((@Greywulv: Flipping her up off the board is okay, but controlling her response (knocking her out) is a bit far...))
Racing across the deserted plains, I look for a place to spend the night as I go. Seeing nothing, I continue my run. Maybe I can find sanctuary beyond this place in the Hadarac Desert; it seems like two-legs avoid the place. In my mind's eye, I see the mountains that reside in the heart of the desert, and my heart soars at the sight. Then my leg twinges, returning me to the real world. There's nothing for me there until I get there. I still have to get past Lake Leona, Dras-Leona, the humans' Capital, and the countless villages between here and there. I keep my steady pace...
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"War does not determine who is right- only who is left." ~Bertrand Russell
Name: Brisingr Gender: Male Appearance: He has a red scale-pelt, and red-ish eyes. Personality: He's never selfless and cares about the other dragons. He also (attempts) to read, with no success. He has a very awkward laugh and plays around like a child sometimes. Fighting Ability: Flying (around number 5) Location: Carvahall Suggestions: It's already bomb.... Other: no
don't call me a noob!!!!
(( A few small problems: Brisingr is just the name of fire in the ancient language, and I'd prefer it if you had a name besides just "fire". Also, consider adding a little more detail, then you'll be acceted.
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My current avatar is: Raistlin Majere from the Dragonlance novels.
I apologize that I haven't been on in so long due to personal issues.
I resign my post as dragon and dragon rider - someone else who will be more active can have it
In that case, Suri and Myska left the forests and are now stationed far in the east, training young riders with Eragon.
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"True but where would we get these reinforcements? More importantly how? Who's going to believe anything we just saw is real?!" I let out a sigh of frustration, thinking for a moment. "Then again I've been out of the system for a while. How much weight does your word carry?"
"Hmm, you are correct, I don't believe that any humans would believe me, and I'd rather not take any elves out of Ellesmera to fight this war, since we just fought one. Do you have a plan as to what we can do alone?"
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"Hmm, you are correct, I don't believe that any humans would believe me, and I'd rather not take any elves out of Ellesmera to fight this war, since we just fought one. Do you have a plan as to what we can do alone?"
"Get out of here before we get a chance to meet her in person. Warn the guards of the nearest settlement to be on their toes," I shift nervously, not wanting to stay much longer. "I know it sounds cowardly but we can't help if we become part of the problem."
((Also btw, I liked the song in the vid you posted CHICKENZ!))
"I suppose you're right. We are very close to Osilon, let's get going, we can be there before high noon. When we get there, we will warn the guards and hope they will listen. Maybe they will take you being on my shoulder as a bad omen, and they will listen. Wouldn't that be funny."
((Since it will take roughly one half of an hour to get there, I think it would be fine for you to continue as if we had just reached there. Also, PAGECLAIM.))
I can't help but laugh at the idea, then it strikes me, "Just give me a second." I fly back through the open door of the castle and glide down the first set of steps. Once I'm sure I'm far from the sunlight, I change form and cast a quick spell. I change back and head back outside. "To Osilon" I announce, flying over Concors head.
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Just a little ways outside Osilon, I'm happy to see my friends heeded my call. Resting in the trees, all along the path are crows, at least 40 of them. "How's that for bad omen?" I proudly announce, landing on Concors shoulder. The city comes into view not a moment later, crows landing on the buildings as we near.
((I'm sorry but you'll need to continue from here. I can't remember what the city is like other then it's agricultural. So if there's a wall or gate or something, I'd have no idea :P))
((Also most likly last post of the night so... good night :)))
I looked at the man in-front of me, blocking my exit. I knew there was someone else following me, the man from the pub. I whipped out my knifes from under my sleeves, "Let's dance." I grinned wickedly, this was turning out to be quite an exciting day.((By the way not being around to reply was totally worth it, awesome varsity game))
Rider Name: Mark Emberstone
Age: 27
Race: Human
Gender: M
Appearance:Mark Wears Gray Clothing,Including A Jacket.He's a Blonde With Sapphire Eyes and A Necklace That Matches his Eyes.He Has a Small Tan.
Personality: Freindly and Sarcastic,Always Making Bad Jokes,If He Makes a Good One,The World is Ending.
Biography: Mark Was Born into A Poor Family.The Only Luxury Was This Wooden Horse That Mark Played With Every Day.Then One Day,It was Gone.Mark Cried all Day,And His Parents Passed The Day.His Life was In Shambles.He was Then Picked Up By A Strange Man,And Was Trained To Be a Dragon Rider.And Here he is Now.
Magic Ability: He Knows Mostly Destruction Magic,But The Best of his Skill is Physical.
Fighting Ability: Very Good Whith a Sword and Sheild.Moderate With A Spear.Sucks at Archery.
Location: Currently Camping In the Spine,Near Caravhall.
Other: Nothing.
Dragon Name: Ruby
Gender: F
Appearance: http://dragon-elements.webs.com/thecreator.htm
Personality: Friendly and a Little Smug,But Deadly Serious at Times.He is The Only Thing that Can Stop Mark Joking Around.
Fighting Ability: For Some Reason,SHe is Of Every Element.Ruby Can Do Electricity,Water,Fire,Anything.The Only Ones He Can't Do are Ones Related to Darkness,Evil or Fear.She is Unknowingly Daughter of The Creator.
Location: With Mark,In The Spine.
Suggestions:
Other: Nothing.
I swip my hands and suddenly hold my two daggers "I would prefer if you didn't use magic, but I will still hurt you pretty bad if you do"
I stand with both of my hands down the sides of my body and look realy unpreperd and like I don't know how to fight
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Sorry for my long absence from this site :/ I deeply apologize for that. But now I'm back
Looking at this kid, i know every tactic he is trying, trying to look innocent when he isnt, i had used that one plenty times myself. "You wish i wouldn't use my biggest advantage. This isnt a fight for honor, pup." I threw my daggers, using magic on the to make them fly faster then any human or elf, even, could see. They went straight through the clothes he was wearing right under each arm, so his arms were flat out against the walls, just enough so he couldnt take he arms out and chase after me. I picked up the elf's body and said "Just so you dont get any ideas...." Then i ran out the back door clambered up a pipe and ran across the roofs. ((Hope this was okay with you ybj, i wanted to make a clean getaway, dont worry im coming back))
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I groan and try to open my eyes. I really have been using to much magic, I think to myself. I see streets below and wonder how I'm up here when I was just knocked out. I'm so weak I don't think I could even walk much. I then realize I'm bleeding from what must have been a cut I got from a guard. "Curse him," I mutter yet again though it comes out more a mumble. The bumping has started to really hurt my head and my side to the point where I see spots in my vision. If only I could heal myself.
((Well..Its kinda god gaming, but who cares, lets just say I underestemated you ))
"damn it" I say and take my coat of I rip out the daggers and take the jacket on agen. I quickly follow the thief but he had gotten away "and I call myself an assassin, couldn't even handle a thief" I put his daggers in some extra sheets I have on my back and start searching across the roofs, I find his foot marks twice in the dust on the roofs, and I try to follow the as best as I can
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I jump across on a roof and then another, then i back track back to the wall, try to through anyone following me off. I tie the elfs hands around my neck and pull out my knifes. I start to climb up the wall and jump over. Thankfully its night so the guards cant see me well, i do cast a spell to bend whats little light around me. On the other side of the wall, i run into the woods. I had covered my tracks, with magic so no one should be able to follow me. Might be a little paranoid but its better the waking up to a knife at your neck. Once im thorouly in the woods, i settle down for camp. A quickly build a fire with a breath of magic. I'm starting to get tired so i draw a little magic off of my jewels i had hidden in my new earing. I hadn't been able to completely fill that whole in the top of my ear, but it was small enough to hold a pirates earing. Now it was time to look through my goods. I grinned. This was by far the best part. First the two drunk people. The first man i had bumped into turned out to be just a bad of gold, good but not very interesting. The second man had been holding an emerald, good thing i had stolen it probably was there to blow it on getting drunk. Now for the really interesting part. I glance over at the elf i had laid out by the fire. Man she looked so innocent. Image how wrong i could be. I pulled the little bag from which i had stolen from the elf. ((by the way juliet i really hope this isnt going to far, if it is just let me know and i will change it)) The bag was silk drawbag. Slowly i open the bad and look whats inside. Its a necklace, made of gold. One of the ones with a cirlcular structure and clasp on the end. I open up the clasp and look at the pictures inside. On the inside on the left is a picture of the elf with an older man and woman. I though probably her mother and father. In the picture she was young probably a kid. Like me i thought, just like me. I glanced at the right and saw it was a picture of Ellesmira, my home. I tiered up at that point, this was hard. Glancing back over at the elf. Picked up the pendent and looped it around her neck, by gently lifting up her head. "Im sorry," I whisper knowing she wont have heard me. At that point i am emotionally and physically drained so i go to sleep without doing my regular checkup around camp.
In my circuit around Dras-Leona, I enter heavy woods. Grumbling about how this will slow me down, I see the glow of a fire in front of me, and I freeze. Curious, I slowly crawl forward, as quiet as I can...
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(That's good, I would've done something similar probably.)
Groaning, I sit up and wish I had a sword or even a knife though that's not my best weapon. I look around and can barely make anything out. I try to search for life through a small bit of magic and its dizzying though I am able. I see a person and what looks like a large shape I'm not as used to seeing. I shake my head and reach up to find my hands still bound. The thief must know I'm so weak that I could hardly use magic on him let alone slit his throat or even walk away. Looking at the direction of the large shape I send it a message, "who or what are you?" I'm not worried of the thief as much since he could have easily already killed me.
Bleargh. Humans... How mortifying. 'Who, or what are you?' The question appears in my mind. Clearly from the girl, as she's blatantly staring at me. I thump my tail on the forest floor, then give her a clearer image of me. Humans... Can't even see past their own noses. Almost pitiful, but I have no pity for life-forms so weak...
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"War does not determine who is right- only who is left." ~Bertrand Russell
Racing across the deserted plains, I look for a place to spend the night as I go. Seeing nothing, I continue my run. Maybe I can find sanctuary beyond this place in the Hadarac Desert; it seems like two-legs avoid the place. In my mind's eye, I see the mountains that reside in the heart of the desert, and my heart soars at the sight. Then my leg twinges, returning me to the real world. There's nothing for me there until I get there. I still have to get past Lake Leona, Dras-Leona, the humans' Capital, and the countless villages between here and there. I keep my steady pace...
(( A few small problems: Brisingr is just the name of fire in the ancient language, and I'd prefer it if you had a name besides just "fire". Also, consider adding a little more detail, then you'll be acceted.
I resign my post as dragon and dragon rider - someone else who will be more active can have it
In that case, Suri and Myska left the forests and are now stationed far in the east, training young riders with Eragon.
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"True but where would we get these reinforcements? More importantly how? Who's going to believe anything we just saw is real?!" I let out a sigh of frustration, thinking for a moment. "Then again I've been out of the system for a while. How much weight does your word carry?"
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
"Get out of here before we get a chance to meet her in person. Warn the guards of the nearest settlement to be on their toes," I shift nervously, not wanting to stay much longer. "I know it sounds cowardly but we can't help if we become part of the problem."
((Also btw, I liked the song in the vid you posted CHICKENZ!))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
((Since it will take roughly one half of an hour to get there, I think it would be fine for you to continue as if we had just reached there. Also, PAGECLAIM.))
*****
Just a little ways outside Osilon, I'm happy to see my friends heeded my call. Resting in the trees, all along the path are crows, at least 40 of them. "How's that for bad omen?" I proudly announce, landing on Concors shoulder. The city comes into view not a moment later, crows landing on the buildings as we near.
((I'm sorry but you'll need to continue from here. I can't remember what the city is like other then it's agricultural. So if there's a wall or gate or something, I'd have no idea :P))
((Also most likly last post of the night so... good night :)))
Oh no, it's a link to an awesome flash game!
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I stand with both of my hands down the sides of my body and look realy unpreperd and like I don't know how to fight
"damn it" I say and take my coat of I rip out the daggers and take the jacket on agen. I quickly follow the thief but he had gotten away "and I call myself an assassin, couldn't even handle a thief" I put his daggers in some extra sheets I have on my back and start searching across the roofs, I find his foot marks twice in the dust on the roofs, and I try to follow the as best as I can
Groaning, I sit up and wish I had a sword or even a knife though that's not my best weapon. I look around and can barely make anything out. I try to search for life through a small bit of magic and its dizzying though I am able. I see a person and what looks like a large shape I'm not as used to seeing. I shake my head and reach up to find my hands still bound. The thief must know I'm so weak that I could hardly use magic on him let alone slit his throat or even walk away. Looking at the direction of the large shape I send it a message, "who or what are you?" I'm not worried of the thief as much since he could have easily already killed me.