Hey guys, i was watching some videos from build teams, I always have wanted to be a good builder, so here is my first attempt, I will take constructive criticism.If you would like to see my progress on my builds, please say so and I will upload more pictures of other builds Tell me what you think !
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I don't mean to be rude but I'm not entirely sure what it is
However, your building skills are already fairly good. You have a build style similar to mine;
a nice contrast between the blocks however still relevant types.
If you haven't already, you should check out Sjin from the yogscast. He makes some amazing builds.
I don't mean to be rude but I'm not entirely sure what it is
However, your building skills are already fairly good. You have a build style similar to mine;
a nice contrast between the blocks however still relevant types.
If you haven't already, you should check out Sjin from the yogscast. He makes some amazing builds.
Hey haha, yea I don't know what I was going for , it 's suppose to be a house though. But I see what you mean, i was trying to do a nice dome red roof, but it didn't turn out the best. Also I watch Sjin Feed the World
Alright, good first step, but If I were you, I'd work on your detailing and sense of depth in your build. You understand that square buildings and monoblock walls are tremendously boring but you do need to work on your depth. And one more thing, try not to use checkerboard patterns, they just look bland. I hope I don't sound like too much of a ****, I'm just trying to help, you know?
Alright, good first step, but If I were you, I'd work on your detailing and sense of depth in your build. You understand that square buildings and monoblock walls are tremendously boring but you do need to work on your depth. And one more thing, try not to use checkerboard patterns, they just look bland. I hope I don't sound like too much of a ****, I'm just trying to help, you know?
Hey thanks man! I'll take all that into consideration! I need to look at some architectural depth. Do you mean like things to stand out more? I just wasn't sure how to create it in this build D: Thanks for all your feedback!
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Like Link said,you building isn't perfectly round,and checkerborard carpets,unless used with 3 colors or more,are pretty boring. But still good stuff for a begginer
Like Link said,you building isn't perfectly round,and checkerborard carpets,unless used with 3 colors or more,are pretty boring. But still good stuff for a begginer
Thanks man and i wont be using checkered carpets anymore lol
this looks like the bottom half of an unfinished tower. the windows don't look good. checkerboard pattern is no good. roof is no good. (most roofs look better when they hang of the edge of the exterior wall). your exterior wall patterns and block choice seem to clash. sorry for being such an architectural **** but its good that you want to become a better builder! go watch some tutorial videos on you tube. -we all start out as a noob and have to work our way up to greatness.
Like Link said,you building isn't perfectly round,and checkerborard carpets,unless used with 3 colors or more,are pretty boring. But still good stuff for a begginer
Yeah, roof's more pointy than round. Still, it's good by my standards, especally the interior lighting.
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When making buildings that aren't square, try adding a little rounding to it by building a pattern like 3 blocks north, 2 blocks north, 1 block, 1 block, 2 blocks east, 3 blocks east.
Thanks guys for all the feedback, some of it i know i will have to look more in depth to. Right now im just looking at other people's builds and trying to incorporate their style as best I can
I'm not too much of a builder myself but I'm getting there just like you! By the way, the building looks nice. you should turn it into an apothecary or something like that!
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I'm not too much of a builder myself but I'm getting there just like you! By the way, the building looks nice. you should turn it into an apothecary or something like that!
Hey , thanks man! You can upload your pics to tinypic.com and it will give you a image code to put on forums
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Thanks man! I wanted something easy, I know the inside isn't the best, I feel I need to make a second level
However, your building skills are already fairly good. You have a build style similar to mine;
a nice contrast between the blocks however still relevant types.
If you haven't already, you should check out Sjin from the yogscast. He makes some amazing builds.
Hey haha, yea I don't know what I was going for , it 's suppose to be a house though. But I see what you mean, i was trying to do a nice dome red roof, but it didn't turn out the best. Also I watch Sjin Feed the World
Hey thanks man! I'll take all that into consideration! I need to look at some architectural depth. Do you mean like things to stand out more? I just wasn't sure how to create it in this build D: Thanks for all your feedback!
Thanks man and i wont be using checkered carpets anymore lol
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Checkerboard with only 2 color is boring,but one tip: Use the new carpets and experiment. Circles,stars,voids,stripes...possibilities are endless!
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Yeah, roof's more pointy than round. Still, it's good by my standards, especally the interior lighting.
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When making buildings that aren't square, try adding a little rounding to it by building a pattern like 3 blocks north, 2 blocks north, 1 block, 1 block, 2 blocks east, 3 blocks east.
It might make some things look better
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