
Personality: Zack is a caring Argonian that will not stop for the innocent, he will try to help till his last few steps. He is willing to risk is life for the safety if others. He will never stop doing his quest not for anything, even if he faces his fears (Endermen). He can act quite mad if he has been on a quest over a week. Zack will also act quite nice around people even if they yell at him and give him a rough time.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
(This is a example if he was wanted) [Zack] *Runs from the guards and hides in a bush* [Guard] Where did he go? [Zack] Right here. [Guards] * Try's to attack* [Zack] *Holding a Guard hostage* Now If you want.. [Guard] *Shoots at Zack with a bow. [Zack] *Uses the Guard as a human shield* Pathetic killing your own to get your target *Drops the guard and heads to the guard and gets the bow* [Guards] *Runs off* [Town people] *Cheering* [Zack] If there's any evil around don't hesitate to ask. I will take them down like those guards!
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Zack as a child never got along with anyone really, he just stayed home and looked out the window at the people having fun. He never really had friends till one horrible day... A raider came out of nowhere and stabbed a child Argonian. Zack couldn't just do nothing when there was a bow in his house. So he grabbed the bow and shot him a couple times and the guards chased him he never came back the the village again... He was rewarded with a black robe that was a bit big for him but he still kept it until it could fit him.
Everyone was happy for him and his parents didn't punish him but they said never, never , never get your hands dirty like that again. From then on the kids were nice to him and he was a part of the village.
After then he asked if he could do more archer practice. They said no they didn't want him to get evil and turn into the raider. After 3 years his parents gave him a bow for his birthday and a Sapphire necklace, he enjoyed his gifts and loved his life.
Another 3 years later, Zack is now 14 and one day he was playing with his parents when he heard a howl and then his dad decided to take it in his own hands and awhile after it was morning and he had a few arrows in himself. He barely survived and Zack said "You will never die dad you are immortal!"
6 years has passed, Zack is now 20 hes in a bar at the time, and it happened once again, but it looked like the same raider from 12 years ago! He took the guards down, all of them. The towns people asked him to kill him, He was in shock he didn't know what to do. Then he made it to the bar they looked at each other. Then Zack knew he was gone at the time they looked. He pulls his bow, then Zack try's to dodge he would have died if a man jumped in front of him and saved his life. Zack runs up to the raider and punches him in the face and he dropped the bow, Zack runs for it when the raider grabs a knife a holds his leg. He fell and kicked him, the raider pulls Zack's Hair back and slightly scarred his face as Zack falls to the floor. The raider then try's to finish him off, Zack gets up punches him and grabs the knife and stabs him in the heart. After then he checked on his parents... They were killed he was in shock and grabbed his black robe and said "I know there is a guild of those raiders I will one day find them and destroy them in revenge."
3 Years have passed, Zack is the knight of his village. He has been told he needs to head to a place where the raiders are, save lives. Thats what Zack did. He traveled to the land of akavir on a boat, and that's where his story begins.
A lot of work put into that app hope you enjoy
EDIT: I voted am finished I hope you enjoy
-FireBathz
Hello FireBathz, I am sorry to say but your app has been denied mainly because your backstory got a little confusing at, and past the point, "Another 3 years later, Zack is now 14 and one day he was playing with his parents when he heard a howl and then his dad decided to take it in his own hands and awhile after it was morning and he had a few arrows in himself. He barely survived and Zack said "You will never die dad you are immortal!". To make it easier for you may I suggest you change your backstory all together, it is rather hard to believe a little boy scared away a man with a bow when he had never used a bow before in his life. Also may I suggest you change your characters name, Zack Brackson isn't exactly an argonian name, maybe try the random name generator on google just type in "Argonian name generator". You also appear to still be missing something in you app, read the rules to find out what this is. I am sorry but until you have made these changes your app is denied.
OOC:
IGN: Biff_Man
Age: 12 almost 13
Why us?: I saw this server on minecraft forums and I wanted to try it.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: No, but if you are good I will vote.
Define Role-Playing in your words: Role-Playing in my own words would be, a fictional character taking on a fictional role.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using Information from OOC your character in-game hasn't learned yet.
Define Power-gaming in your words: To give others no chance to respond with one of your actions or to do a super powerful action that is impossible for the character you have.
IC:
Name: John WildBlood
Nickname: (Optional) Juan
Age: 24
Gender: Male Race: Nord
Appearance: John stands at about 6'0, he has brown hair, dark blue eyes. He wears a stealthy cloak ( Kind of like an assassins cloak but not as covered.). Tan skin, and normally wears a mask up to his eyes.
Personality: John is a slim, athletic person. John has a sweet spot for women, is brave and uses darkness to his advantage. John is mostly silent.
In-game RP example: -Setting- *A dark clouded night Solitude, puddles of water gathered in various spots along the brick clad streets spanning all of Solitude, John covered in a assassins cloak makes his way towards Anvil&Smelting a crafting shop. As a shimmer of moonlight peeks through the clouds above, barely managing to illuminate the city.*
Blacksmith: *Hears the door to his shop open and close.*
Blacksmith: "I see I have a customer, welcome to Anvil&Smelting."
John: *Reaches into his bag, pulling out his trusty dagger and a peice of armor that has been damaged by a weapon of some kind placing it onto the counter along with a small bag of gold coins.*
John: ''Repair.''
Blacksmith: *Picks up the small bag of coins tossing it in his hands as to feel the weight of it.*
Blacksmith: ''Come back tomorrow night, I will have your stuff repaired.''
John: *Nods and slowly moves towards the exit of the shop, pushing the door open and disappearing into the night.*
Background: As a young boy John's mother died of a serious illness, an illness so great the doctors couldn't cure it. John was growing up with no mother, only a dad. His dad abused him so much that John ran away and his uncle took him in. Aargon was an assassin, and taught John the ways of an assassin. As Aargon did not have a son, he treated John like his own son. At age 15 he got his first dagger from Aargon. John treasured his dagger it never left his sight. John never really went on assassination until age 20. When John turned 24 Aargon was too old to work, Aargon told john that when he died he would leave his money to John.
Aargon went to the bar and got in a bar fight. Before John got the chance to save Aargon, the man struck him down. John now a lonely person again, looked for a new life with the money Aargon left him. John found a small village by the sea. John made new friends looking for adventure. "I say let's go to AKAVIR" John's friend said. "What is AKAVIR?" John asked. "It is a place filled with adventure, although it costs far too much than what we have now". "I have an idea lets sneak on board a boat going to AKAVIR, then we start our adventures there!" John exclaimed. So they found a boat headed for AKAVIR, and snuck on board. However when they were a ways away from arriving they were found and thrown over board. All of John's weapons were lost in the sea. John's friend couldn't swim so he didn't make it and drowned. John made it to shore and his adventures started. SKOOMA KILLS!
OOC:
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their guns and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer.
OOC:
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their guns and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer.
Revised 5
Hereeee we go!
- Power-gaming. This is simply being OverPowered. Power-gaming is a type of action you do to another.
- RP Example. Quick check. You know there are no guns in TES?
- He was 35 when he got to Akavir, but he's 256 now? That's 221 years unaccounted for. What he be doing for that huge amount of time? Nothing? Explain this, be detailed, but cover all points.
- Rules. Make sure you read them all.
This app has been DENIED
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- Admin on Ashes of Our Fathers - Past Admin for Sins of Our Fathers - Past Moderator for The Elder Scrolls Akavir -
~ Dedicated role player ~ Most comfortable thing in the universe ~ Leader of the Cult of Milk ~
OOC:
IGN: Biff_Man
Age: 12 almost 13
Why us?: I saw this server on minecraft forums and I wanted to try it.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: No, but if you are good I will vote.
Define Role-Playing in your words: Role-Playing in my own words would be, a fictional character taking on a fictional role.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using Information from OOC your character in-game hasn't learned yet.
Define Power-gaming in your words: To give others no chance to respond with one of your actions or to do a super powerful action that is impossible for the character you have.
IC:
Name: John WildBlood
Nickname: (Optional) Juan
Age: 24
Gender: Male Race: Nord
Appearance: John stands at about 6'0, he has brown hair, dark blue eyes. He wears a stealthy cloak ( Kind of like an assassins cloak but not as covered.). Tan skin, and normally wears a mask up to his eyes.
Personality: John is a slim, athletic person. John has a sweet spot for women, is brave and uses darkness to his advantage. John is mostly silent.
In-game RP example: -Setting- *A dark clouded night Solitude, puddles of water gathered in various spots along the brick clad streets spanning all of Solitude, John covered in a assassins cloak makes his way towards Anvil&Smelting a crafting shop. As a shimmer of moonlight peeks through the clouds above, barely managing to illuminate the city.*
Blacksmith: *Hears the door to his shop open and close.*
Blacksmith: "I see I have a customer, welcome to Anvil&Smelting."
John: *Reaches into his bag, pulling out his trusty dagger and a peice of armor that has been damaged by a weapon of some kind placing it onto the counter along with a small bag of gold coins.*
John: ''Repair.''
Blacksmith: *Picks up the small bag of coins tossing it in his hands as to feel the weight of it.*
Blacksmith: ''Come back tomorrow night, I will have your stuff repaired.''
John: *Nods and slowly moves towards the exit of the shop, pushing the door open and disappearing into the night.*
Background: As a young boy John's mother died of a serious illness, an illness so great the doctors couldn't cure it. John was growing up with no mother, only a dad. His dad abused him so much that John ran away and his uncle took him in. Aargon was an assassin, and taught John the ways of an assassin. As Aargon did not have a son, he treated John like his own son. At age 15 he got his first dagger from Aargon. John treasured his dagger it never left his sight. John never really went on assassination until age 20. When John turned 24 Aargon was too old to work, Aargon told john that when he died he would leave his money to John.
Aargon went to the bar and got in a bar fight. Before John got the chance to save Aargon, the man struck him down. John now a lonely person again, looked for a new life with the money Aargon left him. John found a small village by the sea. John made new friends looking for adventure. "I say let's go to AKAVIR" John's friend said. "What is AKAVIR?" John asked. "It is a place filled with adventure, although it costs far too much than what we have now". "I have an idea lets sneak on board a boat going to AKAVIR, then we start our adventures there!" John exclaimed. So they found a boat headed for AKAVIR, and snuck on board. However when they were a ways away from arriving they were found and thrown over board. All of John's weapons were lost in the sea. John's friend couldn't swim so he didn't make it and drowned. John made it to shore and his adventures started. SKOOMA KILLS!
All right, gone over this app, and from what I see here, you can finally be ACCEPTED
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- Admin on Ashes of Our Fathers - Past Admin for Sins of Our Fathers - Past Moderator for The Elder Scrolls Akavir -
~ Dedicated role player ~ Most comfortable thing in the universe ~ Leader of the Cult of Milk ~
OOC:
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot. The person is over powered.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their bows and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer and worked up the ranks to be a nation leader.
OOC:
IGN:Nbar97
Age:17
Why us?: I have always loved the elder scrolls series and I like Minecraft
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Did you join our forum? Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for examples) Roleplaying is creating a fictional character and reacting to a situation based on that characters beliefs and experiances.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using OOC info IC
Define Power-gaming in your words: Not letting another person react to a situation
IC:
Name: Delvin Frey
Nickname: (Optional) Frey (Known as Frey The Impaler In High Rock)
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Brenton
Appearance: Short in Stature With short Brown Hair
Personality: very Intelligent and able to out think any opposition, A Great military stratagist and is always looking to Debate with some one. Has an " I'm Better than you attitude." Also Knows The power of Money and how it makes the world go round.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
-Frey sits in a Chair at the Docks of Daggerfall Reading a copy of "Mixed Units Tactics"-
-A Very old Begger Walks Up to Frey-
Begger: Please mister can you spare a coin
-Frey calmly closes his book and says- "If I had A coin to spare Don't You think I would come up to you and give you a coin.
-A supprised look appears on the beggers face after recognizing Frey's Voice- "Your Frey The Impaler please don't kill me Mr.Impaler uh I mean Mr.Frey."
-Frey chuckles- "I'M no Killer"
-The Begger has a puzeling look on his face-
Begger: Then why do you call you Frey the Impaler?"
Frey: That name was givin a number of years ago a political enemy he gave me the name as away of describing me Political dominance not my ruthlessness on the field of battle"
-Frey slowly stands up-
Frey: I must be off"
-Frey walks up the ramp of a Boat and Grips the hand rail very tightly-
-The Boat leaves the Dock-
-The old Begger hears many angry Orcs welling "Get dat Frey"
-The Begger sits in a chair wondering what just happened-
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Born in the city of Wayrest In Highrock his family was moderately wealthy. His father a Mage was educated a the collage of Winterhold and wanted his son to do the same but from a very early age it was clear that he belonged in Politics instead of an Arcane University. At the age of 11 he tricked his father into buying him a fencing trainer. This Trainer taught him the Art of Swordplay but also imbedded in him that a sword was for defending ones self and for sport.
At the age of 17 He attended The collage of Wayrest. He was at the top of his class and showed great promise in the arts of politics. He Moved to Daggerfall after graduating in three years he was ready to shine on the political stage. Some call him The persuader for his talent to change his political enemy's mind in a heartbeat. Sometimes his words got him into trouble once he proclaimed himself mightier than Akatosh. But his biggest mistake was calling the Orcs " unfoundedly stupid"
On his way to Akvair to seek a new playing field of challengers. His first idea is to start a political party that will dominate the Politics of Akvair aswell as become a wealthy trader. Sitting on the Boat planning his new life he is ready to take Akvair by storm
OOC:
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot. The person is over powered.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their bows and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer and worked up the ranks to be a nation leader.
Revised 6
You didn't do as asked, so, same points again.
- Power-gaming. This is simply being OverPowered. Power-gaming is a type of action you do to another.
- RP Example. Quick check. You know there are no cannons in TES?
- He was 35 when he got to Akavir, but he's 256 now? That's 221 years unaccounted for. What he be doing for that huge amount of time? Nothing? Explain this, be detailed, but cover all points. You can't be a faction leader.
- Rules. Make sure you read them all. Denied
OOC:
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player being over powered.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the crossbows ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their crossbow and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their bows and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their crossbow and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer. He took a profession as a blacksmith and a wood worker.
I've kept wanting to find a TES RP server on Minecraft, but never could.
I play on an RP Gmod server, and have recently roleplayed the Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion.
Meta Gaming: When a player uses OOC knowledge to their advantage in-game.
Role-playing: When a real person assumes the role of an video game character in-game.
Power-Gaming: Creating an extremely OP character that has almost no weaknesses
IC
Name: Gorgon Styx
Age: 21
Bio: Gorgon had been born on a small island outside of Tamriel. He knew nothing of combat, and was the son of a baker and a saleswoman. They always wanted him to continue this precedent so it could become a family legacy, however, he did not want to be a baker or a vendor. He wanted to join the Imperial Legion. His parents scourned him, but he went on with life. Eventually he left the island, and became a scout for the Imperial Legion, proficient in light armor, bow, and short blades (short sword and the likes).
He later learned that his parents had died in a fire at their bakery. After that, he vowed to never return to the small island. One night he was robbed of a ring he had been given in his parents' will. Naturally, he went after him. Enraged, he snuck in the small town where he lived. He used his sheer charm to get the man to befriend him. They came back to his house where Gorgon stayed the night. Once the wretched thief was asleep, he murdered the thief with a knife that was on the table, took back the ring, and left no evidence of the murder.
Later that night, when he got a bed at an inn, Gorgon was visited by a speaker for the Dark Brotherhood. Gorgon accepted this offer, and from then on he worked for two opposing forces in Tamriel.
RP example:
Gorgon: Hello, kind sir.
Thief: Hello, your name is...?
Gorgon: Xarthol. Xarthol Hierr.
Thief: Ah, yes. Nice to meet you, I'm Charon Ginette.
Gorgon: Pleasure. have a drink?
Thief: Yes, thank you. Tamika?
Gorgon: Only.
Thief: Very well, then. What brings you to our humble village?
Gorgon: I'm travelling the world, and in my travels, I have heard of temples with glorious treasures near here.
Thief: Surely you jest.
Gorgon: No, for I am quite certain there are treasures of great value here.
Thief: Come to my place. We may talk there, and you can stay the night for 5 sepptims. Cheaper than here.
Gorgon: It's a deal.
Why us?: I've been looking for a new rp server for a while
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: No, but I will if I like the server
Did you join our forum?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: Acting as another person in a realistic manor
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using information you have learned out of character in character.
Define Power-gaming in your words: Performing a god-like action or an action for another person/without their reaction(unless their bound or something)
IC: Name: Alvar Sorgarth
Nickname: N/A
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Nord Appearance: Alvar is a large, muscular man (A little above average for a nord). He has several scars around his chest and back. He also has short brown hair and blue eyes. I'm not sure what to make him wear yet, probably will just be a leather tunic + pants or something.
Personality: Alvar is extremely laid back, a large teddy bear most of the time. Even though, he is very stubborn and one of the most determined, reliable people anyone will ever meet. If he sets his mind to something, there is hardly anything to stop him from achieving his goal, or dying doing so. He can hardly ever say no to a pretty woman, or a mug of ale and finds no use in magic at all.
In-game RP example:(note: This is always my weakest subject. I am good at RP itself, just not rping for two or more people at once) *Alvar is sitting around the bar, joking with friends when a few angry locals barge in. One says "Hey! You nord over there! We dont take kindly to your types around here" Alvar replies "Now now, we aren't hurting anyone". Another angry man goes "You better leave, before we have a problem". "Theres no problem, just a couple of guys enjoying a drink is all" Alvar says as he takes another sip from his mug. The leader of the group swings at Alvar, landing his fist in his cheek. Alvar imminently gets back up swinging. The man takes several punches before one of his friends pulls avlar's arms back, allowing for the first man to take several more swings. Another man, one Alvar was talking to punches the man holding Alvar and not soon after, a full on bar fight starts. Shattered splinters of wood are spread across the floor as a stool is smashed against the back of someone'e head, a bit of blood is spattered across the floor, and a man even goes unconscious. Alvar is fighting the same man who started the fight when he spies a lady watching. He gets distracted and he is slugged, falling to the ground he snaps out of it and gets back up to fight. Soon after the guards come in and break up the fight. After being sent to the keep and paying a fine, he would return to the bar and try to flirt with the woman he saw during the fight.
Background: Alvar grew up in the bitter cold of Windhelm, Skyrim. He was extremely curious as a boy. He observed merchant haggling annoyed the local blacksmith with constant questions, and had a huge fascination with Dwemer, Daedra, and the elaborate tombs of the ancient Nords. He grew up with only his mother, for his dad as soon as he realized that Alvar's mom was pregnant. His mother, being a bartender at candle hearth hall, never had time, or the know-how to teach him lessons like how to hunt, fish, etc and was often thought by one of his friend's fathers, leading for Alvar to become very detached from his mother, his only family. One day, he learned about a nearby Dwemer ruin. Bring thirteen years old at the time,Alvar and his best friend gathered as much supplies as they could carry and started their first adventure. It took both of their strength to open the first door, but when it did open, they couldn't believe their eyes. Greeting them were cogs, rotating on the ceiling, steam shooting out of the many pipes against the walls, and large statues. They turned a corner when Alvar's friend spied a shiny, almost gold-colored sword hung on the wall. Walking towards it, unaware of his surroundings, he stepped on a pressure plate, causing two Dwarven spiders to crawl out of the wall and attack the duo. Their arrows hardly made a scratch on the spiders, while the iron sword did damage, but not much as they fought the still-working guardians of the ancient underground city. The spiders were defeated, but not without injury. A small break, three minutes at most, break passed before a familiar sound cam clanking through the stone halls. The boys looks toards it and saw several more spiders closing in. Alvar's friend ran towards the door as Alvar ran the other way without his friend even noticing, he grabbed the wall-mounted sword and followed behind his friend, just narrowly avoiding getting shocked. They didn't stop running until they reached windhelm. Upon arrival, with their new sword in hand, they quickly became the two most talked about boys in the entire town, accomplishing something that some full grown men wouldn't try.Of course, they lied about only reaching the first corner and took the next couple of days off to recover after their battle. For the next few years, however, Alvar's mom hardly ever let him leave windhelm from fear of him dying. Around his 17th birthday,when his mom let him leave windhelm again, he quickly regained an interest in dungeon-crawling. He almost killed his friends, and himself, on multiple occasions when his curiosity caused him to purposely set of numerous traps to see how they work. Although never anything serious, he always returned to windhelm with a bit more than a few cuts and bruises. One one of these trips, he found his most prized possession an ancient nord great-sword He cherished this and walked around with it everywhere. He soon taught himself to be efficient with it and could even start holding his own with a few of the local guardsmen. With his new ability as a swordsman, he started diving deeper and deeper into ruins. He fought draugr, skeletons, and just about anything else, all while becoming wealthy from his adventures. About 4 years later once his mother, the only reason he stayed near windhelm, died he decided to explore Tamriel. He used most of his riches acquired from dungeons to buy a medium-sized boat and started a trading company. Hearing about how prosperous people on Akvir have become, he decided to take a look for himself. Not too far from the Akvir shores, a large explosion occurred on the bottom decks. It isn't known if this was intentional or not, but part of the stern was completely blown clear from the rest of the boat. Refusing to leave his beloved great-sword one of the many items scattered from the blast, Alvar was abaondoned while his crewmates took the only lifeboat. He never found it and boarded a large piece of wood and was cast adrift with minor injuries since he was on the opposite side of the boat from the blast. He was at sea for two days before a ship found him and brought him to Akavir. Now, with his wealth scattered somewhere at the bottom of the sea, he tries to start a new life with nothing but the clothes on his back.
Skooma gives life! (kills)
(I just took away the him finding his sword since it's against the rules to have a weapon upon arrival)
OOC:
ign:Adventuretime1
age:15
why us?: I have been searching for a skyrim server for a long while, and heard great reviews about this server.
have you voted for us on planet minecraft? no,but i will if i like the server
define role playing in your words: role playing is where you talk and act like someone as if you were really them
define meta gaming in your words: when you are roleplaying and you use info your character is not supposed to know
define power gaming in your words: basically being overpowered/op
IC:
name:Da'zarkka
Nickname:zarkka
age:
Gender:male
race: khajiit
appearance:Da'zarkka is a slender khajiit with a torn up ear with 1 too many fights with a werewolf. his wiskers are bent and mangled, and his teeth are perfectly sharp. he is scarred in many places, but is exceptionally stealthy.
personality:they dont call him Da'zarkka the bold for nothing! he is eager to fight eviul, asd it usually crosses his path. he will not, however, fight anything that does not deserve it. he sateals from the rich, and fights for the poor.
backstory:Da'zarkka's parents were rich, mostly due to their skills as merchants.Being rich, they were high-priority assassination targets. They were killed when he was young. He lived on the streets in Elsweyr, until he moved to Skyrim. He had a run-in with some forsworn, trying to cross the border from Elsweyr to Skyrim, but he made it out alive. He lived on the streets until he was 15. He was known as Da'zarkka the Cold, because he didn't have a house, and he lived on the streets of Windhelm. After getting pneumonia a few times from the cold, he figured he would have to get money if he ever wanted to survive. He worked as a sell-sword for a few months before he could afford a house. He bought a shack in Rorikstead and got married there. The Thalmor came into Rorikstead and ruled it the year Da'zarkka had moved there. He worked as a cook for the elves until he could afford a horse. He never named his horse. He knew that the horse would lead him to war, and it might not survive. He did not want to get too emotionally attached to the horse. Da'zarkka went into his shack and dug out a small underground room, where he kept his horse, and made armor for them both.
One night, he sharpened his war-axe, armored up the horse, pulled his cloak over his head, and single-handedly ended the Thalmor's threat to the small village of Rorikstead. He was then titled Da'zarkka the Bold. He and his horse had gone to many towns, pushing back the Thalmor, as far as possible. He had a small group of people, who shared his beliefs about the Thalmor. They had liberated every town they came by. Eventually, they had pushed the elves all the way north, near Solitude, thus ending the Thalmor's hold on the towns and some holds on Skyrim. Many of his followers had died, and many legends were lost. When the law finally caught up to Da'zarkka and his men, he was thrown in Cidhna Mine, where he would spend the rest of his days. He had lived in the mine for many years. He couldn't tell if it was night or day for 5 years! He was finally released from that mine, he was 21. He would live a new life as a monster hunter, with his friend Nikko, from Hammerfell. They would hunt bears, to trolls, and even to werewolves. Da'zarkka was the one who figured out that the werewolves weakness was silver. He had killed many of the beast-men until they were almost wiped to extinction. Da'zarkka is the reason there are so few werewolves in Skyrim to this day. They had been hunting beasts for 10 years, until Nikko had fallen sick and died. Da'zarkka left the monster hunting business and dedicated his life to ending the Volkihar vampires. Da'zarkka had been doing odd-jobs and hunting vampires until he was . He had spent 5 years trying to figure out new ways to fight. He learned to use some of the dwarven weapons he had found in Blackreach, weapons with the power to spray fire, or fire explosives. At 36 Da'zarkka decided he would dedicate the rest of his life to helping those in need and punishing the men who caused pain and suffering,because he believes noone should live the life he has lived.
there you have it! my complete backstory. hope I get accepted!
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Hello FireBathz, I am sorry to say but your app has been denied, here are a few ways you can improve your app if you want to apply again:
1.More in-depth description of Meta_Gaming.
2.More in-depth description of your characters appearance, you gave very little information in this section we need to know more, you only gave information on your characters face we need to know everything about is appearance, what he wears, his stature, skin tone, etc.
3.More in-depth description of your characters personality, you gave little information in this section to, if you want to get into this server you should go into as much detail into these sections as you can. You'll need to add how he acts around people, how mannered he is, etc.
4.Your backstory has very little information about your character and his life growing up and there is no mention of his parents.The only information about his backstory is that when he was 8 he shot a bandit with a bow and 12 years later the bandit came back for revenge we need a lot more then this to let you into the server. Add more information about his childhood and what happened in the 12 years that were skipped things like that. Don't hold back, go into as much detail as you can.
5.Your app appears to be missing something, read the rules to find out what that it.
I am sorry but until you make these changes your app is denied.
Insta-denied, please use the application template provided on the first page.
DENIED Thanks for voting BTW. xD But why you are denied is because your backstory is a bit confusing towards the middle. Also I doubt a twelve year old would be able to drive a bandit out of town. Also you never mention how you get to Akavir, or how your getting there. Also please give a more in-depth appearance. Please also give a more in-depth personality. And then go read the rules.
Come on Sythis lol
Working on it right now please stay while I add the finishing touches
Hello FireBathz, I am sorry to say but your app has been denied mainly because your backstory got a little confusing at, and past the point, "Another 3 years later, Zack is now 14 and one day he was playing with his parents when he heard a howl and then his dad decided to take it in his own hands and awhile after it was morning and he had a few arrows in himself. He barely survived and Zack said "You will never die dad you are immortal!". To make it easier for you may I suggest you change your backstory all together, it is rather hard to believe a little boy scared away a man with a bow when he had never used a bow before in his life. Also may I suggest you change your characters name, Zack Brackson isn't exactly an argonian name, maybe try the random name generator on google just type in "Argonian name generator".
You also appear to still be missing something in you app, read the rules to find out what this is.
I am sorry but until you have made these changes your app is denied.
IGN: Biff_Man
Age: 12 almost 13
Why us?: I saw this server on minecraft forums and I wanted to try it.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: No, but if you are good I will vote.
Define Role-Playing in your words: Role-Playing in my own words would be, a fictional character taking on a fictional role.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using Information from OOC your character in-game hasn't learned yet.
Define Power-gaming in your words: To give others no chance to respond with one of your actions or to do a super powerful action that is impossible for the character you have.
IC:
Name: John WildBlood
Nickname: (Optional) Juan
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Nord
Appearance: John stands at about 6'0, he has brown hair, dark blue eyes. He wears a stealthy cloak ( Kind of like an assassins cloak but not as covered.). Tan skin, and normally wears a mask up to his eyes.
Personality: John is a slim, athletic person. John has a sweet spot for women, is brave and uses darkness to his advantage. John is mostly silent.
In-game RP example: -Setting- *A dark clouded night Solitude, puddles of water gathered in various spots along the brick clad streets spanning all of Solitude, John covered in a assassins cloak makes his way towards Anvil&Smelting a crafting shop. As a shimmer of moonlight peeks through the clouds above, barely managing to illuminate the city.*
Blacksmith: *Hears the door to his shop open and close.*
Blacksmith: "I see I have a customer, welcome to Anvil&Smelting."
John: *Reaches into his bag, pulling out his trusty dagger and a peice of armor that has been damaged by a weapon of some kind placing it onto the counter along with a small bag of gold coins.*
John: ''Repair.''
Blacksmith: *Picks up the small bag of coins tossing it in his hands as to feel the weight of it.*
Blacksmith: ''Come back tomorrow night, I will have your stuff repaired.''
John: *Nods and slowly moves towards the exit of the shop, pushing the door open and disappearing into the night.*
Background: As a young boy John's mother died of a serious illness, an illness so great the doctors couldn't cure it. John was growing up with no mother, only a dad. His dad abused him so much that John ran away and his uncle took him in. Aargon was an assassin, and taught John the ways of an assassin. As Aargon did not have a son, he treated John like his own son. At age 15 he got his first dagger from Aargon. John treasured his dagger it never left his sight. John never really went on assassination until age 20. When John turned 24 Aargon was too old to work, Aargon told john that when he died he would leave his money to John.
Aargon went to the bar and got in a bar fight. Before John got the chance to save Aargon, the man struck him down. John now a lonely person again, looked for a new life with the money Aargon left him. John found a small village by the sea. John made new friends looking for adventure. "I say let's go to AKAVIR" John's friend said. "What is AKAVIR?" John asked. "It is a place filled with adventure, although it costs far too much than what we have now". "I have an idea lets sneak on board a boat going to AKAVIR, then we start our adventures there!" John exclaimed. So they found a boat headed for AKAVIR, and snuck on board. However when they were a ways away from arriving they were found and thrown over board. All of John's weapons were lost in the sea. John's friend couldn't swim so he didn't make it and drowned. John made it to shore and his adventures started. SKOOMA KILLS!
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their guns and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer.
Revised 5
yes... seems like no one is responding to me though
- Power-gaming. This is simply being OverPowered. Power-gaming is a type of action you do to another.
- RP Example. Quick check. You know there are no guns in TES?
- He was 35 when he got to Akavir, but he's 256 now? That's 221 years unaccounted for. What he be doing for that huge amount of time? Nothing? Explain this, be detailed, but cover all points.
- Rules. Make sure you read them all.
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- Admin on Ashes of Our Fathers - Past Admin for Sins of Our Fathers - Past Moderator for The Elder Scrolls Akavir -
- Admin on Ashes of Our Fathers - Past Admin for Sins of Our Fathers - Past Moderator for The Elder Scrolls Akavir -
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player killing and getting head shots all the time or killing multiple people in one shot. The person is over powered.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the cannons ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their cannons and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their bows and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their cannons and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer and worked up the ranks to be a nation leader.
Revised 6
IGN:Nbar97
Age:17
Why us?: I have always loved the elder scrolls series and I like Minecraft
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Did you join our forum? Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for examples) Roleplaying is creating a fictional character and reacting to a situation based on that characters beliefs and experiances.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using OOC info IC
Define Power-gaming in your words: Not letting another person react to a situation
IC:
Name: Delvin Frey
Nickname: (Optional) Frey (Known as Frey The Impaler In High Rock)
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Brenton
Appearance: Short in Stature With short Brown Hair
Personality: very Intelligent and able to out think any opposition, A Great military stratagist and is always looking to Debate with some one. Has an " I'm Better than you attitude." Also Knows The power of Money and how it makes the world go round.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
-Frey sits in a Chair at the Docks of Daggerfall Reading a copy of "Mixed Units Tactics"-
-A Very old Begger Walks Up to Frey-
Begger: Please mister can you spare a coin
-Frey calmly closes his book and says- "If I had A coin to spare Don't You think I would come up to you and give you a coin.
-A supprised look appears on the beggers face after recognizing Frey's Voice- "Your Frey The Impaler please don't kill me Mr.Impaler uh I mean Mr.Frey."
-Frey chuckles- "I'M no Killer"
-The Begger has a puzeling look on his face-
Begger: Then why do you call you Frey the Impaler?"
Frey: That name was givin a number of years ago a political enemy he gave me the name as away of describing me Political dominance not my ruthlessness on the field of battle"
-Frey slowly stands up-
Frey: I must be off"
-Frey walks up the ramp of a Boat and Grips the hand rail very tightly-
-The Boat leaves the Dock-
-The old Begger hears many angry Orcs welling "Get dat Frey"
-The Begger sits in a chair wondering what just happened-
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Born in the city of Wayrest In Highrock his family was moderately wealthy. His father a Mage was educated a the collage of Winterhold and wanted his son to do the same but from a very early age it was clear that he belonged in Politics instead of an Arcane University. At the age of 11 he tricked his father into buying him a fencing trainer. This Trainer taught him the Art of Swordplay but also imbedded in him that a sword was for defending ones self and for sport.
At the age of 17 He attended The collage of Wayrest. He was at the top of his class and showed great promise in the arts of politics. He Moved to Daggerfall after graduating in three years he was ready to shine on the political stage. Some call him The persuader for his talent to change his political enemy's mind in a heartbeat. Sometimes his words got him into trouble once he proclaimed himself mightier than Akatosh. But his biggest mistake was calling the Orcs " unfoundedly stupid"
On his way to Akvair to seek a new playing field of challengers. His first idea is to start a political party that will dominate the Politics of Akvair aswell as become a wealthy trader. Sitting on the Boat planning his new life he is ready to take Akvair by storm
Skooma kills
- Power-gaming. This is simply being OverPowered. Power-gaming is a type of action you do to another.
- RP Example. Quick check. You know there are no cannons in TES?
- He was 35 when he got to Akavir, but he's 256 now? That's 221 years unaccounted for. What he be doing for that huge amount of time? Nothing? Explain this, be detailed, but cover all points. You can't be a faction leader.
- Rules. Make sure you read them all.
Denied
- Admin on Ashes of Our Fathers - Past Admin for Sins of Our Fathers - Past Moderator for The Elder Scrolls Akavir -
IGN:pk9973
Age:12
Why us?: I saw this server on YouTube and it looked very cool.
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: (See front page for example) A adventure or quest a fictional character goes on in a fictional world or setting.
Define Meta-gaming in your words: It is when someones finds out OOC and use the info IC.
Define Power-gaming in your words: A player being over powered.
IC:
Name: Xathroth
Nickname: (Optional)
Age: 256
Gender: Male
Race: Bosmer
Appearance: A little muscular and old looking. Has a very good posture and looks very mysterious. Wears an old looking tunic and rag like pants.
Personality: Kind and wise like an old man should be. Gentle to everyone unless in war times when he shows his very strong leadership skills.
In-game RP example: (Include dialog)
Tower watchmen- Xathroth! I can see some army behind the yonder!
Xathroth- I hope that these are a friendly nation. Get the crossbows ready. It's an order!
Tower watchmen- Yes cheif! We're on it!
The Wood Elves man their crossbow and load them to fire. Then faster than the elves can respond the enemy's fire their bows and set the city on fire.
Xathroth- RUN! Get to the emergency exit!
All the elves ran from their crossbow and run to the exit in the city pond. There was tons of screaming and fire. There was blood everywhere and elves collapsed to Xathroth's right and left. He was filled with terror.
Elf blacksmith- Should we fight back cheif?
Xathroth- NO!
Xathroth sprinted to the exit with all his old might. Just about when he reached the exit, he felt a sharp pain. The pain was nothing that he ever felt. Then the world went blank.
Background: (Detailed and in-depth, 2 paragraphs. Also, explain how you came to be in Akavir.) Only when Xathroth was just a small baby he live in the wild with his parents. The were very poor and they roamed around searching for a better place to live or get a job to survive. The Fathers Father never gave him any money and kicked him out of his household for being a threat to the family's reputation for being a destructive person. Then they came across the town and they lived there until they got kicked out from not paying their rent. They roamed until his mother got ill and died. This encouraged Xathroth and his father to search for a nicer place to stay for good.
They were about to die by Orc bandits but a brave knight by the name of Simon who lived in Akavir saved them. Simon was a tall good postured man with steel armor and a steel sword. He had fine brown hair and eyes. He said that it would be to risky to live in the wild so he took them to the land Akavir. The journey would have to take 5 months to reach the land of Akavir. They faced many foes and friends to get there. At one time a gang of Orcs raided Xathroth. In this raid Xathroth lost his father while he tried to kill all the Orcs. Xathroth was very sad that he lost his father and they were even more determined to get to Akavir. When he finally reached Akavir, he was 35. Then he set out to explore the new land of Bosmer. He took a profession as a blacksmith and a wood worker.
Revised 7
Age: 16
Time: CST
I've kept wanting to find a TES RP server on Minecraft, but never could.
I play on an RP Gmod server, and have recently roleplayed the Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion.
Meta Gaming: When a player uses OOC knowledge to their advantage in-game.
Role-playing: When a real person assumes the role of an video game character in-game.
Power-Gaming: Creating an extremely OP character that has almost no weaknesses
IC
Name: Gorgon Styx
Age: 21
Bio: Gorgon had been born on a small island outside of Tamriel. He knew nothing of combat, and was the son of a baker and a saleswoman. They always wanted him to continue this precedent so it could become a family legacy, however, he did not want to be a baker or a vendor. He wanted to join the Imperial Legion. His parents scourned him, but he went on with life. Eventually he left the island, and became a scout for the Imperial Legion, proficient in light armor, bow, and short blades (short sword and the likes).
He later learned that his parents had died in a fire at their bakery. After that, he vowed to never return to the small island. One night he was robbed of a ring he had been given in his parents' will. Naturally, he went after him. Enraged, he snuck in the small town where he lived. He used his sheer charm to get the man to befriend him. They came back to his house where Gorgon stayed the night. Once the wretched thief was asleep, he murdered the thief with a knife that was on the table, took back the ring, and left no evidence of the murder.
Later that night, when he got a bed at an inn, Gorgon was visited by a speaker for the Dark Brotherhood. Gorgon accepted this offer, and from then on he worked for two opposing forces in Tamriel.
RP example:
Gorgon: Hello, kind sir.
Thief: Hello, your name is...?
Gorgon: Xarthol. Xarthol Hierr.
Thief: Ah, yes. Nice to meet you, I'm Charon Ginette.
Gorgon: Pleasure. have a drink?
Thief: Yes, thank you. Tamika?
Gorgon: Only.
Thief: Very well, then. What brings you to our humble village?
Gorgon: I'm travelling the world, and in my travels, I have heard of temples with glorious treasures near here.
Thief: Surely you jest.
Gorgon: No, for I am quite certain there are treasures of great value here.
Thief: Come to my place. We may talk there, and you can stay the night for 5 sepptims. Cheaper than here.
Gorgon: It's a deal.
IGN:SlayerOfCucumber
Age:15
Why us?: I've been looking for a new rp server for a while
Have you voted for us at Planet Minecraft?: No, but I will if I like the server
Did you join our forum?: Yes
Define Role-Playing in your words: Acting as another person in a realistic manor
Define Meta-gaming in your words: Using information you have learned out of character in character.
Define Power-gaming in your words: Performing a god-like action or an action for another person/without their reaction(unless their bound or something)
IC:
Name: Alvar Sorgarth
Nickname: N/A
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Nord
Appearance: Alvar is a large, muscular man (A little above average for a nord). He has several scars around his chest and back. He also has short brown hair and blue eyes. I'm not sure what to make him wear yet, probably will just be a leather tunic + pants or something.
Personality: Alvar is extremely laid back, a large teddy bear most of the time. Even though, he is very stubborn and one of the most determined, reliable people anyone will ever meet. If he sets his mind to something, there is hardly anything to stop him from achieving his goal, or dying doing so. He can hardly ever say no to a pretty woman, or a mug of ale and finds no use in magic at all.
In-game RP example:(note: This is always my weakest subject. I am good at RP itself, just not rping for two or more people at once) *Alvar is sitting around the bar, joking with friends when a few angry locals barge in. One says "Hey! You nord over there! We dont take kindly to your types around here" Alvar replies "Now now, we aren't hurting anyone". Another angry man goes "You better leave, before we have a problem". "Theres no problem, just a couple of guys enjoying a drink is all" Alvar says as he takes another sip from his mug. The leader of the group swings at Alvar, landing his fist in his cheek. Alvar imminently gets back up swinging. The man takes several punches before one of his friends pulls avlar's arms back, allowing for the first man to take several more swings. Another man, one Alvar was talking to punches the man holding Alvar and not soon after, a full on bar fight starts. Shattered splinters of wood are spread across the floor as a stool is smashed against the back of someone'e head, a bit of blood is spattered across the floor, and a man even goes unconscious. Alvar is fighting the same man who started the fight when he spies a lady watching. He gets distracted and he is slugged, falling to the ground he snaps out of it and gets back up to fight. Soon after the guards come in and break up the fight. After being sent to the keep and paying a fine, he would return to the bar and try to flirt with the woman he saw during the fight.
Background:
Alvar grew up in the bitter cold of Windhelm, Skyrim. He was extremely curious as a boy. He observed merchant haggling annoyed the local blacksmith with constant questions, and had a huge fascination with Dwemer, Daedra, and the elaborate tombs of the ancient Nords. He grew up with only his mother, for his dad as soon as he realized that Alvar's mom was pregnant. His mother, being a bartender at candle hearth hall, never had time, or the know-how to teach him lessons like how to hunt, fish, etc and was often thought by one of his friend's fathers, leading for Alvar to become very detached from his mother, his only family.
One day, he learned about a nearby Dwemer ruin. Bring thirteen years old at the time,Alvar and his best friend gathered as much supplies as they could carry and started their first adventure. It took both of their strength to open the first door, but when it did open, they couldn't believe their eyes. Greeting them were cogs, rotating on the ceiling, steam shooting out of the many pipes against the walls, and large statues. They turned a corner when Alvar's friend spied a shiny, almost gold-colored sword hung on the wall. Walking towards it, unaware of his surroundings, he stepped on a pressure plate, causing two Dwarven spiders to crawl out of the wall and attack the duo. Their arrows hardly made a scratch on the spiders, while the iron sword did damage, but not much as they fought the still-working guardians of the ancient underground city. The spiders were defeated, but not without injury. A small break, three minutes at most, break passed before a familiar sound cam clanking through the stone halls. The boys looks toards it and saw several more spiders closing in. Alvar's friend ran towards the door as Alvar ran the other way without his friend even noticing, he grabbed the wall-mounted sword and followed behind his friend, just narrowly avoiding getting shocked. They didn't stop running until they reached windhelm. Upon arrival, with their new sword in hand, they quickly became the two most talked about boys in the entire town, accomplishing something that some full grown men wouldn't try.Of course, they lied about only reaching the first corner and took the next couple of days off to recover after their battle. For the next few years, however, Alvar's mom hardly ever let him leave windhelm from fear of him dying.
Around his 17th birthday,when his mom let him leave windhelm again, he quickly regained an interest in dungeon-crawling. He almost killed his friends, and himself, on multiple occasions when his curiosity caused him to purposely set of numerous traps to see how they work. Although never anything serious, he always returned to windhelm with a bit more than a few cuts and bruises. One one of these trips, he found his most prized possession an ancient nord great-sword He cherished this and walked around with it everywhere. He soon taught himself to be efficient with it and could even start holding his own with a few of the local guardsmen. With his new ability as a swordsman, he started diving deeper and deeper into ruins. He fought draugr, skeletons, and just about anything else, all while becoming wealthy from his adventures. About 4 years later once his mother, the only reason he stayed near windhelm, died he decided to explore Tamriel. He used most of his riches acquired from dungeons to buy a medium-sized boat and started a trading company. Hearing about how prosperous people on Akvir have become, he decided to take a look for himself. Not too far from the Akvir shores, a large explosion occurred on the bottom decks. It isn't known if this was intentional or not, but part of the stern was completely blown clear from the rest of the boat. Refusing to leave his beloved great-sword one of the many items scattered from the blast, Alvar was abaondoned while his crewmates took the only lifeboat. He never found it and boarded a large piece of wood and was cast adrift with minor injuries since he was on the opposite side of the boat from the blast. He was at sea for two days before a ship found him and brought him to Akavir. Now, with his wealth scattered somewhere at the bottom of the sea, he tries to start a new life with nothing but the clothes on his back.
Skooma gives life! (kills)
(I just took away the him finding his sword since it's against the rules to have a weapon upon arrival)
ign:Adventuretime1
age:15
why us?: I have been searching for a skyrim server for a long while, and heard great reviews about this server.
have you voted for us on planet minecraft? no,but i will if i like the server
define role playing in your words: role playing is where you talk and act like someone as if you were really them
define meta gaming in your words: when you are roleplaying and you use info your character is not supposed to know
define power gaming in your words: basically being overpowered/op
IC:
name:Da'zarkka
Nickname:zarkka
age:
Gender:male
race: khajiit
appearance:Da'zarkka is a slender khajiit with a torn up ear with 1 too many fights with a werewolf. his wiskers are bent and mangled, and his teeth are perfectly sharp. he is scarred in many places, but is exceptionally stealthy.
personality:they dont call him Da'zarkka the bold for nothing! he is eager to fight eviul, asd it usually crosses his path. he will not, however, fight anything that does not deserve it. he sateals from the rich, and fights for the poor.
backstory:Da'zarkka's parents were rich, mostly due to their skills as merchants.Being rich, they were high-priority assassination targets. They were killed when he was young. He lived on the streets in Elsweyr, until he moved to Skyrim. He had a run-in with some forsworn, trying to cross the border from Elsweyr to Skyrim, but he made it out alive. He lived on the streets until he was 15. He was known as Da'zarkka the Cold, because he didn't have a house, and he lived on the streets of Windhelm. After getting pneumonia a few times from the cold, he figured he would have to get money if he ever wanted to survive. He worked as a sell-sword for a few months before he could afford a house. He bought a shack in Rorikstead and got married there. The Thalmor came into Rorikstead and ruled it the year Da'zarkka had moved there. He worked as a cook for the elves until he could afford a horse. He never named his horse. He knew that the horse would lead him to war, and it might not survive. He did not want to get too emotionally attached to the horse. Da'zarkka went into his shack and dug out a small underground room, where he kept his horse, and made armor for them both.
One night, he sharpened his war-axe, armored up the horse, pulled his cloak over his head, and single-handedly ended the Thalmor's threat to the small village of Rorikstead. He was then titled Da'zarkka the Bold. He and his horse had gone to many towns, pushing back the Thalmor, as far as possible. He had a small group of people, who shared his beliefs about the Thalmor. They had liberated every town they came by. Eventually, they had pushed the elves all the way north, near Solitude, thus ending the Thalmor's hold on the towns and some holds on Skyrim. Many of his followers had died, and many legends were lost. When the law finally caught up to Da'zarkka and his men, he was thrown in Cidhna Mine, where he would spend the rest of his days. He had lived in the mine for many years. He couldn't tell if it was night or day for 5 years! He was finally released from that mine, he was 21. He would live a new life as a monster hunter, with his friend Nikko, from Hammerfell. They would hunt bears, to trolls, and even to werewolves. Da'zarkka was the one who figured out that the werewolves weakness was silver. He had killed many of the beast-men until they were almost wiped to extinction. Da'zarkka is the reason there are so few werewolves in Skyrim to this day. They had been hunting beasts for 10 years, until Nikko had fallen sick and died. Da'zarkka left the monster hunting business and dedicated his life to ending the Volkihar vampires. Da'zarkka had been doing odd-jobs and hunting vampires until he was . He had spent 5 years trying to figure out new ways to fight. He learned to use some of the dwarven weapons he had found in Blackreach, weapons with the power to spray fire, or fire explosives. At 36 Da'zarkka decided he would dedicate the rest of his life to helping those in need and punishing the men who caused pain and suffering,because he believes noone should live the life he has lived.
there you have it! my complete backstory. hope I get accepted!
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