I'm making my own rap song, at my friends studio, and I'm wondering what you guys think of my lyrics. the song is "Dear Haters"
Yeah... These haters say I'm not the rapper type, they say I ruin their apitite, they say I'm about as big as a mite,
these haters say I have no life, that I'll never get a wife, That they'll kill me with a knife, in just one slice,
so I tell em that aint nice, keep going that you'll pay the price, yeah keep scurrying around like little mice, cause I say to
you:
Dear haters, I know you be listening, so lets not settle this later, cause I'm a skater, hardcore, settle it with my fists,
its
parkour, you know it for sure, You might be haten, but I aint listenin' my rap is glistenin' Hey I ain't whistelin,
these haters say I be too scronny, that my uncle ronny could beat me, they say I'm not dodgy, they say i'm all talk but no
walk, that all I do is squawk, that I don't rock, well I say rest in peace tupac, they say you suck, and they got more luck,
so I better duck when the dukes come out, these haters say that i may aswell be the blind guy from the key,they say hey, you
aint no good so I juwst stood there and said that I would be OK with their hate cause I'm a mate, so I say that they be too
late their hate don't suffocate me, no more, and all you haters, I say forever more:
dear haters, I know you be listenin' so lets not settle this later, cause I'm a skatwe, hardcore, settle it wit my fists,
parkour, you know it for sure, you might be hate, but I aint listenin' my rap is glistenin, hey I aint whistelin'
these haters and downraters think they make craters in me, well it don't hurt me no more, I'm like the book of lore, Now watch
me soar through the air like a word, wit my sword, and I pray "dear lord, you gotta help, I ain't scorin' and these haters be
torn and all they do is morn, so help them save ben, father, son, holy spirit, amen." these haters hate me cause of my
religion, they be haten on my friends cause they're austrailian, yep thats their equation, well I say to them I got a vision
of their abraision, invasion, evasion, that they're vespasian, that I'm gonna make a collision, cause its my decision, from that
I invision me in prison, look at me I got lazer vision, I think thats a delusion, oh look at that, its an implosion, erosion,
oh look at that its an intrusion.
yeah... take that haters.
thoughts?
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Sometimes I dress up as Slender Man and sneak up on people at night.
noice mate but, work on
"I invision me in prison, look at me I got lazer vision, I think thats a delusion, oh look at that, its an implosion, erosion,
oh look at that its an intrusion. " Just makes you sound like a psycho.
noice mate but, work on
"I invision me in prison, look at me I got lazer vision, I think thats a delusion, oh look at that, its an implosion, erosion,
oh look at that its an intrusion. " Just makes you sound like a psycho.
I was running out of good rhymes, so I got f*cked up...
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Sometimes I dress up as Slender Man and sneak up on people at night.
I dislike rap. And think it's one of the three anuses of music. But that's just me.
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~ I've thought about the phrase 'Money is the root of all evil' and I have to disagree. Evil isn't dependant on an object. I say that want is the root of all evil.
Why all the hate on techno? I was typing to my Online bud last night and this is what they said.
Me: I really like techno..
Freind: I find that really funny
Me: Oh why? What makes it so funny?
Freind: That you think of Techno as music
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That's three mass invasions within the same bloody month! I mean, seriously! The UDTU is attacking now, Blue has a sleeper attack coming soon, and now an invasion by space pirates? What is this, Russia if every american-made FPS happened at once?! - MagicallyDwarven
Rap requires no talent.
Pop requires no talent.
Country requires no talent to write.
The three genres combined are responsible for most of the crap that's been spewed into the industry.
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~ I've thought about the phrase 'Money is the root of all evil' and I have to disagree. Evil isn't dependant on an object. I say that want is the root of all evil.
Rap requires no talent.
Pop requires no talent.
Country requires no talent to write.
The three genres combined are responsible for most of the crap that's been spewed into the industry.
No talent huh? Then why don't you just write a country song or be a pop singer? Or hell, if it's so easy and doesn't require talent, right some lyrics and become a rap star. I hear all 3 choices pay well, so go ahead and jump on!
Yeah... These haters say I'm not the rapper type, they say I ruin their apitite, they say I'm about as big as a mite,
these haters say I have no life, that I'll never get a wife, That they'll kill me with a knife, in just one slice,
so I tell em that aint nice, keep going that you'll pay the price, yeah keep scurrying around like little mice, cause I say to
you:
Dear haters, I know you be listening, so lets not settle this later, cause I'm a skater, hardcore, settle it with my fists,
its
parkour, you know it for sure, You might be haten, but I aint listenin' my rap is glistenin' Hey I ain't whistelin,
these haters say I be too scronny, that my uncle ronny could beat me, they say I'm not dodgy, they say i'm all talk but no
walk, that all I do is squawk, that I don't rock, well I say rest in peace tupac, they say you suck, and they got more luck,
so I better duck when the dukes come out, these haters say that i may aswell be the blind guy from the key,they say hey, you
aint no good so I juwst stood there and said that I would be OK with their hate cause I'm a mate, so I say that they be too
late their hate don't suffocate me, no more, and all you haters, I say forever more:
dear haters, I know you be listenin' so lets not settle this later, cause I'm a skatwe, hardcore, settle it wit my fists,
parkour, you know it for sure, you might be hate, but I aint listenin' my rap is glistenin, hey I aint whistelin'
these haters and downraters think they make craters in me, well it don't hurt me no more, I'm like the book of lore, Now watch
me soar through the air like a word, wit my sword, and I pray "dear lord, you gotta help, I ain't scorin' and these haters be
torn and all they do is morn, so help them save ben, father, son, holy spirit, amen." these haters hate me cause of my
religion, they be haten on my friends cause they're austrailian, yep thats their equation, well I say to them I got a vision
of their abraision, invasion, evasion, that they're vespasian, that I'm gonna make a collision, cause its my decision, from that
I invision me in prison, look at me I got lazer vision, I think thats a delusion, oh look at that, its an implosion, erosion,
oh look at that its an intrusion.
yeah... take that haters.
thoughts?
"I invision me in prison, look at me I got lazer vision, I think thats a delusion, oh look at that, its an implosion, erosion,
oh look at that its an intrusion. " Just makes you sound like a psycho.
I am guessing thats a lie?
No I'm serious.
Well, thank you good sir.
EDIT: its just my bias about rap though.
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I was running out of good rhymes, so I got f*cked up...
Agreed.
Why all the hate on techno? I was typing to my Online bud last night and this is what they said.
Me: I really like techno..
Freind: I find that really funny
Me: Oh why? What makes it so funny?
Freind: That you think of Techno as music
.....
Nah. The three anuses are Rap, Pop, and Country.
Why?
Rap requires no talent.
Pop requires no talent.
Country requires no talent to write.
The three genres combined are responsible for most of the crap that's been spewed into the industry.
But I think haters gonna hate.
No talent huh? Then why don't you just write a country song or be a pop singer? Or hell, if it's so easy and doesn't require talent, right some lyrics and become a rap star. I hear all 3 choices pay well, so go ahead and jump on!
Destorm FTW!
Don't. The world suffers enough noise pollution.
416 stone
296 stone slab (150 blocks)
149 stone stairs (228 blocks)
794 total stone
1082 blackstone
174 blackstone slab (87 blocks)
52 blackstone stairs (78 blocks)
1247 total blackstone
(not counting drawbridges and portcullises)
in fact, as a wise man once said:
Now Metal, that's where it's at IMO.