First thing's first, you need to put more detail into your post. No pics, no clicks. Most people would guess this is a virus. You have one post prior, don't expect much. Second, in adventure mode, you can't break clay. Third, that first jump from the first netherrack fence post to the second seems really difficult compared to everything else in the map. And my final piece of negativity is that there really wasn't much to the map. Don't expect an overwhelming positive response when you really didn't make a very compelling or advanced map. You took a few puzzles and gave a tired theme to bind them together.
HOWEVER, for a first attempt, this isn't bad. Something personal and dear to my own heart is that I didn't see a whole lot of grammatical errors. I didn't pay that much attention though. I'm tired. The boss fight thing was cheap. Make a map that actually has a challenge. Challenge yourself in making it, and challenge those who play it with difficulty. It took me five minutes to play this.
If I were you, I would make the map longer, make a more developed plot, explain why the hell Docter is spelt the way it is, and release an updated version. I'm following the topic and I'll check in if you do.
TL;DR - Mediocre, but it's a first attempt. A valid, valiant first attempt. Try harder and update. You already have a lot of core concepts down, you just need to make a longer map.
Check out my first custom map here: http://www.mediafire.com/download/3jrabjwjeek0fh7/Docters_Orders_.zipLet me know if there are any mistakes what-so-ever so I can improve on them please
HOWEVER, for a first attempt, this isn't bad. Something personal and dear to my own heart is that I didn't see a whole lot of grammatical errors. I didn't pay that much attention though. I'm tired. The boss fight thing was cheap. Make a map that actually has a challenge. Challenge yourself in making it, and challenge those who play it with difficulty. It took me five minutes to play this.
If I were you, I would make the map longer, make a more developed plot, explain why the hell Docter is spelt the way it is, and release an updated version. I'm following the topic and I'll check in if you do.
TL;DR - Mediocre, but it's a first attempt. A valid, valiant first attempt. Try harder and update. You already have a lot of core concepts down, you just need to make a longer map.