((From what we discussed and what he seems to have said in his bio it sounds like basic elemental spells. If he'd like to clarify though that would be good :)))
((I've decided to take a break from video game playing and homework doing, and continue on with our adventure.))
[Nu]
As my feet hit across the ground with all of their power, I began to see my mistake in turning. I was headed straight for the church now, and more so towards the rest of the group. I could faintly see a figure in the distance waving. I couldn't tell who it was, but it looked like a signal of sorts. As we ran closer, I made it out to be none other than Keima, and could hear a slight hit of what he said. He wanted me to take the giant towards them. It relieved myself a bit to know that they were ready to fight. I still didn't speak aloud, in the case that the monster would know our plans. I started to follow Keima as I caught up. He seemed to be smiling, oddly. "Why are you so happy Katsuragi-sama?" I asked him in between breaths. "Because this will be over soon," he replied. This too made me feel better as well, but not to the extent of his happiness. I looked back momentarily once Keima had began running alongside as well. "He's very scary from up close. I didn't quite think he'd be this tall," Keima stated. "That scared me too," I agreed. He looked back at the skeleton and frowned for a moment. "Where's the other? Is he hiding, or has he been-" "yes, he's dead." I finished him. "Don't talk about it anymore, I already feel enough guilt." Keima backed off from the subject immediately, conserving energy now by not talking.
[Sarah]
Following the girl and skeleton soon became more eventful. Now, between cracks in buildings, I could see that Keima had joined them oddly enough. There didn't seem to be signs of any of the others, but it looked as though they hadn't entirely abandoned the runners. Keima seemed to say that they had a plan. The perfect opportunity to show myself and help them fight the forest off. Though, it seemed like the forest couldn't even see Keima. Like he was entirely focused on Nu and the skeleton, yet not him. He must have been given magic... Or a forest warding pendent. I never thought that it actually worked, I just knew that's what it was believed to do. It seems that what I had given him actually warded away the forest by invisibility. Very fascinating to witness.
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"Zazhigalka. I think this is Russian for 'smash your enemy's face in and then set him on fire.' I could be wrong though."
"Never be ashamed of sadness. Embrace it, love it, but don't become an emotional masochist. Without sadness, I guarantee you we would have one hundred times more killers in the world, and ten times as many wars."
"Ah-ha!" the titan shouts, turning itself to look towards where you were realizing it had nearly lost you. "Run!" the sobbing voice cries out, having no say in the actions of the towering monster while it battered apart an older looking building to make it's journey towards your location shorter. With a heavy kick the beast burst onto the street you were on then began to give chase, it's steps however slow and lumbering still enough to begin closing the gap between your group and it's stomping feet.
[The Almanac]
"Four, that's beautiful. Now to be safe we should-" I had begun saying, silenced as the ground seemed to quake slightly. "Four will need to do for now, get what we have ready," I briefly told Liera, flying outside to see everyone approaching. "Keep running straight; don't stop!" I shouted to them, believing they were close enough to hear me then flying back inside. "Alright here's what you need to do Liera; as that thing passes by you need to take one of the runic knives and stab it in the ankle or foot or wherever, so long as it breaks the bark and gets in there. Do not break the handle off, does that make sense?" I asked finishing just as the stomps sounded as if they were nearly on top of us. Again I flew outside, and waved the three runners to keep going, past the blacksmiths then looked up at the towering behemoth which was nearly upon them. "Liera, NOW!" I shouted, he opportunity to strike arising now as the titan planted it's foot right at the edge of the street.((Nice to know you're taking a break :). How's your work coming?))
((Is it safe to say that I'm only going to speak when responded too? If not, I have no clue what will happen. I have no clue who controls Herobrine, (I know the rules say nobody does, but does that mean anybody can use him when he's attacking you when you're alone?) and what would I do? Nothing ever comes up this mountain (forever alone...) and it's pretty tall.))
Name: Noah | Age: 14 | Species: Human | Survival: 1 week
Religion: Notch following | Language: English, Wolf | Faction: To live a full life and avenge his brothers.
Looks: Dark-Gray Hoodie with hood up, Black shirt underneath, Dark-Blue jeans and, Black & White shoes.
Key Items: Iron Sword, Bow, Photo of him, Damian, Jakie (Brothers) and, Max (dog).
Items: Large Quiver with 128 arrows, Flint & Steel and, a bone.
Bio: Noah was eating dinner and talking about random stuff with his brothers when Max barked. "You gotta go outside?" He asked. Max barked again. "Fine." he replied.
"I still find it weird he can understand what dogs are saying" one of his brothers said. "Ditto." said his other brother. When Noah opened the door he saw his village was on fire.
Dead bodies were all over the path-ways, houses reduced to ashes, People screaming as they ran on fire (Discord would be proud). "Grab your things!" Noah screamed as he bolted back in to get his stuff.
He grabbed his Iron Sword, his Bow, his Large Quiver containing 128 arrows, a Flint & Steel, a photo and, a bone for Max. As he and his brothers and dog were booking it towards the forest half a mile down the road, a guard missed a shot and hit one of his brothers in the back of the head, instantly killing him.
"Jakie!" He screamed as he turned around to get his brother.
"Noah, its too late!" said Damian(his other brother) as he grabbed Noah and turned him to face the forest. A few days later, Damian was hunting for some food when he was captured by a minion, and killed.
A few hours after THAT, Noah and Max went looking for him. But what they found was Damian's dead body decapitated with his head on a stick.
"Soon, you will die as well." Said a mysterious voice in Noah's head.
"Who are you!?" Noah said aloud and ed as he drew his sword.
"Oh it doesn't matter who I am, it only matters who you are." said the voice.
"When I find you, you are ing dead for what you did." Noah said.
"Oh you will find me, but in time. *Short evil chuckle" said the voice
((I actually was on here before as EpicSpyHunter, but I forgot the password. As for Isaac, he tripped on flat land and fell on a random pencil that impaled him in the eye :P))
((Is it safe to say that I'm only going to speak when responded too? If not, I have no clue what will happen. I have no clue who controls Herobrine, (I know the rules say nobody does, but does that mean anybody can use him when he's attacking you when you're alone?) and what would I do? Nothing ever comes up this mountain (forever alone...) and it's pretty tall.))
((Tek controls Herobrine and as event mod I can indirectly control him but that's it. You have been accepted into the RP but lavulman would like to know what kind of magic in specific your character can do. My understanding was basic offensive elemental spells but you can clarify this ;). As for starting, you need to make yourself an introductory post so just RP about how your day is going so far; maybe your character is getting ready to go to sleep or perhaps he just got back from gathering mushrooms for a stew he plans on making. Give us an idea on what your character is doing, then I'll throw something your way for you to do ;). Oh one more thing, there aren't any real mountains I'm aware of; just fairly high hills :P))
Name: Noah | Age: 14 | Species: Human | Survival: 1 week Religion: Notch following | Language: English, Wolf | Faction: To live a full life and avenge his brothers. Stats: -Strength: 7 -Stamina: 5 -Endurance: 7 -Agility: 10 -Intelligence: 5 -Wisdom: 6 -Sanity: 10 7 (strength) + 7 (Endurance) + 5 (Stamina) + 5 (Intel) + 5 (Sanity) + 10 (agility) + 6 (wisdom) = 45 Skills: -Repairing -Archery -Hunting -Swordsman -Sneaking Traits: +Smart +Brave +(or -)Shy -Short Fuse -(or +)Curious Looks: Dark-Gray Hoodie with hood up, Black shirt underneath, Dark-Blue jeans and, Black & White shoes. Key Items: Iron Sword, Bow, Photo of him, Damian, Jakie (Brothers) and, Max (dog). Items: Large Quiver with 128 arrows, Flint & Steel and, a bone. Bio: Noah was eating dinner and talking about random stuff with his brothers when Max barked. "You gotta go outside?" He asked. Max barked again. "Fine." he replied. "I still find it weird he can understand what dogs are saying" one of his brothers said. "Ditto." said his other brother. When Noah opened the door he saw his village was on fire. Dead bodies were all over the path-ways, houses reduced to ashes, People screaming as they ran on fire (Discord would be proud). "Grab your things!" Noah screamed as he bolted back in to get his stuff. He grabbed his Iron Sword, his Bow, his Large Quiver containing 128 arrows, a Flint & Steel, a photo and, a bone for Max. As he and his brothers and dog were booking it towards the forest half a mile down the road, a guard missed a shot and hit one of his brothers in the back of the head, instantly killing him. "Jakie!" He screamed as he turned around to get his brother. "Noah, its too late!" said Damian(his other brother) as he grabbed Noah and turned him to face the forest. A few days later, Damian was hunting for some food when he was captured by a minion, and killed. A few hours after THAT, Noah and Max went looking for him. But what they found was Damian's dead body decapitated with his head on a stick. "Soon, you will die as well." Said a mysterious voice in Noah's head. "Who are you!?" Noah said aloud and ed as he drew his sword. "Oh it doesn't matter who I am, it only matters who you are." said the voice. "When I find you, you are ing dead for what you did." Noah said. "Oh you will find me, but in time. *Short evil chuckle" said the voice ((I actually was on here before as EpicSpyHunter, but I forgot the password. As for Isaac, he tripped on flat land and fell on a random pencil that impaled him in the eye :P))
((Was I supposed to post after you Bobert? Or just wait until Tek can post as Liera?))
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"Zazhigalka. I think this is Russian for 'smash your enemy's face in and then set him on fire.' I could be wrong though."
"Never be ashamed of sadness. Embrace it, love it, but don't become an emotional masochist. Without sadness, I guarantee you we would have one hundred times more killers in the world, and ten times as many wars."
((You know what, I'm running low on steam and don't feel up to reviewing an app right now. Lavulman or Tek or maybe even Ragna, could you guys take a look? I know there's a few things wrong with it; the number of arrows being one that comes to mind.))
((I saw catching fire yesterday; it was really good but the ending was one of those endings that make you go 'ARG! NOW WE MUST SEE THE NEXT ONE!'))
Name: Noah | Age: 14 | Species: Human | Survival: 1 week
Religion: Notch following | Language: English, Wolf | Faction: To live a full life and avenge his brothers.
Looks: Dark-Gray Hoodie with hood up, Black shirt underneath, Dark-Blue jeans and, Black & White shoes.
Key Items: Iron Sword, Bow, Photo of him, Damian, Jakie (Brothers) and, Max (dog).
Items: Large Quiver with 128 arrows, Flint & Steel and, a bone.
Bio: Noah was eating dinner and talking about random stuff with his brothers when Max barked. "You gotta go outside?" He asked. Max barked again. "Fine." he replied.
"I still find it weird he can understand what dogs are saying" one of his brothers said. "Ditto." said his other brother. When Noah opened the door he saw his village was on fire.
Dead bodies were all over the path-ways, houses reduced to ashes, People screaming as they ran on fire (Discord would be proud). "Grab your things!" Noah screamed as he bolted back in to get his stuff.
He grabbed his Iron Sword, his Bow, his Large Quiver containing 128 arrows, a Flint & Steel, a photo and, a bone for Max. As he and his brothers and dog were booking it towards the forest half a mile down the road, a guard missed a shot and hit one of his brothers in the back of the head, instantly killing him.
"Jakie!" He screamed as he turned around to get his brother.
"Noah, its too late!" said Damian(his other brother) as he grabbed Noah and turned him to face the forest. A few days later, Damian was hunting for some food when he was captured by a minion, and killed.
A few hours after THAT, Noah and Max went looking for him. But what they found was Damian's dead body decapitated with his head on a stick.
"Soon, you will die as well." Said a mysterious voice in Noah's head.
"Who are you!?" Noah said aloud and ed as he drew his sword.
"Oh it doesn't matter who I am, it only matters who you are." said the voice.
"When I find you, you are ing dead for what you did." Noah said.
"Oh you will find me, but in time. *Short evil chuckle" said the voice
((There's a number of problems with this one. Bobert's already mentioned that 128 arrows can't possibly fit into a quiver, but one of my main questions is how they learned to speak with animals. You seem to have made an attempt to write this off as them having been born with this ability, but that's just lazy writing. Similarly, though I can buy that he'd know how to move quietly and use a bow if he hunts, I have no idea where he learned to repair items or how to use a sword. If you are Epicspyhunter, I think it's already been explained to you that people don't wear hoodies, jeans, or multicolored shoes in a pre-industrialist world. They wouldn't have photographs, either.
I'm going to address the elephant in the room, here: I believe I've mentioned that I don't like it when people use a Herobrine revenge plot as their motivation, especially when they're executed this poorly. If the character's entire settlement is in flames and people are screaming at the top of their lungs, he shouldn't have to open the door to notice this level of destruction. I have no idea why Herobrine doesn't send his minions to finish the character off if he knows where he is, and decides that he's worth toying with when he had the rest of his town killed. It's absolutely terrible to assume that Herobrine would give this guy a pass simply because he's a player-controlled character.))
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"I-I didn't know you could do that!"
"I could write a BOOK about what you don't know!" ~Skeletor
((Well like you said, basic spells like fire, thunder, ice, etc. He can see visions being your typical wizard who is usually an "all-seeing eye." (He only sees visions a couple times a week though, even if something is wrong.) I would list more, but those would probably be advanced spells. Does that answer your question? :)))
[Den]
It was just a regular day. It was always the same; get out of the sleep trance, meditate, eat, maybe brew some potions and enchant, meditate again, eat, check on health and for visitors, meditate, sleep. No one visited. No one bothered. No one knew me.
I was always alone.
The next day, I had a vision. More people are gathering somewhere. I thought he should go visit them, but then I thought about how they would react, which would probably be to kill me. I thought that it would be best to wait...
(("Basic spells" doesn't really define much, because what's defined as "basic" is more up to the individual than anything. Meditation doesn't really give you visions, either.))
((Well like you said, basic spells like fire, thunder, ice, etc. He can see visions being your typical wizard who is usually an "all-seeing eye."(He only sees visions a couple times a week though, even if something is wrong.)))
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((Many of our characters have met Herobrine in person, by the way. Whether we know it or not. Lavul, you are a quick exemption from that rule, being an alien and all :P. But, I do like the idea of Herobrine revenge bios... but... like you said, he wouldn't destroy the entire village then leave you. If you've been around since the start, he wasn't even that strong back then! Jolion has a sort of rivalry going on with him, having tortured and chased Jolion for quiet some time... but he DID attempt to kill him many times! He's only escaped due to the fact he's had help from other people. He had some from his village, and after that (When he was alone) he found other's to group up with. Every time he has survived, only out of luck.
Herobrine wouldn't destroy an entire village and let one lone survivor live. His first ploy was killing as many as he could to prove his power. After that, he started 'hiring' the 'mobs' and other 'players' to do his bidding. Some of those beings denied him, and have been cursed (Such as Kassy, The Skeletons, and a few other NPCs/Characers) as a result. He's let a few live, but only because they were skilled enough to evade his tosses of dirt clods. If he threw the whole boulder, they would have been killed off a long time ago.
I didn't read that app (:S), but I'll have to say Lavul is right. You need to either A: Redo it. B: Remove it. or C: More survive it.))((Hey, General! I... see your post. OK for a first start! MUCH better than most others! A quick tip: Attempt a few First Person or Third Person posts? If you add in exactly what he was doing... he sat down and actually had a full meal... that might lengthen your posts a bit. Cheers (And Os!)!!))
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"Jesus Christ now I realize how messed up I've made my characters....." -booksmusicanime, after writing a "Thought Experiment" post.
"Code Lyoko was such a badass show." - Morgan Elliott from Twitter, after agreeing with me that they should add Odd's hair into TUG!
((Alright Greevee, so this is how posting works on this forum and in general is accepted on several other RPs. When a characters name is put in [these] kinds of brackets, it means that it's a player controlled character and is normally done in first person. When in {these} kind of brackets, it's an NPC being controlled or a third person kind of writing being done. When in <these> brackets, someone is describing an event to another person's character or characters for them to react to, so without further ado...))
<Den>
Whilst meditating, your mind begins to wander and after a while your thoughts become disconnected to the physical world as you enter a dream like state. These hallucinations however vivid or dull have a calming atmosphere to them, and you remain in this state for what to you felt like only a few hours when in reality your entire day had nearly been taken.
When you finally open your eyes the slowly setting sun greets you, stinging your eyes slightly as no mater how often one sees it an enderman can not ever truly adapt to the sunlight. Ready to return to your simple home, you turn to face your encampment only to find it was not in the state you left it in. Your things are scattered everywhere; bottles broken, what few books you have torn to shreds, and a foul stench similar to rotten meat seems to permeate the air. Everything of value seems to be gone from your home, and even the structure itself has been bashed and torn at leaving you with nothing but a shell of what you used to own. Even your sword is gone, as is your bow and sack though the thieves whoever they were didn't make a clean get away. Down the south side of the hill a trail of broken glass and splintered wood can be made out, ending with an uprooted tree where the forest begins and a few shallow holes that would seem to have been dug out with a shovel.
((Many of our characters have met Herobrine in person, by the way. Whether we know it or not. Lavul, you are a quick exemption from that rule, being an alien and all .))
((Actually, Alpha and Omega aren't the only ones who don't have much of a connection to Herobrine. Akira, for example, barely knows who he is, and has little enough investment in the conflict to likely switch sides if she were paid to do so. The third character I was planning on writing, though he's fallen by the wayside, had little interest in him either, as he was/is going to have his own goals to work towards. My decision to stray from a Herobrine-related backstory is more choice than coincidence, as having everyone and everything center around Herobrine makes the RP a bit one-sided, and works to homogenize the universe.))
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"I-I didn't know you could do that!"
"I could write a BOOK about what you don't know!" ~Skeletor
((Up until his direct involvement a few days ago Bob wasn't very connected to Herobrine. I mean a short while after he was brought into the story he became aware Herobrine was a threat but it wasn't until his dad was killed he developed a vendetta towards Herobrine. The Almanac doesn't like Herobrine nor does he hate him and is indifferent to the whole situation, helping simply because he believes he should. I shant talk about Morlock, for fear I reveal something. I should also put out there Ragna's characters don't even really know who Herobrine is so not everyone is out to get Herobrine ))
((TEEEEEEEEEK. Come and save this pageclaim with an IC post))
((Yay Greevee, congrats :P. Oh and just in case you didn't know that <Den> post was for you to reply to ;)))
((From what we discussed and what he seems to have said in his bio it sounds like basic elemental spells. If he'd like to clarify though that would be good :)))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
[Nu]
As my feet hit across the ground with all of their power, I began to see my mistake in turning. I was headed straight for the church now, and more so towards the rest of the group. I could faintly see a figure in the distance waving. I couldn't tell who it was, but it looked like a signal of sorts. As we ran closer, I made it out to be none other than Keima, and could hear a slight hit of what he said. He wanted me to take the giant towards them. It relieved myself a bit to know that they were ready to fight. I still didn't speak aloud, in the case that the monster would know our plans. I started to follow Keima as I caught up. He seemed to be smiling, oddly. "Why are you so happy Katsuragi-sama?" I asked him in between breaths. "Because this will be over soon," he replied. This too made me feel better as well, but not to the extent of his happiness. I looked back momentarily once Keima had began running alongside as well. "He's very scary from up close. I didn't quite think he'd be this tall," Keima stated. "That scared me too," I agreed. He looked back at the skeleton and frowned for a moment. "Where's the other? Is he hiding, or has he been-" "yes, he's dead." I finished him. "Don't talk about it anymore, I already feel enough guilt." Keima backed off from the subject immediately, conserving energy now by not talking.
[Sarah]
Following the girl and skeleton soon became more eventful. Now, between cracks in buildings, I could see that Keima had joined them oddly enough. There didn't seem to be signs of any of the others, but it looked as though they hadn't entirely abandoned the runners. Keima seemed to say that they had a plan. The perfect opportunity to show myself and help them fight the forest off. Though, it seemed like the forest couldn't even see Keima. Like he was entirely focused on Nu and the skeleton, yet not him. He must have been given magic... Or a forest warding pendent. I never thought that it actually worked, I just knew that's what it was believed to do. It seems that what I had given him actually warded away the forest by invisibility. Very fascinating to witness.
"Zazhigalka. I think this is Russian for 'smash your enemy's face in and then set him on fire.' I could be wrong though."
"Never be ashamed of sadness. Embrace it, love it, but don't become an emotional masochist. Without sadness, I guarantee you we would have one hundred times more killers in the world, and ten times as many wars."
"Ah-ha!" the titan shouts, turning itself to look towards where you were realizing it had nearly lost you. "Run!" the sobbing voice cries out, having no say in the actions of the towering monster while it battered apart an older looking building to make it's journey towards your location shorter. With a heavy kick the beast burst onto the street you were on then began to give chase, it's steps however slow and lumbering still enough to begin closing the gap between your group and it's stomping feet.
[The Almanac]
"Four, that's beautiful. Now to be safe we should-" I had begun saying, silenced as the ground seemed to quake slightly. "Four will need to do for now, get what we have ready," I briefly told Liera, flying outside to see everyone approaching. "Keep running straight; don't stop!" I shouted to them, believing they were close enough to hear me then flying back inside. "Alright here's what you need to do Liera; as that thing passes by you need to take one of the runic knives and stab it in the ankle or foot or wherever, so long as it breaks the bark and gets in there. Do not break the handle off, does that make sense?" I asked finishing just as the stomps sounded as if they were nearly on top of us. Again I flew outside, and waved the three runners to keep going, past the blacksmiths then looked up at the towering behemoth which was nearly upon them. "Liera, NOW!" I shouted, he opportunity to strike arising now as the titan planted it's foot right at the edge of the street.((Nice to know you're taking a break :). How's your work coming?))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
I killed 5 Jedi today. What did you do?
Enter the Void.
Religion: Notch following | Language: English, Wolf | Faction: To live a full life and avenge his brothers.
Stats:
-Strength: 7
-Stamina: 5
-Endurance: 7
-Agility: 10
-Intelligence: 5
-Wisdom: 6
-Sanity: 10
7 (strength) + 7 (Endurance) + 5 (Stamina) + 5 (Intel) + 5 (Sanity) + 10 (agility) + 6 (wisdom) = 45
Skills:
-Repairing
-Archery
-Hunting
-Swordsman
-Sneaking
Traits:
+Smart
+Brave
+(or -)Shy
-Short Fuse
-(or +)Curious
Looks: Dark-Gray Hoodie with hood up, Black shirt underneath, Dark-Blue jeans and, Black & White shoes.
Key Items: Iron Sword, Bow, Photo of him, Damian, Jakie (Brothers) and, Max (dog).
Items: Large Quiver with 128 arrows, Flint & Steel and, a bone.
Bio: Noah was eating dinner and talking about random stuff with his brothers when Max barked. "You gotta go outside?" He asked. Max barked again. "Fine." he replied.
"I still find it weird he can understand what dogs are saying" one of his brothers said. "Ditto." said his other brother. When Noah opened the door he saw his village was on fire.
Dead bodies were all over the path-ways, houses reduced to ashes, People screaming as they ran on fire (Discord would be proud). "Grab your things!" Noah screamed as he bolted back in to get his stuff.
He grabbed his Iron Sword, his Bow, his Large Quiver containing 128 arrows, a Flint & Steel, a photo and, a bone for Max. As he and his brothers and dog were booking it towards the forest half a mile down the road, a guard missed a shot and hit one of his brothers in the back of the head, instantly killing him.
"Jakie!" He screamed as he turned around to get his brother.
"Noah, its too late!" said Damian(his other brother) as he grabbed Noah and turned him to face the forest. A few days later, Damian was hunting for some food when he was captured by a minion, and killed.
A few hours after THAT, Noah and Max went looking for him. But what they found was Damian's dead body decapitated with his head on a stick.
"Soon, you will die as well." Said a mysterious voice in Noah's head.
"Who are you!?" Noah said aloud and ed as he drew his sword.
"Oh it doesn't matter who I am, it only matters who you are." said the voice.
"When I find you, you are ing dead for what you did." Noah said.
"Oh you will find me, but in time. *Short evil chuckle" said the voice
((I actually was on here before as EpicSpyHunter, but I forgot the password. As for Isaac, he tripped on flat land and fell on a random pencil that impaled him in the eye :P))
Hope your number is never picked...
((Tek controls Herobrine and as event mod I can indirectly control him but that's it. You have been accepted into the RP but lavulman would like to know what kind of magic in specific your character can do. My understanding was basic offensive elemental spells but you can clarify this ;). As for starting, you need to make yourself an introductory post so just RP about how your day is going so far; maybe your character is getting ready to go to sleep or perhaps he just got back from gathering mushrooms for a stew he plans on making. Give us an idea on what your character is doing, then I'll throw something your way for you to do ;). Oh one more thing, there aren't any real mountains I'm aware of; just fairly high hills :P))
((I will review this in just a bit ;)))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
"Zazhigalka. I think this is Russian for 'smash your enemy's face in and then set him on fire.' I could be wrong though."
"Never be ashamed of sadness. Embrace it, love it, but don't become an emotional masochist. Without sadness, I guarantee you we would have one hundred times more killers in the world, and ten times as many wars."
((I'd wait for Tek :P))
((NOW TO READ THAT APP!))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
((I saw catching fire yesterday; it was really good but the ending was one of those endings that make you go 'ARG! NOW WE MUST SEE THE NEXT ONE!'))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
((There's a number of problems with this one. Bobert's already mentioned that 128 arrows can't possibly fit into a quiver, but one of my main questions is how they learned to speak with animals. You seem to have made an attempt to write this off as them having been born with this ability, but that's just lazy writing. Similarly, though I can buy that he'd know how to move quietly and use a bow if he hunts, I have no idea where he learned to repair items or how to use a sword. If you are Epicspyhunter, I think it's already been explained to you that people don't wear hoodies, jeans, or multicolored shoes in a pre-industrialist world. They wouldn't have photographs, either.
I'm going to address the elephant in the room, here: I believe I've mentioned that I don't like it when people use a Herobrine revenge plot as their motivation, especially when they're executed this poorly. If the character's entire settlement is in flames and people are screaming at the top of their lungs, he shouldn't have to open the door to notice this level of destruction. I have no idea why Herobrine doesn't send his minions to finish the character off if he knows where he is, and decides that he's worth toying with when he had the rest of his town killed. It's absolutely terrible to assume that Herobrine would give this guy a pass simply because he's a player-controlled character.))
[Den]
It was just a regular day. It was always the same; get out of the sleep trance, meditate, eat, maybe brew some potions and enchant, meditate again, eat, check on health and for visitors, meditate, sleep. No one visited. No one bothered. No one knew me.
I was always alone.
The next day, I had a vision. More people are gathering somewhere. I thought he should go visit them, but then I thought about how they would react, which would probably be to kill me. I thought that it would be best to wait...
I killed 5 Jedi today. What did you do?
Enter the Void.
That help?
I killed 5 Jedi today. What did you do?
Enter the Void.
Herobrine wouldn't destroy an entire village and let one lone survivor live. His first ploy was killing as many as he could to prove his power. After that, he started 'hiring' the 'mobs' and other 'players' to do his bidding. Some of those beings denied him, and have been cursed (Such as Kassy, The Skeletons, and a few other NPCs/Characers) as a result. He's let a few live, but only because they were skilled enough to evade his tosses of dirt clods. If he threw the whole boulder, they would have been killed off a long time ago.
I didn't read that app (:S), but I'll have to say Lavul is right. You need to either A: Redo it. B: Remove it. or C: More survive it.))((Hey, General! I... see your post. OK for a first start! MUCH better than most others! A quick tip: Attempt a few First Person or Third Person posts? If you add in exactly what he was doing... he sat down and actually had a full meal... that might lengthen your posts a bit. Cheers (And Os!)!!))
"Jesus Christ now I realize how messed up I've made my characters....." -booksmusicanime, after writing a "Thought Experiment" post.
"Code Lyoko was such a badass show." - Morgan Elliott from Twitter, after agreeing with me that they should add Odd's hair into TUG!
((Alright Greevee, so this is how posting works on this forum and in general is accepted on several other RPs. When a characters name is put in [these] kinds of brackets, it means that it's a player controlled character and is normally done in first person. When in {these} kind of brackets, it's an NPC being controlled or a third person kind of writing being done. When in <these> brackets, someone is describing an event to another person's character or characters for them to react to, so without further ado...))
<Den>
Whilst meditating, your mind begins to wander and after a while your thoughts become disconnected to the physical world as you enter a dream like state. These hallucinations however vivid or dull have a calming atmosphere to them, and you remain in this state for what to you felt like only a few hours when in reality your entire day had nearly been taken.
When you finally open your eyes the slowly setting sun greets you, stinging your eyes slightly as no mater how often one sees it an enderman can not ever truly adapt to the sunlight. Ready to return to your simple home, you turn to face your encampment only to find it was not in the state you left it in. Your things are scattered everywhere; bottles broken, what few books you have torn to shreds, and a foul stench similar to rotten meat seems to permeate the air. Everything of value seems to be gone from your home, and even the structure itself has been bashed and torn at leaving you with nothing but a shell of what you used to own. Even your sword is gone, as is your bow and sack though the thieves whoever they were didn't make a clean get away. Down the south side of the hill a trail of broken glass and splintered wood can be made out, ending with an uprooted tree where the forest begins and a few shallow holes that would seem to have been dug out with a shovel.
((TEK. Post IC :P))((You're so close to having 10 posts Greevee. Just one more on topic :D))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
I killed 5 Jedi today. What did you do?
Enter the Void.
((Actually, Alpha and Omega aren't the only ones who don't have much of a connection to Herobrine. Akira, for example, barely knows who he is, and has little enough investment in the conflict to likely switch sides if she were paid to do so. The third character I was planning on writing, though he's fallen by the wayside, had little interest in him either, as he was/is going to have his own goals to work towards. My decision to stray from a Herobrine-related backstory is more choice than coincidence, as having everyone and everything center around Herobrine makes the RP a bit one-sided, and works to homogenize the universe.))
((TEEEEEEEEEK. Come and save this pageclaim with an IC post))
((Yay Greevee, congrats :P. Oh and just in case you didn't know that <Den> post was for you to reply to ;)))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
"Jesus Christ now I realize how messed up I've made my characters....." -booksmusicanime, after writing a "Thought Experiment" post.
"Code Lyoko was such a badass show." - Morgan Elliott from Twitter, after agreeing with me that they should add Odd's hair into TUG!