After years of war everyone had finally stopped fighting. The new high king of minecraft had been chosen and everyone was happy. Food was plenty and people were happy. Minecraftia had acheived peace after so many years of waring. There was peace everywhere. The creepers had been banished to the far away wastelands where nobody dared to venture and grand cities had sprouted up all across the world. The Templar Order had been rebuilt and had many strongholds across the lands to enforce order and peace. We had made alliances with the endermen and had multiple embasies in their world. Everything everywhere was perfect. Until... They came. They came up from the depths. Their war machines took over the islands of the End in a matter of hours. There were almost no survivors. Those who escaped were close to death and almost didnt survive. They had gotten through a teleporter to on of the Templar's sancuaries. They warned us of the enemy who had brough strange weapons against them. Weapons that shot beams of light that cut through their skin like a knife cut warm butter. We were sure that the enemy would next strike the Nether since it was the next thing they would reach before they got to Minecraftia. We questioned the victims of the attack a little longer then sent word to the capitol soon after. It was soon decided that a defensive perimiter would be made in the nether to repel and attackers that would come up from beneath the nether. An army of over 15,000 humans and endermen were sent down to the Nether Realm to build the defenses and repel the invaders. All colonies were abandoned as the army made its way to the nether. This was a large force. There was no way this enemy could defeat them and if it did it would be sure to loose almost all its warriors in the process... or so they thought.
Suddenly, everyone died in a freak alien invasion that no one saw coming.
Thankfully, Chuck Norris was there to ressurect everyone who just died and defeat the alien armies, so it was like nothing happened. Except, you know, stuff happened.
In my apologetic opinion this doesn't make much of a story in written form... but it would make a neat flash animation.
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"Sometimes, I just wanna give up, say 'I'm done with this mess' and go to bed. But you know what; you can't shrug off your responsibilities. You got to pull yourself up and meet the challenges head on. That's the only way you're gonna get ahead in life."
Suddenly, everyone died in a freak alien invasion that no one saw coming.
Thankfully, Chuck Norris was there to ressurect everyone who just died and defeat the alien armies, so it was like nothing happened. Except, you know, stuff happened.
you obviously don't know chuck norris very well f you think he revives people he probably jumped on the dead peeps head so their brain came out then he threw their brains at the aliens to blow up the aliens ships.
It's nice that you used the word "literally" because if you hadn't done that, I would have thought that you figuratively found some. Thank you for making that clear.
Are you attempting to make some huge multi-chaptered fan-fiction of an apocalypse of Minecraft?
Not bad, after reading Part One. If you could get like an animation of this, it'd get alot of views online. I'd love an epic 3d animation of Overworlders, Endermen, and Nether Residents teaming up to defeat a realm below the Nether itself. I'm guessing the enemy is Herobrine, right?
By the way, is this the correct section of the forums for this?
you obviously don't know chuck norris very well f you think he revives people he probably jumped on the dead peeps head so their brain came out then he threw their brains at the aliens to blow up the aliens ships.
Aliens dont Invade Earth. Chuck Norris Invades thier dreams riding a Freddy Krueger
Thanks you so much Anabelle and infiniteTurbine for Actually saying something about the story yes i am going to change it from parts to long chapters and ill try to get some animations hopefully.
After years of war everyone had finally stopped fighting. The new high king of Minecraftia had been chosen and everyone was happy. Food was plenty and people were happy. Minecraftia had achieved peace after so many years of warring. There was peace everywhere. The creepers had been banished to the far away wastelands where nobody dared to venture and grand cities had sprouted up all across the world. The Templar Order had been rebuilt and had many strongholds across the lands to enforce order and peace. We had made alliances with the endermen and had multiple embassies in their world. Everything everywhere was perfect. Until...They came. They came up from the depths. Their war machines took over the islands of The End in a matter of hours. There were almost no survivors. Those who escaped were close to death and almost didn’t survive. They had gotten through a teleporter to on of The Templar's sanctuaries. They warned us of the enemy who had brought strange weapons against them. Weapons that shot beams of light that cut through their skin like a knife cut warm butter. We were sure that the enemy would next strike The Nether since it was the next thing they would reach before they got to Minecraftia. We questioned the victims of the attack a little longer then sent word to the capitol soon after. It was soon decided that a defensive perimeter would be made in the nether to repel and attackers that would come up from beneath the nether. An army of over 15,000 humans and endermen were sent down to The Nether Realm to build the defenses and repel the invaders. All colonies were abandoned as the army made its way to the nether. This was a large force. There was no way this enemy could defeat them and if it did it would be sure to loose almost all their warriors in the process. In 3 days time a messenger arrived through the teleporter wounded and limping. Groups of endermen and humans came with him. He walked towards me and told me that the entire area had been wiped out. An explosion went off that tore through the encampment. Half of the army was dead before the battle even started.
“Boy tell me what these things looked like”
“They were strange things sir. They looked like humans but they were…different. They had eyes black as night and skin as white as the snow. They came in hordes and swarmed over the walls. They had large machines with them that cut down our men. We never stood a chance.”
The boy walked on with the rest of the wounded soldiers. I started walking towards the archives to see if I could find anything on what these creatures might be. I remembered my grandfather showing me a book of all the races and animals of Minecraftia. It was easy to find since it had a bright green cover. I quickly opened it and started flipping through the pages looking for anything that had white skin or red eyes. Near the end of the book I stopped on a page. The last thing it spoke of had no name and no picture. In the description it mentioned them, as the Banished, a race of undead creatures who ruled everything everywhere with all races as their slaves. They were stopped by the ancient elves long ago who rose up against them and freed everyone. I thought to myself that if this was the enemy we faced then we were surely doomed. The elves had disappeared long ago to world known as the Aether, a sky realm. We tried to send people after them but all they found were wild animals and empty buildings. The elves had passed on forever. I read on farther. It showed nothing of their weaknesses or where they came from. It seemed that there was no way to stop these things. He then stopped as a thought crept into his mined. Even though the elves were gone he could still find something by poking around there ruins. The Aether might also be a safer place to hide since it was only discovered a couple hundred years ago by the elves after the Banished had been defeated. He headed up to the communication tower to inform the king of his plan. He got on one of the computers and sent the king a message about his plan. He waited a while then a message appeared back. It was from the king.
“The palace is under siege! They have invaded!”
I sat there staring at the screen. The enemy had already invaded the capitol and probably some of the other major cities too. They had to get to the Aether immediately or they would soon be dead. They needed to gather all the food, mining goods, tools, armor, ingredients, potions, and anything else worth value right now and start moving them down into the abandoned caverns below the keep. There was an old portal down there that hadn’t been used in centuries. They had to get everyone moving right now or else they would all be dead. He ran through the halls and started shouting at other Templars to start evacuating people down to the portal room. He told them to gather all of the keeps supplies and take them too. He rushed down into the dungeons to get the portal working again. A regular sized portal needed to be filled with 8 buckets of water to work. This portal was a lot larger so it would need a lot more water. He had some buckets on him and there was an underground river nearby so he got to work on filling the portal up with water. It took him about 5 minutes to fill up the whole thing. Then the water vanished. At first he was frustrated but then wavy blue material appeared in the water’s place. It was like the substance that made a nether portal but it seemed less dangerous and more calm. People started poring into the cave loaded with supplies I told them to start going through the portal. My second in command ran towards me. I told him to get the people into temporary camps and to start work on a new castle in a separate area. I told him only to work on a new keep away from the encampment and build a large town around it. I told him to start a farm and start giving the people food. I told him he did not need to ration it because there was so mush and with the farm they would have an infinite source of food. I ran back up the stairs and went to my room. I put on my dark matter armor and grabbed all of my tools. I destroyed my bed and other machines in my room. I ran all throughout the keep taking all the machines I saw and checking for any stragglers. I saw no one and no more useful machines. As I was heading back down I passed a window I saw a multiple flying things in the distance and a large black mass on the ground moving towards the keep. I realized that it was the Banished. They had come for us. My heart was racing and I zoomed down the stairs to the keep. A large spider jumped at me from a wall but I quickly unsheathed my sword and cut it in half. I ran faster to the portal. I had taken some TNT from my room. I placed it all around the room that placed a lever and switched it. The TNT started flashing and I jumped through the portal just in time. When I got to the other side I saw that the endermen and other people had started setting up their camps. I saw the construction of the keep in the distance and the storage rooms being made and filled to the brim with supplies. People were already farming and mining and cutting down the new strange trees. We were safe but only us. Thousands of people had fallen to the Banished already. We had no way of defeating them and rescuing whatever survivors were still alive. We would start exploring the elven ruins in a few days and hopefully would find the answer to defeating the banished.
They find a hint from where THE elves banished THE banished with THE help of creepers but their King , THE Explosive General Spazz Does Not want to negotiate for a pact with THE People of minecraftSorry for THE , Autocorrection is crazy
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thank you people please keep posting comments and ideas i will continue to work on the story. Please send me some good ideas for the storyline or some possible weapons or new characters. i am not adding like fully automatic weapons im keeping it to the tekkit weapons so basic weapons. I will add seige weapons and maybe some new potions and foods.
Katanas.
The Banished cold equip Cavespiders as Assassins! they convert them into intilligent beings through a machine!Cavespiders are ideal as they are small and quick and can climb walls
Also they are venomous
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Which is the king of dragons and older as the universe and younger than flower in spring.He is equipped with Claws and scales harder than obsidian and his eyes look the wisdom of the gods etc.(Rest is up to you i dont wanna take the fun of inventing from you :))
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And by the way, I'm not joking around, i seriously think Herobrine should be the general of the enemy army or something, so I'm just gonna be ignored?
Thankfully it had the Life Alerttm pendant and medical personnel arrived promptly to the scene
Thank you Life Alermtm
Thankfully, Chuck Norris was there to ressurect everyone who just died and defeat the alien armies, so it was like nothing happened. Except, you know, stuff happened.
Help, I've fallen and I cannot get up!
On topic, this seems more like it would be novel based instead of made up of small parts.
Not bad, after reading Part One. If you could get like an animation of this, it'd get alot of views online. I'd love an epic 3d animation of Overworlders, Endermen, and Nether Residents teaming up to defeat a realm below the Nether itself. I'm guessing the enemy is Herobrine, right?
By the way, is this the correct section of the forums for this?
Aliens dont Invade Earth. Chuck Norris Invades thier dreams riding a Freddy Krueger
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After years of war everyone had finally stopped fighting. The new high king of Minecraftia had been chosen and everyone was happy. Food was plenty and people were happy. Minecraftia had achieved peace after so many years of warring. There was peace everywhere. The creepers had been banished to the far away wastelands where nobody dared to venture and grand cities had sprouted up all across the world. The Templar Order had been rebuilt and had many strongholds across the lands to enforce order and peace. We had made alliances with the endermen and had multiple embassies in their world. Everything everywhere was perfect. Until...They came. They came up from the depths. Their war machines took over the islands of The End in a matter of hours. There were almost no survivors. Those who escaped were close to death and almost didn’t survive. They had gotten through a teleporter to on of The Templar's sanctuaries. They warned us of the enemy who had brought strange weapons against them. Weapons that shot beams of light that cut through their skin like a knife cut warm butter. We were sure that the enemy would next strike The Nether since it was the next thing they would reach before they got to Minecraftia. We questioned the victims of the attack a little longer then sent word to the capitol soon after. It was soon decided that a defensive perimeter would be made in the nether to repel and attackers that would come up from beneath the nether. An army of over 15,000 humans and endermen were sent down to The Nether Realm to build the defenses and repel the invaders. All colonies were abandoned as the army made its way to the nether. This was a large force. There was no way this enemy could defeat them and if it did it would be sure to loose almost all their warriors in the process. In 3 days time a messenger arrived through the teleporter wounded and limping. Groups of endermen and humans came with him. He walked towards me and told me that the entire area had been wiped out. An explosion went off that tore through the encampment. Half of the army was dead before the battle even started.
“Boy tell me what these things looked like”
“They were strange things sir. They looked like humans but they were…different. They had eyes black as night and skin as white as the snow. They came in hordes and swarmed over the walls. They had large machines with them that cut down our men. We never stood a chance.”
The boy walked on with the rest of the wounded soldiers. I started walking towards the archives to see if I could find anything on what these creatures might be. I remembered my grandfather showing me a book of all the races and animals of Minecraftia. It was easy to find since it had a bright green cover. I quickly opened it and started flipping through the pages looking for anything that had white skin or red eyes. Near the end of the book I stopped on a page. The last thing it spoke of had no name and no picture. In the description it mentioned them, as the Banished, a race of undead creatures who ruled everything everywhere with all races as their slaves. They were stopped by the ancient elves long ago who rose up against them and freed everyone. I thought to myself that if this was the enemy we faced then we were surely doomed. The elves had disappeared long ago to world known as the Aether, a sky realm. We tried to send people after them but all they found were wild animals and empty buildings. The elves had passed on forever. I read on farther. It showed nothing of their weaknesses or where they came from. It seemed that there was no way to stop these things. He then stopped as a thought crept into his mined. Even though the elves were gone he could still find something by poking around there ruins. The Aether might also be a safer place to hide since it was only discovered a couple hundred years ago by the elves after the Banished had been defeated. He headed up to the communication tower to inform the king of his plan. He got on one of the computers and sent the king a message about his plan. He waited a while then a message appeared back. It was from the king.
“The palace is under siege! They have invaded!”
I sat there staring at the screen. The enemy had already invaded the capitol and probably some of the other major cities too. They had to get to the Aether immediately or they would soon be dead. They needed to gather all the food, mining goods, tools, armor, ingredients, potions, and anything else worth value right now and start moving them down into the abandoned caverns below the keep. There was an old portal down there that hadn’t been used in centuries. They had to get everyone moving right now or else they would all be dead. He ran through the halls and started shouting at other Templars to start evacuating people down to the portal room. He told them to gather all of the keeps supplies and take them too. He rushed down into the dungeons to get the portal working again. A regular sized portal needed to be filled with 8 buckets of water to work. This portal was a lot larger so it would need a lot more water. He had some buckets on him and there was an underground river nearby so he got to work on filling the portal up with water. It took him about 5 minutes to fill up the whole thing. Then the water vanished. At first he was frustrated but then wavy blue material appeared in the water’s place. It was like the substance that made a nether portal but it seemed less dangerous and more calm. People started poring into the cave loaded with supplies I told them to start going through the portal. My second in command ran towards me. I told him to get the people into temporary camps and to start work on a new castle in a separate area. I told him only to work on a new keep away from the encampment and build a large town around it. I told him to start a farm and start giving the people food. I told him he did not need to ration it because there was so mush and with the farm they would have an infinite source of food. I ran back up the stairs and went to my room. I put on my dark matter armor and grabbed all of my tools. I destroyed my bed and other machines in my room. I ran all throughout the keep taking all the machines I saw and checking for any stragglers. I saw no one and no more useful machines. As I was heading back down I passed a window I saw a multiple flying things in the distance and a large black mass on the ground moving towards the keep. I realized that it was the Banished. They had come for us. My heart was racing and I zoomed down the stairs to the keep. A large spider jumped at me from a wall but I quickly unsheathed my sword and cut it in half. I ran faster to the portal. I had taken some TNT from my room. I placed it all around the room that placed a lever and switched it. The TNT started flashing and I jumped through the portal just in time. When I got to the other side I saw that the endermen and other people had started setting up their camps. I saw the construction of the keep in the distance and the storage rooms being made and filled to the brim with supplies. People were already farming and mining and cutting down the new strange trees. We were safe but only us. Thousands of people had fallen to the Banished already. We had no way of defeating them and rescuing whatever survivors were still alive. We would start exploring the elven ruins in a few days and hopefully would find the answer to defeating the banished.
TT2000, you are genius.
Steve now eats wolfchops and zombie flesh. And likes it. Spider eyes are dessert.
The Banished cold equip Cavespiders as Assassins! they convert them into intilligent beings through a machine!Cavespiders are ideal as they are small and quick and can climb walls
Also they are venomous
TT2000, you are genius.
TT2000, you are genius.
TT2000, you are genius.
TT2000, you are genius.