While I'm not the biggest fan of modern, it looks great. Try to add something on the top, aka that awkward gap between the roof and the flat stone floor.
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Pretty good, and this is coming from someone who pretty much just does modern building. But considering it is modern, I feel there should be more glass. If you aren't going for a skyscraper feel, but true modern, I recomend using hardened clay, quartz, and bone blocks, and less symetry.
Here's a improved version, i kept the overall shape, however i changed the design as i was not a fan of my original design, i also got rid of the gap and tried to smooth things up as much as possible
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It's just great. But I would advise changing the clay on the roof to iron and grey clay, and you could also add some of those pipes that come out and back in. Other than that, it's a good building.
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I like your second design much better, the first one just doesn't look particularly modern to me. Probably because of the cross bars over all of the windows, that seems more like an older factory to me.
Here's a modern office building i built. Wondering what you think of it, or what i could do to improve it.
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While I'm not the biggest fan of modern, it looks great. Try to add something on the top, aka that awkward gap between the roof and the flat stone floor.
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Pretty good, and this is coming from someone who pretty much just does modern building. But considering it is modern, I feel there should be more glass. If you aren't going for a skyscraper feel, but true modern, I recomend using hardened clay, quartz, and bone blocks, and less symetry.
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Here's a improved version, i kept the overall shape, however i changed the design as i was not a fan of my original design, i also got rid of the gap and tried to smooth things up as much as possible
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It's just great. But I would advise changing the clay on the roof to iron and grey clay, and you could also add some of those pipes that come out and back in. Other than that, it's a good building.
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I like your second design much better, the first one just doesn't look particularly modern to me. Probably because of the cross bars over all of the windows, that seems more like an older factory to me.
yeah, i really didn't like that design which is why i changed it. i did it at first but i didn't really have a good design idea
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