Also, I am going to make the wiki and the OOC when we get other 2 people active on this RP. Because I must wait for making the OOC because if I make the OOC on these circunstances I will probabily be flooded with posts like: "Seriously, just give up" or "This is dead. Stop." And then it gets locked.
By the way, I added a new rule regarding grammar, and I'm making explanations to the rules. It's WIP because I have to go soon, but if you want to take a look, it's on the OP))
Cluster App: Name: Thengen Cluster. Caracteristics: A small cluster with few galaxies in it. All the galaxies in it are elliptical. Supercluster: None. It is a lone cluster far from other galaxies/clusters.
Galaxy App: Name: Isitia Caracteristics: The smallest galaxy in the cluster, it is an elliptical galaxy with a small and young black hole in it's centre. It is a very dense galaxy, the starts are close together. The black hole was created by a supernova from an old star from another galaxy in the same cluster. There are also 2 nebulas forming new stars at the edge of this galaxy. Picture (optional): Cluster: Thengen Cluster.
Solar System App:
Name: Tuseth. Caracteristics: It is a small solar system with only 3 planets.The planets are close together, but very different. There is a young and bright star in the middle, which is dense in the centre causing it to have a good and stable gravitational field. The Tuseth asteroid field used to be closer to the star but has been getting further since the planets got into the system. Map (optional): Story: This was a lone star that formed in the Isitia Nebula which later grabbed on to slingshot planets from other solar systems. Because of the distance from the planets to the star it made it a very habitable solar system. Galaxy Isitia Galaxy.
Planet App:
Name: Turinn. Caracteristics: It is a medium, very habitable planet (It is 1/3 the size of earth). It is high in oxygen, vegetation and water. There are three natural satelites orbiting it, these are: Seth, Turein and Isitienn. There is one main landmass, and several islands nearby, the main landmass contains lakes, rivers, volcanoes, forests and other geographical features you may find on earth. In the centre of the great landmass, there is a huge stone pillar, that is said to be a gift from the stars. In the north most things are frozen, and there is a large unnamed mountain chain. In the middle, there are lush forests, cool lakes and clear streams. A bit lower then the middle it is a dry desert, with a few oasis and badlands around it. To the south of the mainland ( not the planet) It is dry but cold, with a few mountains and volcanoes. In the south it is not as cold as the north, but still frozen. Map (optional): Story: This is the only planet that is not a slingshot. It was formed in the Nebula with the star in the beginning. It has been habitable for a while, but just now it got far enough from the star so that life can evolve. The truth about the stone pillar is that it was a oddly-shaped meteorite that was travelling very slowly when the planet had barely any atmosphere, most of the meteorite got destroyed but part of it is the stone pillar still known today. The two islands to the south-east where also once meteorites that crashed into the planet, which explains why they are so rich in gems and metals. Solar system: Tuseth System. How it got there is explained in the story.
Race App:
Name: Cireteth. Abilities: This race has very good sight and smell. Their hair has small nerves in it, kind of like antennas. Description: The Cireteth is a mammal race that looks like a human with allot of hair, and very shorter (an average Ciretethian is about 1 meter tall). The have very round eyes and very colourful hair. Their teeth are very flat because they are mostly herbivore but they will eat meat if needed to. They evolved to be the dominant species because of the way they think, just like humans they think in advancing, not in staying in the same spot. Their organs are a bit different from those of humans, their tongue has 20X more taste buds, their eye's cone cells ( the cells that receive light) Are 2 times bigger, granting them better vision and their brain is designed to receive the signals from it's nose, tongue and eyes better.
Civ App:
Name: Tribes of Turinn. Description: This is a small group of Cireteths that are working together to advance and gain power. They live in small huts built out of clay, and there are 5 ranks in the tribe. These are: Chief (the leader), Ethenn (the priest), Cire (normal civilian), Unthet (criminal) and Ciredinn (child). They keep fish as bets in small clay jars with salt water in it, and cook food with salt on it, finding that it tastes better like that. If anyone in the tribe does a crime, that person is cursed by the Ethenns, and has his/her hair cut off(This is a big offence in this race) Every month on this planet ( 20 earth days) They do a ceremony in the sea, every member of the tribe bathes in the sea and then they all sit by a fire and tell tales of older days. This tribe is ally with the Gernith and Guloth tribe, because they all believe in the same religion, but is enemy with the Rasketh tribe because they believe in another religion. Religion: Istium. This is a religion where they believe Seth and Teth, the twin gods created the universe. Seth created objects and Teth created life. There are no priests, only people called Ethenns that teach people about the religion. They build the shrines in a special way, while chanting they bathe each brick in water from the sea and place it, then they bring gifts to the shrine to welcome the gods. Backstory: This tribe started with 4 very good pack-mates that learnt how to communicate, later they discovered fire and with the great intelligence of the race they formed a tribe. The 4 people where 2 females and 2 males. The first male and strongest became the chief and became the mate of the first female, the second male and smartest became the first Ethenn and became the mate of the second female. After 3 generations the story starts, with 12 tribe members. 7 females and 5 males. They then founded the religion of Isitium, and spread the word to the neighbouring tribes, Taketh was not interested, but still accepted that other tribes had different beliefs, Guloth and Gernith tribes loved the religion and joined the belief but the Rasketh tribe thought it was disgusting that someone of the same race believe in that religion so they declared hatred on the other tribes that believed in that religion. Race: Ciriteth. Actual era: Tribal.
Corporation App:
Name: Ethenn Religious Group. Headquatquers: The tribal Seth and Teth hut. Located in the centre of the town. Backstory: This was founded by the first Ethenn, and later more people joined it. There are different people from three tribes, all working together. Description There are a total of 13 people working here to spread the word of the religion. 2 From the Turinn tribe, 4 from the Guloth tribe and 7 from the Gerntith tribe. They also do secret missions to steal the Rasketh tribe's food or other things like that. Emblem:
Map of the tribes:
More information about the tribe: Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male. Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope. Buildings:
Chief's Hut.
Shrine of Seth and Teth.
Ethenn's House.
Storage Hut.
4 Living Huts.
I posted to be reserved, and here is my app. (Sorry for being so late)
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The Sun rises on the Island of Jir, The coastal tribe of Krell, in the clan of Tribyte, is just awaking. Today would be an ordinary day except, that today would determine the face of both the species and planet. Hidden in the morning mist a hooded figure enters into the hut of the Rend, Karil. She quickly shoos him inside and into the cellar,
"How does it go in Vire?" she asks
"I'm afraid it is going terribly, my nobel one." He replies
"Should we send more supplies?"
"I don't think so, so far all our caravans have been intercepted."
"Well, the sea-scouts are coming back tomorrow we should wait to-"
He stopps mid sentence for they both here the war chimes.
"Get everyone onto the fishing boats, they are only allowed to bring food and tools."
"yes, my nobel one."
The Graffyin that made it out is subject to extreme conditions. There's no rain to save him and he is forced to eat grass, which is unhealthy to eat for a Graffyin, but he has to because there is no other food except for a Inale (a smaller, faster version of the deer with 5 horns on the head), but he is too weak to catch it, let alone eat it. He is forced to drink from the sweat of the grass. These conditions are horrible for him, but he has to in order to reach his home.
((By the way. Anyone has a new creative name for this RP? I think it's senseless to call it Galactic Civs if it has nothing to do with the actual videogame))
((The discovery of civilization, that is the best I can think of at the moment. Also, you haven't said if I am accepted or denied, please do if you get the time to read my app))
((The discovery of civilization, that is the best I can think of at the moment. Also, you haven't said if I am accepted or denied, please do if you get the time to read my app))
((If you say the app is WIP, I wait for it to be finished, so I can't have a judgement there. But since you want me to revise it, then all but the planet, which lacks one sentence and the fact that they have currency on tribal (currency was invented in 2000 B.C), is OK))
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There is a uproar above deck, Karil steps out of her uncomfortably small quarters.
"what's going on?" she askes the most nearby sailor.
"Freyn's ships have been sighted!" she replies.
"Have they seen us?" but the sailor is already out of hearing distance
Crap, Karil thinks, the Freyn's ships our twice as large as our fishing boats and have wooden spikes.
"EVERYONE WHO CAN SWIM JUMP OVER BOARD! THOSE WHO CAN'T HIDE BELOW DECK!" she screams
I also think it should be called Civilization: a Double Sided Sword.
((If you say the app is WIP, I wait for it to be finished, so I can't have a judgement there. But since you want me to revise it, then all but the planet, which lacks one sentence and the fact that they have currency on tribal (currency was invented in 2000 B.C), is OK))
((My app is no longer a W.I.P and I fixed and added more information to it.))
((My app is no longer a W.I.P and I fixed and added more information to it.))
((Everything is good then. Accepted.
The discovery of a Civilization: I don't know. Doesn't sound much like a Civ RP and sounds more like an archaelogy RP where you are finding ruins of a civilization.
Civilization: A double sided sword: Hmmm, probabily.
On the other hand, I was thinking about two other titles. Universal Civilzations or Civilizations: Tribes and galaxies. What do you think about those?
By the way, Izak, I understand that you can have ships as a tribe since you are in a small island, but your ships should be small air-open rafts))
((Civilizations: Tribes and Galaxies sounds cool)) Twenty third day of the new chief's order.
The chief of Turinn woke up to a rainy morning, with his mate preparing a meal of salad and crushed apple with see water, he looked around his house remembering how he collected each one of those trophies. The shiny metal ornament from the Gernith tribe, the Gem from Guloth tribe and so many other collections he had found while exploring the forest. After he eat, he went outside to find that it had stopped raining. Most of the huts where safe, except for one that the owners had forgotten to put leaves on top to prevent the rain from destroying it. He commanded the builders of the tribe to repair that house and commanded the food collectors that the tribe needed more leaves as he went to the storehut and saw a shortage of them.
At midday, he went to visit the Shrine and leave his daily gift, a see shell. Life continued as normal that day until a messenger from the Gernith Tribe ( he got across by the river by swimming, a talent the Guloth, Rasketh and Gernith tribes have) The message was transported by a system of knots in leaf rope, which the messenger wore on his neck and then translated. The message said the following: "Please bring your tribe to us, we are in great danger from Rasketh. We need help, as soon as you can give it" When the chief heard this from the messenger he thought about it and then responded that he will help to defend from the Rasketh.
The next morning he ordered his tribe to pack all needed things, and get ready to leave temporarily. He also had the best members of tribe at crafting make spears out of sticks and sharp seashells.
One day later, the tribe was ready to go to the other tribe, with leaf rafts to cross the river and food to make it there.
Tribe Info:
Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male. Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope. Buildings:
None at the moment, as the tribe is in a nomadic state.
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you are correct, but I was trying to make them seem like the polynesian twin canoes I you don't know)
Also, I tried to make Freyn's ship seem like early prototypes for the greek trireme
Onece every one was either overboard or kiding under the piles of fishing nets, she ran into the head fisheraxer. she heard the scratching of the feet upstairs. Outside she heard the voices,
"I know some one's here, I can smell it." scruffed a small, croaky voice.
"That's you! You crzberk..." shouted the voice of a large female. "We should wait them out, they can't live in there for long!"
Kari groaned when she heard more of Frey'ns minions crash down the stairs. She knew she would have to face her biggest fear, water. she knew it was stupid for a Rend to be scared of anything, especially when you live seven paces away from the coast.
slowly she tossed aside heavy waits and things of dried vegetables. Finally, she found the cork hatch at the bottom of the ship. the panel was her Idea, if the ship was sinking you could bust it out had swim for safety. She took a breath, kicked the panel out and dove in.
((Nevermind. I changed the title to a merge of both titles I proposed. Also merged the caracteristics and the abilities of the race due to my inefficency to mod both sizes. Also, I made another app below. It's WIP though))
Name: Ailaneu cluster
Caracteristics: There are 7 galaxies on there. Most of them which are red dwarf paradises except for a few stars here and there, and there is only one normal galaxy. Supercluster: MS 0302+17
Name: Niajan galaxy
Caracteristics: This is the only galaxy which is normal. However, it has now turned into a massive bloodshed due to the empires disputing the control of it. It looks like Messier 58. On the center and to the left, there's the Unajid Kingdom, which is undergoing civil wars after fighting with the main colonist powers. Picture: Cluster: Ailaneu cluster.
Name: Jadishi Caracteristics: The planet orbits a Jupiter-sized red dwarf, which is very weak due to aging. Because of this, the only planet with life has to be very close to it. The solar system has 4 planets. One, which is Mercury-sized, whom is too close to it's sun. It's day is of 15 hours due to the attraction of the sun that pulls the spinning of the planet. The second one whom is Earth-sized, is the planet suitable for life. However, it doesn't have a lot of life except on the reserves because of the advance of the civilization, whom covered most enviroments with cities (explained below). Then, there's another earth-sized planet. It's, in theory, a water-world because it's covered on water. But since it's further away from the sun, all it's water is just ice with massive depth (100 kms deep in the deepest parts). There's only one continent, which is covered by the ice in a 100 meter thick wall, and it has a moon, but it's terraformed and it's now a huge farm to feed the city of Asanial. Then, at last, there's a gas giant, which is Uranus size, but other than that, it's pretty much similar to Jupiter.
Map: Story: Galaxy: Niajan galaxy
Name: Asanial Caracteristics: Like I said before, it's Earth like, whose cities cover the continents. However, very deep below the cities, there are some few reserves. On these cities there are absolutely no cars since 100% accuarate teleporting machines were invented, and so the enviroment of the planet isn't very noisy. Everyone lives in skyscrappers, but they are as high as modern cities due to the authorities not being able to feed most people on them. It is purely a residential and commercial planet. With water, people might think that they are barren, but actually, they are full of towns and underwater farms. Map (optional): Story: The planet began as a rouge planet, whose mass wasn't enough to form even a bare brown dwarf. It wandered lonely around the galaxy, until it found it's current solar system. It was on a collision course with the sun, but the further planets pulled it away from the sun to it's current orbit. It started as a planet which was 1 1/4th bigger than Earth, but it's collision course stripped some of it's mass to form a moon surrounding it. Life thrived at the planet, until civilization come. At first, they limited to build small settlements. But then, they began to cover bigger and bigger areas on the map because of the growing population, which led to colonization of most of the planet, including the surface, which, except for the water that was there, was colonized, until it was stopped by the evergrowing enviromental protests. Solar system: Jadishi
Name: Ajadinal Caracteristics: The Ajadinal are amphibian species. They are blue-ish with scales that cover their whole bodies, but they have tentacles for limbs. This makes it hard, like the Graffyins, for hand-working with small things, but they can swim fairly well in the liquid enviroments. They have a lot of tentacles specially on the zone near the legs, which is full of mini-tentacles and their arms are too full of tentacles. They can survive over 3 kms below the water, and 500 m on the land, which means that they are able to pretty much dominate the seas and the shores of the continents. You might have on your brain of pools with air instead of water on them, but not even their technologies could do it.
Name: Unajid Kingdom Description: The Kingdom covers the central area of the galaxy and a considerable part of the left one too. It is governed by a king and a very small parlament, which is almost symbolic, so the goverment has to deal with a lot of instability issuses. Currently, due to the many nations that entered the galaxy, many rebellions are occuring in what once was a proud empire that covered the whole galaxy.Most of the goverment is made of priests, and the king has more caracteristics of a pope than of an actual King and the religion is almost a weapon than an actual creed. In fact, a large part of the council is atheist but believe that keeping the people ignorant with their gods will keep them tied to the goverment like locking a dangerous dog. Religion: Ajakinal, which is a polytheistic religion. However, it's now really to the eyes of the politics and the "priests" a good weapon to keep the people from breaking apart the whole empire. It has a lot of gods with equal importance. Backstory: The nation history backs to the early modern era if we talk about the RP terms (so when the kingdom began they were with WWI techs) after the downfall of the Kisdan Empire, which covered an important part of the leftmost (names to come) continent. It was a non-important kingdom which served as a punching bag to it's neighbohours, who were anxious for the area they got. Then, the neighbohours that attacked them got into a war with the Repùblic of Asanica, which almost instantly received help from it's abused friend, and they conquered a lot of nations. However, this immediatly led to WWII (there has been another back then on the late renassiance era), which the Unajid kingdom and it's allies won. Because Jainal won an important area of world production, it began to tax the minerals for the exterior, which made the nation rich, for a while. Then, the world economy slowly decayed, and poorer nations bunched up and attacked, nearly destroying the kingdom on WWIII by pillaging towns and burning the headquatquers. However, it's allies helped the kingdom and invaded the invaders, and they were conquered and turned into mere colonies, ending this war. Analysts began to see that the country looked more like a company oligarcy than a theocratical kingdom, and they began to research space flight for possibilities to escape the planet. It took almost 100 years, while the world was weakening, but it seemed that the moment couldn't be any better, because on a great conference on the capital, the kingdom united the world. Meanwhile, the scientists mananged to escape to the moon, but the moon got quickly colonized by the newborn empire. This marked the beggining of the expansion of the empire outside the planet. Scientists began to investigate the moon and it's composition to terraform it so it can be an ecological preservation for the expanding cities, that alerady began to cover entire areas in the maps and glasses with water on them were built to keep the people from drowing on the even higher surfaces.. They took many pairs of most species and put them into the preservation, which, even though life wasn't the same, they got used to it, at least most species. This gave green light for the massive expansion of cities and farms, for which they also colonized the moon of the ice planet, which gave green light to a city expansion over the rural zones. This was followed by a massive population boom, but the resources began to get scarce. The only choice they had is to start colonizing the surrounding planets of the stars nearby. However, simply sending an efficent colonizing fleet would be expensive because of the fuel and would take over 50 years to reach any other planets. The scientists began to research the fields of FTL. After 140 years, they finally found how, and it was about time, since food production began to spiral down, and corruption increased with illegal inmoviliaries which spread the whole city menance to the whole world. They wrapped to the nearest planet, built a small base there. It was a cold planet, and was good enough to start mining operations there, and the once black market of expanding cities was legalized once again, and it grew a lot. They did the following thing to many other planets surrounding it, and they formed an army, strong enough to conquer everything to it's step. This conquest process took almost ten thousand years, on which entire civilizations, from paleolithic peoples to interestellar nations were destroyed, until it reached it's peak, when it ruled the whole galaxy, triggering a golden age where companies ruled many parts of the galaxy (they still had the same control years ago). But then, stronger nations with faster FTL attacked the empire ten years after the boom began, which began a war for a hundred years, until most of the old empire was destroyed. This made many rebellions of companies and other groups to surge, and this began the still-continuing march, The march of the Unajid kingdom, which is a march to take away the companies power to what they used to be thousands of years ago. Race: Ajadinal Actual era: Galactic
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Once she had swam out of eyeshot with the others of her tribe, she ordered that they return to the searched ships and retrieve anything that could be used as a weapon. she planned on raiding the enemies ship and getting control. once on board they scoured the ships for nets, fishing spears, even extra planks, before long, the enemy was docking up with their ship to gain control when she gave the order to attack. Catching their enemies off-gaurd, they quickly gained the upper hand. Suddenly Kari stopped, but it was not of her own free will, a net had caught her and a hungry looking member of the Freyn clan help a spear at her, Kari closed her eyes and felt pain slowly tearing through her body. At their leaders death the clan was enraged, they changed from colonists trying to escape pursuers to murderers with a blood-lust. Once all of their enemies had been killed the Cren, Kari's sister claimed control of the tribe. Now with a "large" battle ship filled with the supplies from both their enemies' and their ships they set off for it wont be long before the Freyn clan comes after their lost brothers.
Once she had swam out of eyeshot with the others of her tribe, she ordered that they return to the searched ships and retrieve anything that could be used as a weapon. she planned on raiding the enemies ship and getting control. once on board they scoured the ships for nets, fishing spears, even extra planks, before long, the enemy was docking up with their ship to gain control when she gave the order to attack. Catching their enemies off-gaurd, they quickly gained the upper hand. Suddenly Kari stopped, but it was not of her own free will, a net had caught her and a hungry looking member of the Freyn clan help a spear at her, Kari closed her eyes and felt pain slowly tearing through her body. At their leaders death the clan was enraged, they changed from colonists trying to escape pursuers to murderers with a blood-lust. Once all of their enemies had been killed the Cren, Kari's sister claimed control of the tribe. Now with a "large" battle ship filled with the supplies from both their enemies' and their ships they set off for it wont be long before the Freyn clan comes after their lost brothers.
((The post I made in between doesn't count to double post. It was out of character, even the app was OOC))
((Sadly, I can't access my account anymore, so I will be posting from this acount until my account is reactivated))
((You can trust that it is me, as in my other account I have not connected since, and I have an email that was added to my account info)) Twenty Seventh Day of the new Chief's order. Omniscient View:
One day after they set off from their tribe the pack had reached the river, they had three quarters of their supplies left too. Most of the tribe members where feeling ok about this, as it was done allot. The tents where made out of leaves bound together by the adhesive blood of a native creature called Notamog, which can be found in the nearby forests (It's skin is also hunted for because of it's stone-hard hairs) View of the tribal Chief:
The Chief woke up on the second day of the voyage, it was sunny out. He left his leaf tent to observe the camp; There were a total of 7 large leaf tents gathered around a central fire. In the distance he could see the river, and across the river the forest of Gernith. When everyone in the tribe was awake they set out again towards the river. they got to the river by midday, once at the river they looked for a good and calm place to cross. They crossed the river on their inflated leaf rafts and on the other side they set up camp to eat. He thought to himself if the mission would be succesful and reflected on what would happen if something went wrong.
Tribe Info:
Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male. Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female
Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope. Buildings:
None at the moment, as the tribe is in a nomadic state.
((Izak: You are doing well. Specially for a first-comer. Congratulations. Epik: How did you got banned anyway? Or did it just deactivate? And please, don't spam the poll with Yes's, because it just inflates the number and I want to see how many people actually like the idea of a wiki. Not an inflated number. Can you remove your vote as EpikNeedsHelp?))
Meanwhile in the main tribe, a small flood inundated many farming plots, making the tribe go hungry. The flood began late morning and it was because it rained on the desert (which rarely happens), and from the usual small rivers that formed came a lot more water than expected, killing many plants and people. The people are unhappy because they think that their gods punished them, and the only thing that they could think of were the explorers. Nothing was heard about them in weeks, so they don't know what they had to go through. They sent a second group of explorers composed of 10 people to look for the lost men to follow them.
((Accepted (your app). You can post now.
Also, I am going to make the wiki and the OOC when we get other 2 people active on this RP. Because I must wait for making the OOC because if I make the OOC on these circunstances I will probabily be flooded with posts like: "Seriously, just give up" or "This is dead. Stop." And then it gets locked.
By the way, I added a new rule regarding grammar, and I'm making explanations to the rules. It's WIP because I have to go soon, but if you want to take a look, it's on the OP))
Cluster App:
Name: Thengen Cluster.
Caracteristics: A small cluster with few galaxies in it. All the galaxies in it are elliptical.
Supercluster: None. It is a lone cluster far from other galaxies/clusters.
Galaxy App:
Name: Isitia
Caracteristics: The smallest galaxy in the cluster, it is an elliptical galaxy with a small and young black hole in it's centre. It is a very dense galaxy, the starts are close together. The black hole was created by a supernova from an old star from another galaxy in the same cluster. There are also 2 nebulas forming new stars at the edge of this galaxy.
Picture (optional):
Cluster: Thengen Cluster.
Solar System App:
Name: Tuseth.
Caracteristics: It is a small solar system with only 3 planets.The planets are close together, but very different. There is a young and bright star in the middle, which is dense in the centre causing it to have a good and stable gravitational field. The Tuseth asteroid field used to be closer to the star but has been getting further since the planets got into the system.
Map (optional):
Story: This was a lone star that formed in the Isitia Nebula which later grabbed on to slingshot planets from other solar systems. Because of the distance from the planets to the star it made it a very habitable solar system.
Galaxy Isitia Galaxy.
Planet App:
Name: Turinn.
Caracteristics: It is a medium, very habitable planet (It is 1/3 the size of earth). It is high in oxygen, vegetation and water. There are three natural satelites orbiting it, these are: Seth, Turein and Isitienn. There is one main landmass, and several islands nearby, the main landmass contains lakes, rivers, volcanoes, forests and other geographical features you may find on earth. In the centre of the great landmass, there is a huge stone pillar, that is said to be a gift from the stars. In the north most things are frozen, and there is a large unnamed mountain chain. In the middle, there are lush forests, cool lakes and clear streams. A bit lower then the middle it is a dry desert, with a few oasis and badlands around it. To the south of the mainland ( not the planet) It is dry but cold, with a few mountains and volcanoes. In the south it is not as cold as the north, but still frozen.
Map (optional):
Story: This is the only planet that is not a slingshot. It was formed in the Nebula with the star in the beginning. It has been habitable for a while, but just now it got far enough from the star so that life can evolve. The truth about the stone pillar is that it was a oddly-shaped meteorite that was travelling very slowly when the planet had barely any atmosphere, most of the meteorite got destroyed but part of it is the stone pillar still known today. The two islands to the south-east where also once meteorites that crashed into the planet, which explains why they are so rich in gems and metals.
Solar system: Tuseth System. How it got there is explained in the story.
Race App:
Name: Cireteth.
Abilities: This race has very good sight and smell. Their hair has small nerves in it, kind of like antennas.
Description: The Cireteth is a mammal race that looks like a human with allot of hair, and very shorter (an average Ciretethian is about 1 meter tall). The have very round eyes and very colourful hair. Their teeth are very flat because they are mostly herbivore but they will eat meat if needed to. They evolved to be the dominant species because of the way they think, just like humans they think in advancing, not in staying in the same spot. Their organs are a bit different from those of humans, their tongue has 20X more taste buds, their eye's cone cells ( the cells that receive light) Are 2 times bigger, granting them better vision and their brain is designed to receive the signals from it's nose, tongue and eyes better.
Civ App:
Name: Tribes of Turinn.
Description: This is a small group of Cireteths that are working together to advance and gain power. They live in small huts built out of clay, and there are 5 ranks in the tribe. These are: Chief (the leader), Ethenn (the priest), Cire (normal civilian), Unthet (criminal) and Ciredinn (child). They keep fish as bets in small clay jars with salt water in it, and cook food with salt on it, finding that it tastes better like that. If anyone in the tribe does a crime, that person is cursed by the Ethenns, and has his/her hair cut off(This is a big offence in this race) Every month on this planet ( 20 earth days) They do a ceremony in the sea, every member of the tribe bathes in the sea and then they all sit by a fire and tell tales of older days. This tribe is ally with the Gernith and Guloth tribe, because they all believe in the same religion, but is enemy with the Rasketh tribe because they believe in another religion.
Religion: Istium. This is a religion where they believe Seth and Teth, the twin gods created the universe. Seth created objects and Teth created life. There are no priests, only people called Ethenns that teach people about the religion. They build the shrines in a special way, while chanting they bathe each brick in water from the sea and place it, then they bring gifts to the shrine to welcome the gods.
Backstory: This tribe started with 4 very good pack-mates that learnt how to communicate, later they discovered fire and with the great intelligence of the race they formed a tribe. The 4 people where 2 females and 2 males. The first male and strongest became the chief and became the mate of the first female, the second male and smartest became the first Ethenn and became the mate of the second female. After 3 generations the story starts, with 12 tribe members. 7 females and 5 males. They then founded the religion of Isitium, and spread the word to the neighbouring tribes, Taketh was not interested, but still accepted that other tribes had different beliefs, Guloth and Gernith tribes loved the religion and joined the belief but the Rasketh tribe thought it was disgusting that someone of the same race believe in that religion so they declared hatred on the other tribes that believed in that religion.
Race: Ciriteth.
Actual era: Tribal.
Corporation App:
Name: Ethenn Religious Group.
Headquatquers: The tribal Seth and Teth hut. Located in the centre of the town.
Backstory: This was founded by the first Ethenn, and later more people joined it. There are different people from three tribes, all working together.
Description There are a total of 13 people working here to spread the word of the religion. 2 From the Turinn tribe, 4 from the Guloth tribe and 7 from the Gerntith tribe. They also do secret missions to steal the Rasketh tribe's food or other things like that.
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Map of the tribes:
More information about the tribe:
Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male.
Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female
Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope.
Buildings:
Chief's Hut.
Shrine of Seth and Teth.
Ethenn's House.
Storage Hut.
4 Living Huts.
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Do I just play out my civilization?
Yes. You can start playing as your civilization.
"How does it go in Vire?" she asks
"I'm afraid it is going terribly, my nobel one." He replies
"Should we send more supplies?"
"I don't think so, so far all our caravans have been intercepted."
"Well, the sea-scouts are coming back tomorrow we should wait to-"
He stopps mid sentence for they both here the war chimes.
"Get everyone onto the fishing boats, they are only allowed to bring food and tools."
"yes, my nobel one."
((By the way. Anyone has a new creative name for this RP? I think it's senseless to call it Galactic Civs if it has nothing to do with the actual videogame))
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((If you say the app is WIP, I wait for it to be finished, so I can't have a judgement there. But since you want me to revise it, then all but the planet, which lacks one sentence and the fact that they have currency on tribal (currency was invented in 2000 B.C), is OK))
"what's going on?" she askes the most nearby sailor.
"Freyn's ships have been sighted!" she replies.
"Have they seen us?" but the sailor is already out of hearing distance
Crap, Karil thinks, the Freyn's ships our twice as large as our fishing boats and have wooden spikes.
"EVERYONE WHO CAN SWIM JUMP OVER BOARD! THOSE WHO CAN'T HIDE BELOW DECK!" she screams
I also think it should be called Civilization: a Double Sided Sword.
((My app is no longer a W.I.P and I fixed and added more information to it.))
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((Everything is good then. Accepted.
The discovery of a Civilization: I don't know. Doesn't sound much like a Civ RP and sounds more like an archaelogy RP where you are finding ruins of a civilization.
Civilization: A double sided sword: Hmmm, probabily.
On the other hand, I was thinking about two other titles. Universal Civilzations or Civilizations: Tribes and galaxies. What do you think about those?
By the way, Izak, I understand that you can have ships as a tribe since you are in a small island, but your ships should be small air-open rafts))
Twenty third day of the new chief's order.
The chief of Turinn woke up to a rainy morning, with his mate preparing a meal of salad and crushed apple with see water, he looked around his house remembering how he collected each one of those trophies. The shiny metal ornament from the Gernith tribe, the Gem from Guloth tribe and so many other collections he had found while exploring the forest. After he eat, he went outside to find that it had stopped raining. Most of the huts where safe, except for one that the owners had forgotten to put leaves on top to prevent the rain from destroying it. He commanded the builders of the tribe to repair that house and commanded the food collectors that the tribe needed more leaves as he went to the storehut and saw a shortage of them.
At midday, he went to visit the Shrine and leave his daily gift, a see shell. Life continued as normal that day until a messenger from the Gernith Tribe ( he got across by the river by swimming, a talent the Guloth, Rasketh and Gernith tribes have) The message was transported by a system of knots in leaf rope, which the messenger wore on his neck and then translated. The message said the following: "Please bring your tribe to us, we are in great danger from Rasketh. We need help, as soon as you can give it" When the chief heard this from the messenger he thought about it and then responded that he will help to defend from the Rasketh.
The next morning he ordered his tribe to pack all needed things, and get ready to leave temporarily. He also had the best members of tribe at crafting make spears out of sticks and sharp seashells.
One day later, the tribe was ready to go to the other tribe, with leaf rafts to cross the river and food to make it there.
Tribe Info:
Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male.
Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female
Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope.
Buildings:
None at the moment, as the tribe is in a nomadic state.
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Also, I tried to make Freyn's ship seem like early prototypes for the greek trireme
Onece every one was either overboard or kiding under the piles of fishing nets, she ran into the head fisheraxer. she heard the scratching of the feet upstairs. Outside she heard the voices,
"I know some one's here, I can smell it." scruffed a small, croaky voice.
"That's you! You crzberk..." shouted the voice of a large female. "We should wait them out, they can't live in there for long!"
Kari groaned when she heard more of Frey'ns minions crash down the stairs. She knew she would have to face her biggest fear, water. she knew it was stupid for a Rend to be scared of anything, especially when you live seven paces away from the coast.
slowly she tossed aside heavy waits and things of dried vegetables. Finally, she found the cork hatch at the bottom of the ship. the panel was her Idea, if the ship was sinking you could bust it out had swim for safety. She took a breath, kicked the panel out and dove in.
Name: Ailaneu cluster
Caracteristics: There are 7 galaxies on there. Most of them which are red dwarf paradises except for a few stars here and there, and there is only one normal galaxy.
Supercluster: MS 0302+17
Name: Niajan galaxy
Caracteristics: This is the only galaxy which is normal. However, it has now turned into a massive bloodshed due to the empires disputing the control of it. It looks like Messier 58. On the center and to the left, there's the Unajid Kingdom, which is undergoing civil wars after fighting with the main colonist powers.
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Cluster: Ailaneu cluster.
Name: Jadishi
Caracteristics: The planet orbits a Jupiter-sized red dwarf, which is very weak due to aging. Because of this, the only planet with life has to be very close to it. The solar system has 4 planets. One, which is Mercury-sized, whom is too close to it's sun. It's day is of 15 hours due to the attraction of the sun that pulls the spinning of the planet. The second one whom is Earth-sized, is the planet suitable for life. However, it doesn't have a lot of life except on the reserves because of the advance of the civilization, whom covered most enviroments with cities (explained below). Then, there's another earth-sized planet. It's, in theory, a water-world because it's covered on water. But since it's further away from the sun, all it's water is just ice with massive depth (100 kms deep in the deepest parts). There's only one continent, which is covered by the ice in a 100 meter thick wall, and it has a moon, but it's terraformed and it's now a huge farm to feed the city of Asanial. Then, at last, there's a gas giant, which is Uranus size, but other than that, it's pretty much similar to Jupiter.
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Story:
Galaxy: Niajan galaxy
Name: Asanial
Caracteristics: Like I said before, it's Earth like, whose cities cover the continents. However, very deep below the cities, there are some few reserves. On these cities there are absolutely no cars since 100% accuarate teleporting machines were invented, and so the enviroment of the planet isn't very noisy. Everyone lives in skyscrappers, but they are as high as modern cities due to the authorities not being able to feed most people on them. It is purely a residential and commercial planet. With water, people might think that they are barren, but actually, they are full of towns and underwater farms.
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Story: The planet began as a rouge planet, whose mass wasn't enough to form even a bare brown dwarf. It wandered lonely around the galaxy, until it found it's current solar system. It was on a collision course with the sun, but the further planets pulled it away from the sun to it's current orbit. It started as a planet which was 1 1/4th bigger than Earth, but it's collision course stripped some of it's mass to form a moon surrounding it. Life thrived at the planet, until civilization come. At first, they limited to build small settlements. But then, they began to cover bigger and bigger areas on the map because of the growing population, which led to colonization of most of the planet, including the surface, which, except for the water that was there, was colonized, until it was stopped by the evergrowing enviromental protests.
Solar system: Jadishi
Name: Ajadinal
Caracteristics: The Ajadinal are amphibian species. They are blue-ish with scales that cover their whole bodies, but they have tentacles for limbs. This makes it hard, like the Graffyins, for hand-working with small things, but they can swim fairly well in the liquid enviroments. They have a lot of tentacles specially on the zone near the legs, which is full of mini-tentacles and their arms are too full of tentacles. They can survive over 3 kms below the water, and 500 m on the land, which means that they are able to pretty much dominate the seas and the shores of the continents. You might have on your brain of pools with air instead of water on them, but not even their technologies could do it.
Name: Unajid Kingdom
Description: The Kingdom covers the central area of the galaxy and a considerable part of the left one too. It is governed by a king and a very small parlament, which is almost symbolic, so the goverment has to deal with a lot of instability issuses. Currently, due to the many nations that entered the galaxy, many rebellions are occuring in what once was a proud empire that covered the whole galaxy.Most of the goverment is made of priests, and the king has more caracteristics of a pope than of an actual King and the religion is almost a weapon than an actual creed. In fact, a large part of the council is atheist but believe that keeping the people ignorant with their gods will keep them tied to the goverment like locking a dangerous dog.
Religion: Ajakinal, which is a polytheistic religion. However, it's now really to the eyes of the politics and the "priests" a good weapon to keep the people from breaking apart the whole empire. It has a lot of gods with equal importance.
Backstory: The nation history backs to the early modern era if we talk about the RP terms (so when the kingdom began they were with WWI techs) after the downfall of the Kisdan Empire, which covered an important part of the leftmost (names to come) continent. It was a non-important kingdom which served as a punching bag to it's neighbohours, who were anxious for the area they got. Then, the neighbohours that attacked them got into a war with the Repùblic of Asanica, which almost instantly received help from it's abused friend, and they conquered a lot of nations. However, this immediatly led to WWII (there has been another back then on the late renassiance era), which the Unajid kingdom and it's allies won. Because Jainal won an important area of world production, it began to tax the minerals for the exterior, which made the nation rich, for a while. Then, the world economy slowly decayed, and poorer nations bunched up and attacked, nearly destroying the kingdom on WWIII by pillaging towns and burning the headquatquers. However, it's allies helped the kingdom and invaded the invaders, and they were conquered and turned into mere colonies, ending this war. Analysts began to see that the country looked more like a company oligarcy than a theocratical kingdom, and they began to research space flight for possibilities to escape the planet. It took almost 100 years, while the world was weakening, but it seemed that the moment couldn't be any better, because on a great conference on the capital, the kingdom united the world. Meanwhile, the scientists mananged to escape to the moon, but the moon got quickly colonized by the newborn empire. This marked the beggining of the expansion of the empire outside the planet. Scientists began to investigate the moon and it's composition to terraform it so it can be an ecological preservation for the expanding cities, that alerady began to cover entire areas in the maps and glasses with water on them were built to keep the people from drowing on the even higher surfaces.. They took many pairs of most species and put them into the preservation, which, even though life wasn't the same, they got used to it, at least most species. This gave green light for the massive expansion of cities and farms, for which they also colonized the moon of the ice planet, which gave green light to a city expansion over the rural zones. This was followed by a massive population boom, but the resources began to get scarce. The only choice they had is to start colonizing the surrounding planets of the stars nearby. However, simply sending an efficent colonizing fleet would be expensive because of the fuel and would take over 50 years to reach any other planets. The scientists began to research the fields of FTL. After 140 years, they finally found how, and it was about time, since food production began to spiral down, and corruption increased with illegal inmoviliaries which spread the whole city menance to the whole world. They wrapped to the nearest planet, built a small base there. It was a cold planet, and was good enough to start mining operations there, and the once black market of expanding cities was legalized once again, and it grew a lot. They did the following thing to many other planets surrounding it, and they formed an army, strong enough to conquer everything to it's step. This conquest process took almost ten thousand years, on which entire civilizations, from paleolithic peoples to interestellar nations were destroyed, until it reached it's peak, when it ruled the whole galaxy, triggering a golden age where companies ruled many parts of the galaxy (they still had the same control years ago). But then, stronger nations with faster FTL attacked the empire ten years after the boom began, which began a war for a hundred years, until most of the old empire was destroyed. This made many rebellions of companies and other groups to surge, and this began the still-continuing march, The march of the Unajid kingdom, which is a march to take away the companies power to what they used to be thousands of years ago.
Race: Ajadinal
Actual era: Galactic
((The post I made in between doesn't count to double post. It was out of character, even the app was OOC))
(i've never RP'ed before!)
((You can trust that it is me, as in my other account I have not connected since, and I have an email that was added to my account info))
Twenty Seventh Day of the new Chief's order.
Omniscient View:
One day after they set off from their tribe the pack had reached the river, they had three quarters of their supplies left too. Most of the tribe members where feeling ok about this, as it was done allot. The tents where made out of leaves bound together by the adhesive blood of a native creature called Notamog, which can be found in the nearby forests (It's skin is also hunted for because of it's stone-hard hairs)
View of the tribal Chief:
The Chief woke up on the second day of the voyage, it was sunny out. He left his leaf tent to observe the camp; There were a total of 7 large leaf tents gathered around a central fire. In the distance he could see the river, and across the river the forest of Gernith. When everyone in the tribe was awake they set out again towards the river. they got to the river by midday, once at the river they looked for a good and calm place to cross. They crossed the river on their inflated leaf rafts and on the other side they set up camp to eat. He thought to himself if the mission would be succesful and reflected on what would happen if something went wrong.
Tribe Info:
Population: 12. 7 female, 5 Male.
Jobs:
Chief: 1 Male.
Ethenn: 1 Male, 1 Female.
Cire: 3 Male, 5 Female.
- Builder: 2 Male
- Food collector: 1 Male, 2 Female
- Housewife : 3 Female
Ciredinn: 1 Female
Materials:
7 Baskets of apples.
5 tree logs.
10 Baskets of clay.
30 Clay Bricks.
1 Leather sack of wild seeds.
2 Baskets of wild carrots.
9 Animal Hides.
3 Meters of leaf rope.
Buildings:
None at the moment, as the tribe is in a nomadic state.
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Epik: How did you got banned anyway? Or did it just deactivate? And please, don't spam the poll with Yes's, because it just inflates the number and I want to see how many people actually like the idea of a wiki. Not an inflated number. Can you remove your vote as EpikNeedsHelp?))
Meanwhile in the main tribe, a small flood inundated many farming plots, making the tribe go hungry. The flood began late morning and it was because it rained on the desert (which rarely happens), and from the usual small rivers that formed came a lot more water than expected, killing many plants and people. The people are unhappy because they think that their gods punished them, and the only thing that they could think of were the explorers. Nothing was heard about them in weeks, so they don't know what they had to go through. They sent a second group of explorers composed of 10 people to look for the lost men to follow them.