User Name: FancyPenguin
Age: 15
Location/Time Zone: Central Standard Time
Did Someone Refer You?: Murmur Minecraft
Version: 1.0-1.1
Land/Town: Ramonia/Shinto
Job: Chef
Race: Assassin
Name: Barry Bellamy
Age: 20
Bio: Raised by a family known for their baking, Barry has yet to leave his hometown of Shinto for years. Unsettled as time goes by, he slowly develops an early mid-life crisis. After seeing several assassins pass through Shinto. He carefully begins developing minor stealth skills as he steals the occasional sweet roll from the neighboring houses. Upon almost getting caught by guards after some time, he is saved by none other than a new arrival from Syyrnatar, Murmur. The quickly become friends and pledge to go out and seek adventure as a team. Where will this take them? Who knows.
Not bad. Its simple yet tells enough about your character to establish his place in the world. I'm assuming this Murmur person is going to be applying here as well?
I'm assuming this Murmur person is going to be applying here as well?
I am, just finishing up the bio. It's okay if I come from another land, so long as it isn't Earth, correct? The bio guidelines seemed to say I could, but I wanted to double check.
I am, just finishing up the bio. It's okay if I come from another land, so long as it isn't Earth, correct? The bio guidelines seemed to say I could, but I wanted to double check.
User name*: TheMurmur
Age*: 16 (Literate and mature.)
Location/Time Zone*: EST
Did someone refer you?: Nope! Just looking about for a good rp server.
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.0-1.1
Land/Town: Shinto, in the Nation of Ramonia.
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Murmur
Age*: 21
Bio*: Hailing from the land of Syyrnatar, a hunter who grew up in a forest cabin wanted a fresh start. New landscapes to explore, new flora, and new fauna. Nothing dark, nothing sad, he lived a great life, just got bored. Thus, he boarded a ship to Silvania to experience that thrill of learning new tricks from a fresh landscape. As he got off his ship with nearly nothing, he found Barry, in trouble with the guards. He'd found friends this way before, and decided to save him. Barry and Murmur became fast friends, deciding to ally themselves and experience Silvania as a duo.
User Name: FancyPenguin
Age: 15
Location/Time Zone: Central Standard Time
Did Someone Refer You?: Murmur Minecraft
Version: 1.0-1.1
Land/Town: Ramonia/Shinto
Job: Chef
Race: Assassin
Name: Barry Bellamy
Age: 20
Bio: Raised by a family known for their baking, Barry has yet to leave his hometown of Shinto for years. Unsettled as time goes by, he slowly develops an early mid-life crisis. After seeing several assassins pass through Shinto. He carefully begins developing minor stealth skills as he steals the occasional sweet roll from the neighboring houses. Upon almost getting caught by guards after some time, he is saved by none other than a new arrival from Syyrnatar, Murmur. The quickly become friends and pledge to go out and seek adventure as a team. Where will this take them? Who knows.
User name*: TheMurmur
Age*: 16 (Literate and mature.)
Location/Time Zone*: EST
Did someone refer you?: Nope! Just looking about for a good rp server.
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.0-1.1
Land/Town: Shinto, in the Nation of Ramonia.
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Murmur
Age*: 21
Bio*: Hailing from the land of Syyrnatar, a hunter who grew up in a forest cabin wanted a fresh start. New landscapes to explore, new flora, and new fauna. Nothing dark, nothing sad, he lived a great life, just got bored. Thus, he boarded a ship to Silvania to experience that thrill of learning new tricks from a fresh landscape. As he got off his ship with nearly nothing, he found Barry, in trouble with the guards. He'd found friends this way before, and decided to save him. Barry and Murmur became fast friends, deciding to ally themselves and experience Silvania as a duo.
User name*:Cethis
Age*:16
Location/Time Zone*:USA Central
Did someone refer you?:No just thought this looked interesting
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.1
Land/Town:Tempestas/Valthraxus
Job*:Armorer
Race:Assassin
Name:
Age*:16
Bio*:Cethis was born into a family of Armorers and weapon-smiths,in Tennebrae.Cethis always has had a mischievous side and was constantly getting in trouble with his peers and parents. Eventually, he grew bored of his life and decided to run away from home and head to a bigger city. He left a few days after his 13th birthday and head off to Faerun. After a long journey he made it into town, but realized he had no money. So he took to life on the street and became a petty thief, learning all he could learn about stealth and thievery. He made a living off this for 2 years and then he encountered something that would change him. He got caught trying to steal a bag of gold from a merchant and he got into a struggle with the merchant, as the struggle continued the merchant pulled out a knife and tried to kill him. But, Cethis had spent the last two years on the street and knew a few things about fighting, so he disarmed the merchant and knocked him down. As the merchant looked on in fear, Cethis felt powerful, beyond what he had ever felt before. He had the choice to play with life, whether to keep the merchant alive, or to kill him. The choice was an easy one, he grabbed the gold and left leaving the merchant to himself. Later that night though, the guards found the same merchant dead with a knife in his heart. Cethis realized after that night he loved the thrill of stalking his prey and the power of death. He then choose to live his life as an assassin and kill for coin. He spent a year learning and killing, and decided it was time to move on. He left town and started making his way to Valthraxus, were he would live his life.
User name*:XlegolasX
Age*:14
Location/Time Zone*:Australia: AEST
Did someone refer you?:NO
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town: Tennebrea
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Legolas
Age*:26
Bio*: I lived a quiet life with my family on the farm, Hunting and Carpentry was my job until all the animals disappeared, trees turned into dust, all the crops started dying and sadly my parents past away. So I made a decision to travel the world with my sister Marriot. Soon enough we ran short of supply's and sadly my sister went mad and ran off. So I hired a carriage and set trail for Tennebrea.
User name*: jberk3
Age*: 15
Location/Time Zone*: Australia eastern standard time
Did someone refer you?: wiknz7 or ingame x legolas x
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1.0
Land/Town: tennebrea
Job*: Farmer or carpenter (if needed)
Race: battle mage
Name: Berky
Age*: 21
Bio*: Grew up in the land of haafingar. Grew up as a rich farm boy of the family Janger but was always out shined by his older brother Rhyac. So i left to the town of tennebrea and left my family in my past. On my way i found a old dying man who told me of the dark arts and taught me a few basic spells which i hold dearly to my heart. Since then i have been practicing the dark arts everynight under the darkness of moon until i reach my goal to banish my brother the nether and retake the glory of the family name.
Not only is your town and Race wrong, you also attempted to join the server without being whitelisted and accepted. AND you copied an old applicatin. Perm Denied.
I dont understand, what do you mean my race and town were wrong? Please explain. I tried to join the server because i went into my email (gmail) and there were email from "Silvania". I may have applied with my old account, or something. And i typed the entire bio from scratch right as i thought of it. please cite which application you think i may have coppied. Sorry for the trouble.
Edit: I believe you want the town i came from, not the town i want to live in. correct? Still confused on the problem with the race though. Black Knight is a race on your website. is that what you wanted? If not, then will Viking do?
I dont understand, what do you mean my race and town were wrong? Please explain. I tried to join the server because i went into my email (gmail) and there were email from "Silvania". I may have applied with my old account, or something. And i typed the entire bio from scratch right as i thought of it. please cite which application you think i may have coppied. Sorry for the trouble.
Edit: I believe you want the town i came from, not the town i want to live in. correct? Still confused on the problem with the race though. Black Knight is a race on your website. is that what you wanted? If not, then will Viking do?
Black knight is, and never has been a playable race on our server. And if you had read the opening post or actually GONE to our website, you would know that.
As for the application being copied: I was informed by a fellow whitelisting team member that it was a copy of another application. Upon further inspection it is not. You simply did not check the towns or races available. Edit your application to fix these issues.
User name*:Cethis
Age*:16
Location/Time Zone*:USA Central
Did someone refer you?:No just thought this looked interesting
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.1
Land/Town:Tempestas/Valthraxus
Job*:Armorer
Race:Assassin
Name:
Age*:16
Bio*:Cethis was born into a family of Armorers and weapon-smiths,in Tennebrae.Cethis always has had a mischievous side and was constantly getting in trouble with his peers and parents. Eventually, he grew bored of his life and decided to run away from home and head to a bigger city. He left a few days after his 13th birthday and head off to Faerun. After a long journey he made it into town, but realized he had no money. So he took to life on the street and became a petty thief, learning all he could learn about stealth and thievery. He made a living off this for 2 years and then he encountered something that would change him. He got caught trying to steal a bag of gold from a merchant and he got into a struggle with the merchant, as the struggle continued the merchant pulled out a knife and tried to kill him. But, Cethis had spent the last two years on the street and knew a few things about fighting, so he disarmed the merchant and knocked him down. As the merchant looked on in fear, Cethis felt powerful, beyond what he had ever felt before. He had the choice to play with life, whether to keep the merchant alive, or to kill him. The choice was an easy one, he grabbed the gold and left leaving the merchant to himself. Later that night though, the guards found the same merchant dead with a knife in his heart. Cethis realized after that night he loved the thrill of stalking his prey and the power of death. He then choose to live his life as an assassin and kill for coin. He spent a year learning and killing, and decided it was time to move on. He left town and started making his way to Valthraxus, were he would live his life.
User name*:XlegolasX
Age*:14
Location/Time Zone*:Australia: AEST
Did someone refer you?:NO
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town: Tennebrea
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Legolas
Age*:26
Bio*: I lived a quiet life with my family on the farm, Hunting and Carpentry was my job until all the animals disappeared, trees turned into dust, all the crops started dying and sadly my parents past away. So I made a decision to travel the world with my sister Marriot. Soon enough we ran short of supply's and sadly my sister went mad and ran off. So I hired a carriage and set trail for Tennebrea.
Bio is a bit short but it does get most of whats needed out there. Accepted
User name*: jberk3
Age*: 15
Location/Time Zone*: Australia eastern standard time
Did someone refer you?: wiknz7 or ingame x legolas x
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1.0
Land/Town: tennebrea
Job*: Farmer or carpenter (if needed)
Race: battle mage
Name: Berky
Age*: 21
Bio*: Grew up in the land of haafingar. Grew up as a rich farm boy of the family Janger but was always out shined by his older brother Rhyac. So i left to the town of tennebrea and left my family in my past. On my way i found a old dying man who told me of the dark arts and taught me a few basic spells which i hold dearly to my heart. Since then i have been practicing the dark arts everynight under the darkness of moon until i reach my goal to banish my brother the nether and retake the glory of the family name.
Bit generic but at least your parents aren't dead. Accepted
User name*:PlayingCards
Age*:17
Location/Time Zone*:Eastern US
Did someone refer you?:No
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town:Valthraxus, Tempestas
Job*: Toolsmith
Race: Warrior
Name:
Age*: 17
Bio*: Born in Stonebow, raised by my father, I always dreamed of living a better life. He owned a small Tool Shop in there which barely put food on the table. At the age of 9 I became his apprentice. I spent my whole life learning and working for him, until he became too old and developed Alzheimers. With him incapable of supporting me at age 16, I decided it was time for me to journey on my own and become a Toolsmith like my father. His days in Stonebow did not yield enough money, so maybe the evil way is the better one. My aunt, who lived on the other side of town, would keep him company and take care of him while i was gone. Hopefully I can make enough money to bring back to my home in order to support him until he passes. God willing, i make it back in time...
Double checking, i was directed to silvaniamc.com after i clicked on the link for more job info.
User name*:PlayingCards
Age*:17
Location/Time Zone*:Eastern US
Did someone refer you?:No
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town:Valthraxus, Tempestas
Job*: Toolsmith
Race: Warrior
Name:
Age*: 17
Bio*: Born in Stonebow, raised by my father, I always dreamed of living a better life. He owned a small Tool Shop in there which barely put food on the table. At the age of 9 I became his apprentice. I spent my whole life learning and working for him, until he became too old and developed Alzheimers. With him incapable of supporting me at age 16, I decided it was time for me to journey on my own and become a Toolsmith like my father. His days in Stonebow did not yield enough money, so maybe the evil way is the better one. My aunt, who lived on the other side of town, would keep him company and take care of him while i was gone. Hopefully I can make enough money to bring back to my home in order to support him until he passes. God willing, i make it back in time...
Double checking, i was directed to silvaniamc.com after i clicked on the link for more job info.
User name*:TehMagicToolbox
Age*:16
Location/Time Zone*:gmt +1
Did someone refer you?:Nope
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0
Land/Town:Faerun
Job*:carpenter
Race:battlemage
Name: Ray ShieldBash
Age*:19
Bio*: Ray has always been a weird child, but thats what you get for living in the woods.
On a day he went to the desert to collect cacti and when he came back to his house he found bandits drinking out of his trinket with his grandmom and granddad captived by the bandit chief.
He asked Ray : ''Kid, give us all your belongings and we will set your grandparents free.''
He asked what the chief did and gave him all his cacti and his ring he got from his deceased father Rolak.
They set his grandparents free but right after they got out of the room they got stabbed in the back,
but the ring from his father wasnt the only thing he had got from his father, he also got a wand from him.
He used the 1 spell he learned from his father.
and it had set all the bandits on fire.
Then he unfold himself as a true killer.
He had began contract killing.
and at the same time learning the arts of the carpenting job.
When he was an apprentice carpenter he got a contract to kill his mentor.
He was full with sorrow when he killed someone where he had worked for, So long has it been since he started learning carpenting.
When Ray killed his mentor, he was known as a murderer in whole the town and the lovely little kid that he used to be was no more.
He was chased out of the city and ran in a cave.
After a long walk he found an exit next to a harbour, he sneaked on a boat to faerun in hope to find and make a new start,
Please copy and paste this form EXACTLY. Change NOTHING
User name*:lastcresendo
Age*: 15
Location/Time Zone*: USA CST
Did someone refer you?: Cethis
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1
Land/Town: Valthraxus
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Warrior
Name: Aldiac
Age*: 18
Bio*: Aldiac was born in Valthraxus but ran away from it to be in solitude for awhile, while running away he discovered his ability for carpentering in the forest. In this forest he had no allies which is why he became a warrior, someone who could stand alone and do everything that is needed. After years of solitude and mastering being a carpenter he returns to Valthraxus as a master carpenter and an above average swordsman from fighting off all the monsters in the forest. After the years of solitude he plans to slowly integrate into Valthraxus society and to provide for the needs of the citizens there.
username:Zeke1479
Age:18(might be real or not?)
Location:New York
Did someone refer you: No but it seems like a good server plus the bio could help my ELA(LOL)
Minecraft Version:1.1
Land:Shinto(though I am a traveler)
Job:Toolsmith
Race:Assassin
Name:Zekris(I'm SO creative aren't I) Mitvald
Age:20
Bio:Zekris was found in a forest when he was 10 by a family who decided to go on a hunting trip. No one really knows much about him before then, so why he was in a forest is anyone's guess. He was then adopted by the Mitvald family, who were the very ones who found him, and started living in their small village. The family was a bit worried about financial issues about having another child.( Except for the dad and son who were overjoyed that their prayers of "Please Fenikussu! SEND ANOTHER GUY INTO THIS HOUSE! We can't take having to here about 5 women's "special girl talk" everyday! PLEASE YOU OWE US!")Though, they eventually tried there best to make things work and, suprisingly, things went well.
After that incident, Zekris started working on toolsmithing with his dad to help in the family business. Then when he was 15, however, he told he's family that he thinks he should start practicing to be an assassin. Needless to say, the family was shocked and dumb struck.(The dad just fell right down) At first they rejected it, but they soon softened. So, they decided to go to the nearby town of Shinto to find a tutor. What they found was Miloa Noblis, a young assassin and a good one at that. Though there was a problem to this. He needed to stay with her for 2 years. It was a hard choice, but Zekris decided to do it. The training was grueling(like leaving in him in a forest for 3 MONTHS with nothing but an axe and a few assassination tools), but it was well worth it. He became a good assassin. Not great, but good.(Miloa's not a great mentor....ever)
After that, the years were normal and fun until he was 17. When he was 17, he announced he plans on leaving to travel around the world when he's 19 to see how different and alike the world truly is. His family was upset at the news, but still decided to let him live his dreams. 4 months from his 19th birthday, he packed a few things with him and left. It's been a year since then, and he now lives with Miloa in Shinto, but plans on going in the nearby future.
Appearance
Zekris is, to put simply, kinda short. It angers him to no ends. He usually wears a black cloak that splits in 2 at the end. It also has a blue and white lightning mark on the chest. It has 2 pockets in it. He usually wears a black pair of shoes. He usually wears a brown pair of pants. He has shoulder length blue hair. He has, as stated before, blue eyes with no pupils. Most people ask why he has these eyes, but he just says "I like my eyes like this and if I change I'm probably hit myself later. Now LEAVE ME ALONE! I'm sick of hearing it all the time!"
Personality
Zekris is a man of many moods. He can be rather serious at times. There are those times when he's "in a random mood". Though for the most part, he's a nice person. Sometimes he can be jokingly mean. He always hates being called short, to the point where he would strangle anyone who calls him short. He's good friends with his previous tutor, Miloa. He's also lazy and really(I mean REALLY)unlucky. He usually doesn't go on killing missions a real lot, but instead information missions. He also really likes put on different costumes for the specific mission.
User name*:juandre1001
Age*:16
Location/Time Zone*:britan london
Did someone refer you?:no
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1): 1.1
Land/Town:Faerun
Job*: farmer
Race: battle mage
Name: Juan Van De Meer
Age*: 18
Bio*:
Juan was never the most fortunate child. His father was a carpenter he met his mother one day in the market. She was there selling weat with her fater he sent her of to buy an extra chest for their living room. He saw her and offered to drop of the chest round their house. when he went by they went for a walk round the farm and things just took of from there. His mother inherited the farm and his parents had two children; Juan and his brother Jack. Jack was the oldest and when Juan turned 18 he was told his brother inherited the farm. Out of spite he left his home and went out to start his own farm more successful than that of his families. Unfortunately this was not as fruitful as he had planned. He found that he did not have enough money to start a farm and he was to ashamed to go back to his parents.
This is when he left to find a new start. He started on a long journey on a mountain path to visit new lands. Sleeping in caves and eating what he could scavenge from the land for food and clothes. One day he came across a group of bandits he had not been trained in combat and so was defenceless no weapon and no help. he ran of helplessly, then all of a sudden the bandits caught on fire and scattered of the side of the cliff. He was quivering with fear when a mage walked up to him and was astonished when he asked if he was alright.
It turns out the mage and his father where once good friends his father was a Nobel but never took much interest in his blood line and how one day he just went to the market and never came back. The mage took care of him for a while and thought him basic mage craft. The mage then asked to escort him home but now upsets with his quest to own his own farm he declined. The mage decided to go visit Juan’s father (Joseph Van Der Meer) But before they went their separate ways the mage gave Juan some advice and told him to visit the town Faerun as here he might find a way to for fill his ambitions.
Please copy and paste this form EXACTLY. Change NOTHING.
Coincidentially, I am also called Juan. An important historical figure (in the server's lore) is also called Juan, who is also a mage. The bio is completely different, of course.
/me shudders
Anyways, have one very major problem with your bio. It is too cliché. The "mage" that finds you is, to put simply, the overused old man in the woods. Try changing the part with him and perhaps adding a few more details to your leaving of the farm. Heres an idea, why not have your father teach you magic since you were small? That would most certainly be a twist.
/me looks at other bios
yeah, most certainly a twist.
username:Zeke1479
Age:18(might be real or not?)
Location:New York
Did someone refer you: No but it seems like a good server plus the bio could help my ELA(LOL)
Minecraft Version:1.1
Land:Shinto(though I am a traveler)
Job:Toolsmith
Race:Assassin(a little bit of Warrior in me and I knows a few spells)
Name:Zekris(I'm SO creative aren't I)
Age:20
Bio: Zekris is a strange man to say the least. Besides him appearing 10 years ago out of seemingly nowhere, no one knows anything about him. Besides that though, he's mostly normal. Well except for 1 thing. He has no pupils. Literally, all you can see are blue eyes full of life, but no pupils. Though as for the "appearance out of nowhere" thing, it would be better to explain in a story.
In the small village, Mikos, which is a few miles away from Shinto, things are pretty normal. Until axactly 10 years ago, when a village not to far away from Mikos was suddenly destroyed. Mostly everyone survived, with a few deaths, and ,strangely enough, a few disappearances. Though the strangest thing was a 10 year old boy, or at least he LOOKED 10, being found unconscious with a protective blue cat and black falcon. Everyone was weary at this sight since he was the first person found and seemed suspicious. But one man didn't have any suspicions at all towards the mysterious boy. That man was Seril Mitvald. Heck, he was the first one to pick up the boy and tell the healers to heal him in the first place. Because of this, everyone decided Seril should take him in, for the mean time.
After Zekris came to, he was viewed as a threat by most of the villagers. Except, of course, Seril. Especially since he had 1 more son now. When you've been surrounded by five girls and a mother for 17 years, you'd probably be on the roof saying "Please Fenikussu or anyone hearing! SEND MORE MALES HERE! We can't take being surrounded by girls and having to hear their "special girl talk" everyday! Come on, you owe us!" like Seril and his son, Kytes, having been doing ever since. The family, in a whole is, Filo the 40 year old mother,Seril the 41 year old father, Mila and Sewila the 21 year old twins, Kytes the 22 year old son, Verosa the 12 year old daughter, Gilia the 7 year old daughter, Pifia the 15 year old daughter, and Foochos the 6 year old dog.(All present day ages) Thankfully they have quite a bit of money so they've been able to avoid finance issues, mostly. Sadly for Zekris, even his own family was suspicious. But thankfully, not viewed as a threat by them.
Eventually, though, the inevitable happened and Zekris was put on trial. At first things didn't seem to be in Zekris's favor. Mostly because he wouldn't explain why he was at the village and none of the villagers from the crashed village site recall knowing him that well. Though when it seemed his chances were gone, he suddenly admitted about him being there. He said he was there just traveling through, saw something in the sky coming towards the crashed village, and went to warn them. He got there, but stayed to see if he could prevent the strange object from crashing. He came masked, though, so no one know who he was. The villagers recalled seeing a masked boy and Zekris was let go. It didn't stop some of the Mikos villagers eyes of hatred, but he was at peace now.Though a few months later, the day that made him not viewed as a threat, but as a great ally.
It was a normal day for Mikos. Sunny day, everyday tasks. In all, just perfect. Then, news came of an army of monsters coming to the village in 2 days. Everyone prepared for the oncoming battle despite the their natural peacefulness. Seril worked hard to make weapons and such to help out. However, a few were missing from every time he counted for the orders he got and he had to make more. Also Zekris seemed to just vanish on a fishing trip he decided to go on. Then, as expected, the army of monsters came. The village fought hard and long, but were just barely losing the fight.Seril and other toolsmiths were working hard to make as many weapons as they could, as fast as possible. But then, Zekris ran in with a whole cascade of Shinto soldiers with him, some of which had Seril's weapons. Not only that, Zekris was fighting too, and very well at that. The monsters retreated and the village was saved. The soldiers went back and everyone in the fight was rewarded and praised. Especially Zekris, for what he did. For the next few weeks, he was a hero to them. After those few weeks, he was just a regular person with no hatred towards him or anything. Zekris finally felt like he belonged.
After those first few months, things were pretty normal. Zekris was happy and so was his family and the villagers. Zekris was also being taught about being a toolsmith by Seril. Plus, the blue cat, Coru, and black falcon, Wisteria, he had were still coming with him everywhere and were really relaxed after the the big battle. Though, then there came the awkward day of realization. And by realization, I mean when Zekris started training in assassination 5 years later. To say the least Seril was struck dumb. But either way, Zekris was perfect for it. He was great at sneaking around, liked the night, was great at hiding around, and a master of disguise. Seril didn't object though and they decided to find Zekris a tutor. They found the person they were looking for in Shinto. Delisa Jovis, a professional assassin. She's a short-tempered and hot headed woman, but is really nice, strong, and reliable. But what was interesting about her, was she was only 22 and was already extremely powerful. Her training was intense. Who am I kidding, intense is an understatement. Zekris was under her training for 2 years. The first thing she did was make him survive in the forest for 3 months with only assassination tools, Coru, Wisteria, and he could only hunt at night. She stayed with him, not for his safety, but because she was really bored with the recent assassination jobs. Though when those 2 years were up, he was an experienced assassin. Delisa said if he ever wanted to practice his assassination work he could come to her. (Even though Zekris doesn't usually do actual assassination jobs that often, but instead collecting info) Either way, he never came back, but say to hang out.
Again things were pretty normal afterwards. But then the alarming news came when Zekris was 17. Zekris said he was going to go travel after he became 19. Needless to say, the family was shocked. They asked why and Zekris said that he just wanted to see the world for what it was. They kept asking, barely giving Zekris time to answer, except for one person. Then that's when Kytes spoke up. " If this is what he wants, it's his choice. What would you rather have him do. Not being able to live his dreams at his house or being happy doing what he wants?" They were struck dumb, but they saw Kytes point and decided to let Zekris go when the time came. So 4 months after his 19th birthday, he started packing and left from home. It was a sad, but also a good day. He is currently in Shinto with Delisa. It's been a year since that day and Zekris has become a man that they are undoubtedly proud of.
Abilities
As said, Zekris is a master of disguise. He could change into a costume in just minutes, no matter how difficult it seemed to put on or create. He's also learned a few spells so he is even able to change genders and make Coru and Wisteria humans. Heck, sometimes it seems Zekris may has just changed bodies. He has excellent hearing and great eyesight in the night. He can easily sneak on someone with out being heard and has great reflexes. He also has some skill with swords. Due to his training in toolsmithing, he can also create fairly good weapons.
Appearance
Zekris is, put simply. kinda short. It angers him to no ends. He usually wears a black cloak that splits in 2 at the end. It also has a blue and white lightning mark on the chest. It has 2 pockets in it. He usually wears a black pair of shoes. He usually wears a brown pair of pants. He has shoulder length blue hair. He has, as stated before, blue eyes with no pupils. Most people ask why he has these eyes, but he just says "I like my eyes like this and if I change I'm probably hit myself later. Now LEAVE ME ALONE! I'm sick of hearing it all the time!" When he's gender bendered he's virtually the same, except he might wear a knee low skirt and his hair goes down to the lower half of his back. It's also sometimes in a ponytail. He also has a bag with him. In the bag, there is Coru and Wisteria. Sometimes they'll come out and rest on Zekris's shoulders. Coru is a talking blue cat with black eyes and her entire right paw is black and there are strange bubbles coming from her left. When she's in human form, she has blue hair that goes a bit below the shoulders. She is lightly tan skinned, wears a green T shirt, gray pants, and blue boots. From the middle of her lower right arm down, it's completely black and somewhat claw shaped at the hands. Her left arm still has the bubbles. Wisteria is a talking black falcon with piercing green eyes. He usually has a gray vest with a hood that covers his face on. When he's in human form, he's gray skinned with the same vest and hood. He's black haired, has black pants and brown shoes.
Personality
Zekris is a man of many moods. He can be rather serious at times. There are those times when he's "in a random mood". Though for the most part, he's a nice person. Sometimes he can be jokingly mean. He always hates being called short, to the point where he would strangle anyone who calls him short. He's also lazy. The weird part is that sometimes he goes into crazy, bloodthirsty frenzy he calls Insanity.When he's like that, he enjoys delivering pain and taking it and laughs manically. -Coru- She's usually very energetic and fun having. She's also very naive about the world and is very adventurous. She is very protective over Zekris and usually calls him "Zekey-sama". When Zekris is threatened, though, she becomes incredibly serious and will kill anyone who tries to hurt him. She tries to snap Zekris out of it when he goes into Insanity. -Wisteria- A very serious guy. Most of the time, he doesn't even talk. He usually grunts. Coru always begs him to join in stuff she does, which he usually does. Just like Coru, though, he's very protective of Zekris. Except he's 5x more protective. He might just try to kill you just for being near Zekris. Zekris always tries to make sure he doesn't get carried away though. he tries to stop Insanity Zekris by fighting him.
I am leaving this one to Nron, as I am sure he will find what best suits it.
username:Zeke1479
Age:18(might be real or not?)
Location:New York
Did someone refer you: No but it seems like a good server plus the bio could help my ELA(LOL)
Minecraft Version:1.1
Land:Shinto(though I am a traveler)
Job:Toolsmith
Race:Assassin(a little bit of Warrior in me and I knows a few spells)
Name:Zekris(I'm SO creative aren't I)
Age:20
Bio: Zekris is a (Confusing and often times poorly directed bio follows)
Abilities
As said, Zekris is a (Self glorification and what I would refer to as 'over powering' of character)
Appearance
Zekris is, (Gender bender? Seriously? No matter how many anime fans this server may have, myself included, this is too much.)
Personality
Gender bender....
Im denying this application until a few things are changed. First, USE THE ENTER KEY. Your bio is MASHED together making it difficult to read in one sweep. Not that that really matters as the entire thing is utterly confusing. Your bio revolves around multiple characters which you cannot hope to even act out. You have such awkward things as GENDER BENDER. And somehow the entire thing gives me a vague memory of Bleach.
Furthermore, you overpowered your character. Another no no. You put that your race has warrior and spell talents: Yet another no no.
You need to take a look back, tone down the insanity and self praise and remember: You are nobody amazing when you arrive here. Fame, glory, and power are yours to gain once you arrive. Get involved with the RP. RP with others. Then over time you will make a name for yourself. Its quite simple.
Once again: Tone it down, keep the writing to a simple form that isn't confusing to read, USE THE ENTER KEY, and keep it reasonable.
Im denying this application until a few things are changed. First, USE THE ENTER KEY. Your bio is MASHED together making it difficult to read in one sweep. Not that that really matters as the entire thing is utterly confusing. Your bio revolves around multiple characters which you cannot hope to even act out. You have such awkward things as GENDER BENDER. And somehow the entire thing gives me a vague memory of Bleach.
Furthermore, you overpowered your character. Another no no. You put that your race has warrior and spell talents: Yet another no no.
You need to take a look back, tone down the insanity and self praise and remember: You are nobody amazing when you arrive here. Fame, glory, and power are yours to gain once you arrive. Get involved with the RP. RP with others. Then over time you will make a name for yourself. Its quite simple.
Once again: Tone it down, keep the writing to a simple form that isn't confusing to read, USE THE ENTER KEY, and keep it reasonable.
Okay I'll admit you're right I'll try toning it down a bit. I have to admit I did kinda of overpower myself. Kinda sucks I have to rewrite it though since that took me a LONG time to make. I'll shorten down the story for one, get rid of the spells and warrior things, get rid of Insanity(good to since it would turn into a annoyance), sadly get rid of Coru and Wisteria(the one thing I really regret about getting rid of), and pretty much tone it down. Though to be truthful, I do watch Bleach(Histugaya FTW!) As for the gender bender.....yeah I was pretty stupid doing that one. BTW about the spacing, I actually thought that the spaces would have been in there, so sorry about that. Plus, no offense, but you were a tad harsh dude.
Not bad. Its simple yet tells enough about your character to establish his place in the world. I'm assuming this Murmur person is going to be applying here as well?
I am, just finishing up the bio. It's okay if I come from another land, so long as it isn't Earth, correct? The bio guidelines seemed to say I could, but I wanted to double check.
That is correct, so long as it isn't earth.
Age*: 16 (Literate and mature.)
Location/Time Zone*: EST
Did someone refer you?: Nope! Just looking about for a good rp server.
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.0-1.1
Land/Town: Shinto, in the Nation of Ramonia.
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Murmur
Age*: 21
Bio*: Hailing from the land of Syyrnatar, a hunter who grew up in a forest cabin wanted a fresh start. New landscapes to explore, new flora, and new fauna. Nothing dark, nothing sad, he lived a great life, just got bored. Thus, he boarded a ship to Silvania to experience that thrill of learning new tricks from a fresh landscape. As he got off his ship with nearly nothing, he found Barry, in trouble with the guards. He'd found friends this way before, and decided to save him. Barry and Murmur became fast friends, deciding to ally themselves and experience Silvania as a duo.
Accepted
Accepted
Age*:16
Location/Time Zone*:USA Central
Did someone refer you?:No just thought this looked interesting
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.1
Land/Town:Tempestas/Valthraxus
Job*:Armorer
Race:Assassin
Name:
Age*:16
Bio*:Cethis was born into a family of Armorers and weapon-smiths,in Tennebrae.Cethis always has had a mischievous side and was constantly getting in trouble with his peers and parents. Eventually, he grew bored of his life and decided to run away from home and head to a bigger city. He left a few days after his 13th birthday and head off to Faerun. After a long journey he made it into town, but realized he had no money. So he took to life on the street and became a petty thief, learning all he could learn about stealth and thievery. He made a living off this for 2 years and then he encountered something that would change him. He got caught trying to steal a bag of gold from a merchant and he got into a struggle with the merchant, as the struggle continued the merchant pulled out a knife and tried to kill him. But, Cethis had spent the last two years on the street and knew a few things about fighting, so he disarmed the merchant and knocked him down. As the merchant looked on in fear, Cethis felt powerful, beyond what he had ever felt before. He had the choice to play with life, whether to keep the merchant alive, or to kill him. The choice was an easy one, he grabbed the gold and left leaving the merchant to himself. Later that night though, the guards found the same merchant dead with a knife in his heart. Cethis realized after that night he loved the thrill of stalking his prey and the power of death. He then choose to live his life as an assassin and kill for coin. He spent a year learning and killing, and decided it was time to move on. He left town and started making his way to Valthraxus, were he would live his life.
Age*:14
Location/Time Zone*:Australia: AEST
Did someone refer you?:NO
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town: Tennebrea
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Hunter
Name: Legolas
Age*:26
Bio*: I lived a quiet life with my family on the farm, Hunting and Carpentry was my job until all the animals disappeared, trees turned into dust, all the crops started dying and sadly my parents past away. So I made a decision to travel the world with my sister Marriot. Soon enough we ran short of supply's and sadly my sister went mad and ran off. So I hired a carriage and set trail for Tennebrea.
Age*: 15
Location/Time Zone*: Australia eastern standard time
Did someone refer you?: wiknz7 or ingame x legolas x
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1.0
Land/Town: tennebrea
Job*: Farmer or carpenter (if needed)
Race: battle mage
Name: Berky
Age*: 21
Bio*: Grew up in the land of haafingar. Grew up as a rich farm boy of the family Janger but was always out shined by his older brother Rhyac. So i left to the town of tennebrea and left my family in my past. On my way i found a old dying man who told me of the dark arts and taught me a few basic spells which i hold dearly to my heart. Since then i have been practicing the dark arts everynight under the darkness of moon until i reach my goal to banish my brother the nether and retake the glory of the family name.
Gotta get that taste.
I dont understand, what do you mean my race and town were wrong? Please explain. I tried to join the server because i went into my email (gmail) and there were email from "Silvania". I may have applied with my old account, or something. And i typed the entire bio from scratch right as i thought of it. please cite which application you think i may have coppied. Sorry for the trouble.
Edit: I believe you want the town i came from, not the town i want to live in. correct? Still confused on the problem with the race though. Black Knight is a race on your website. is that what you wanted? If not, then will Viking do?
Black knight is, and never has been a playable race on our server. And if you had read the opening post or actually GONE to our website, you would know that.
As for the application being copied: I was informed by a fellow whitelisting team member that it was a copy of another application. Upon further inspection it is not. You simply did not check the towns or races available. Edit your application to fix these issues.
Suppose this will do. Accepted
Bio is a bit short but it does get most of whats needed out there. Accepted
Bit generic but at least your parents aren't dead. Accepted
Age*:17
Location/Time Zone*:Eastern US
Did someone refer you?:No
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*:1.0.0
Land/Town:Valthraxus, Tempestas
Job*: Toolsmith
Race: Warrior
Name:
Age*: 17
Bio*: Born in Stonebow, raised by my father, I always dreamed of living a better life. He owned a small Tool Shop in there which barely put food on the table. At the age of 9 I became his apprentice. I spent my whole life learning and working for him, until he became too old and developed Alzheimers. With him incapable of supporting me at age 16, I decided it was time for me to journey on my own and become a Toolsmith like my father. His days in Stonebow did not yield enough money, so maybe the evil way is the better one. My aunt, who lived on the other side of town, would keep him company and take care of him while i was gone. Hopefully I can make enough money to bring back to my home in order to support him until he passes. God willing, i make it back in time...
Double checking, i was directed to silvaniamc.com after i clicked on the link for more job info.
Much better. Accepted.
Didn't miss you. Ignoring you until I have the inclination to read your app without hitting my head.
Much better. Accepted.
Age*: 15
Location/Time Zone*: USA CST
Did someone refer you?: Cethis
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1
Land/Town: Valthraxus
Job*: Carpenter
Race: Warrior
Name: Aldiac
Age*: 18
Bio*: Aldiac was born in Valthraxus but ran away from it to be in solitude for awhile, while running away he discovered his ability for carpentering in the forest. In this forest he had no allies which is why he became a warrior, someone who could stand alone and do everything that is needed. After years of solitude and mastering being a carpenter he returns to Valthraxus as a master carpenter and an above average swordsman from fighting off all the monsters in the forest. After the years of solitude he plans to slowly integrate into Valthraxus society and to provide for the needs of the citizens there.
Age:18(might be real or not?)
Location:New York
Did someone refer you: No but it seems like a good server plus the bio could help my ELA(LOL)
Minecraft Version:1.1
Land:Shinto(though I am a traveler)
Job:Toolsmith
Race:Assassin
Name:Zekris(I'm SO creative aren't I) Mitvald
Age:20
Bio:Zekris was found in a forest when he was 10 by a family who decided to go on a hunting trip. No one really knows much about him before then, so why he was in a forest is anyone's guess. He was then adopted by the Mitvald family, who were the very ones who found him, and started living in their small village. The family was a bit worried about financial issues about having another child.( Except for the dad and son who were overjoyed that their prayers of "Please Fenikussu! SEND ANOTHER GUY INTO THIS HOUSE! We can't take having to here about 5 women's "special girl talk" everyday! PLEASE YOU OWE US!")Though, they eventually tried there best to make things work and, suprisingly, things went well.
After that incident, Zekris started working on toolsmithing with his dad to help in the family business. Then when he was 15, however, he told he's family that he thinks he should start practicing to be an assassin. Needless to say, the family was shocked and dumb struck.(The dad just fell right down) At first they rejected it, but they soon softened. So, they decided to go to the nearby town of Shinto to find a tutor. What they found was Miloa Noblis, a young assassin and a good one at that. Though there was a problem to this. He needed to stay with her for 2 years. It was a hard choice, but Zekris decided to do it. The training was grueling(like leaving in him in a forest for 3 MONTHS with nothing but an axe and a few assassination tools), but it was well worth it. He became a good assassin. Not great, but good.(Miloa's not a great mentor....ever)
After that, the years were normal and fun until he was 17. When he was 17, he announced he plans on leaving to travel around the world when he's 19 to see how different and alike the world truly is. His family was upset at the news, but still decided to let him live his dreams. 4 months from his 19th birthday, he packed a few things with him and left. It's been a year since then, and he now lives with Miloa in Shinto, but plans on going in the nearby future.
Appearance
Zekris is, to put simply, kinda short. It angers him to no ends. He usually wears a black cloak that splits in 2 at the end. It also has a blue and white lightning mark on the chest. It has 2 pockets in it. He usually wears a black pair of shoes. He usually wears a brown pair of pants. He has shoulder length blue hair. He has, as stated before, blue eyes with no pupils. Most people ask why he has these eyes, but he just says "I like my eyes like this and if I change I'm probably hit myself later. Now LEAVE ME ALONE! I'm sick of hearing it all the time!"
Personality
Zekris is a man of many moods. He can be rather serious at times. There are those times when he's "in a random mood". Though for the most part, he's a nice person. Sometimes he can be jokingly mean. He always hates being called short, to the point where he would strangle anyone who calls him short. He's good friends with his previous tutor, Miloa. He's also lazy and really(I mean REALLY)unlucky. He usually doesn't go on killing missions a real lot, but instead information missions. He also really likes put on different costumes for the specific mission.
Coincidentially, I am also called Juan. An important historical figure (in the server's lore) is also called Juan, who is also a mage. The bio is completely different, of course.
/me shudders
Anyways, have one very major problem with your bio. It is too cliché. The "mage" that finds you is, to put simply, the overused old man in the woods. Try changing the part with him and perhaps adding a few more details to your leaving of the farm. Heres an idea, why not have your father teach you magic since you were small? That would most certainly be a twist.
/me looks at other bios
yeah, most certainly a twist.
I am leaving this one to Nron, as I am sure he will find what best suits it.
Im denying this application until a few things are changed. First, USE THE ENTER KEY. Your bio is MASHED together making it difficult to read in one sweep. Not that that really matters as the entire thing is utterly confusing. Your bio revolves around multiple characters which you cannot hope to even act out. You have such awkward things as GENDER BENDER. And somehow the entire thing gives me a vague memory of Bleach.
Furthermore, you overpowered your character. Another no no. You put that your race has warrior and spell talents: Yet another no no.
You need to take a look back, tone down the insanity and self praise and remember: You are nobody amazing when you arrive here. Fame, glory, and power are yours to gain once you arrive. Get involved with the RP. RP with others. Then over time you will make a name for yourself. Its quite simple.
Once again: Tone it down, keep the writing to a simple form that isn't confusing to read, USE THE ENTER KEY, and keep it reasonable.
Okay I'll admit you're right I'll try toning it down a bit. I have to admit I did kinda of overpower myself. Kinda sucks I have to rewrite it though since that took me a LONG time to make. I'll shorten down the story for one, get rid of the spells and warrior things, get rid of Insanity(good to since it would turn into a annoyance), sadly get rid of Coru and Wisteria(the one thing I really regret about getting rid of), and pretty much tone it down. Though to be truthful, I do watch Bleach(Histugaya FTW!) As for the gender bender.....yeah I was pretty stupid doing that one. BTW about the spacing, I actually thought that the spaces would have been in there, so sorry about that. Plus, no offense, but you were a tad harsh dude.