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Quote from Tovagulet

I enjoyed

At the spawn room fix this things

Fix i with I
Fix labrotory with laboratory
Fiz Quizes with Quizzes
and put a sign remembering they have to sleep to set spawn, otherwise if they die, they'll spawn out of the rooms/map

and I coudn't understand the numbers and shapes?

also when you get to choose the shape, you should make the wrong buttons teleport back 1 level so its more challenging, rather than trying all buttons like I did, lol

Quote from Dreknathal

Definitely not the worst map I've seen. It's pretty good!

Definitely some improvements needed though, for example, the spelling and grammar on the signs and command blocks.

I also decided to take a peak at your command blocks and noticed you used @r. Why? People playing on multiplayer wouldn't have a good time if you use @r. I suggest @a, that way, no matter whether they play on multiplayer or singleplayer they'll all get teleported no problem.

You hid the command blocks quite well though! Thats the one thing that really bugs me in Adventure Maps. That and redstone not being hidden, so good job!

Also, like Tovagulet pointed out, I couldn't understand the numbers and shapes relation. I actually tried to make sense of it, how many sides, edges, points the shape had and couldn't make sense of it.

The map was very short, and it was over before I really got immersed in the story. Perhaps you should continue on this idea and make bigger maps!

Overall I'll give this a 6.5/10.