Also, I'm thinking about if Scorch should have a Texan or Australian accent. Originally he was going to be from Ponyville, but considering how important the mining industry is in Australia, an Australian accent might be better. (Surprisingly, one aspect of Australia that is rarely (possibly never) played up is how important the Aussie mining industry is both historically and economically here.)
If you end up doing an Australian accent don't do a fake one or its just bad lol. Dead island anyone?
Can I offer some criticism? I know im not put in on the "writing" section, but...
Some of the script could be touched up grammatically as well as a little change in story here and there (my opinion). What you have so far sounds like a pretty solid background story though Can't wait to get this started! (Random older post qouted)
Ed, can you tell me how you feel about these new versions of the intro:
Isn't there a pony skin thing on the mine little pony thread?
That closed down. If you mean the Mine Little Pony skin creator I'm just plain bad at that, frankly there needs to be a Mine Little Pony version of this: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/571250
Like I said, these are pony skins, so you won't have to worry much about clothes. The ponies I want you to make skins of are in this picture: http://wannafok.devi...Magic-278170985
And by the way, it's a bit hard to tell, but Scorch's (Scorch is the earth pony if you're wondering) cutie mark is a dynamite stick.
I'll give them a shot. BTW you should check out the Pixel Powers mod and consider basing the map around it. It adds things like clouds blocks and gives pegasi the ability to fly, unicorn the ability to teleport and earth ponies the ability for quick sprinting and being able to break anything(except obsidian) with their hooves.
EDIT: uhh whats Black Belt's cutie mark? I can't see it very well.
I'll give them a shot. BTW you should check out the Pixel Powers mod and consider basing the map around it. It adds things like clouds blocks and gives pegasi the ability to fly, unicorn the ability to teleport and earth ponies the ability for quick sprinting and being able to break anything(except obsidian) with their hooves.
EDIT: uhh whats Black Belt's cutie mark? I can't see it very well.
I'll give them a shot. BTW you should check out the Pixel Powers mod and consider basing the map around it. It adds things like clouds blocks and gives pegasi the ability to fly, unicorn the ability to teleport and earth ponies the ability for quick sprinting and being able to break anything(except obsidian) with their hooves.
EDIT: uhh whats Black Belt's cutie mark? I can't see it very well.
Tried to try it, but I'm having trouble getting it to actually work.
I'm wondering if maybe I should go back to the old version.
Sorry, to many cooks spoil the borth, plus I've already got the story planned out.
Well... As far as the story, I can see some grammatical fixes that'll need to be done. Otherwise, I think it's fine, just the wording should be changed to sound a bit more fluid.
[EDIT] Ok, did another read over in more detail... and whats with the headcrabs? and Snakelestia? Im very confused about these things... wheres the originality? And most of these things you won't be able to implement and explain with what you have in Minecraft. We should try to do this with as little modding possible required. Sorry for being very critical about it, but it needs some work. At this point, i think we should save the writing for the end of the project and just build the adventure map with all needed locations like Everfree, Canterlot, villages, and encampments.
If you end up doing an Australian accent don't do a fake one or its just bad lol. Dead island anyone?
Redstone is addicting. :3
Redstone is addicting. :3
http://mcdoomington.deviantart.com/art/Mine-Little-Pony-Intro-script-draft-alternate-296007638?q=gallery:mcdoomington&qo=0
http://mcdoomington.deviantart.com/art/Mine-Little-Pony-Intro-script-draft-289540940?q=gallery:mcdoomington&qo=1
I'm wondering if maybe I should go back to the old version.
Sorry, to many cooks spoil the borth, plus I've already got the story planned out.
Im not very good at clothes though...
And by the way, it's a bit hard to tell, but Scorch's (Scorch is the earth pony if you're wondering) cutie mark is a dynamite stick.
I'll give them a shot. BTW you should check out the Pixel Powers mod and consider basing the map around it. It adds things like clouds blocks and gives pegasi the ability to fly, unicorn the ability to teleport and earth ponies the ability for quick sprinting and being able to break anything(except obsidian) with their hooves.
EDIT: uhh whats Black Belt's cutie mark? I can't see it very well.
Also, thanks, I will.
Redstone is addicting. :3
The update could be very useful, I'm also looking into using the pixel powers mod and building the map around that instead.
Done. Some things i'm still not happy about such as Black Belt's cutie mark but there you go. Any complaints just tell me and i'll fix them.
Well... As far as the story, I can see some grammatical fixes that'll need to be done. Otherwise, I think it's fine, just the wording should be changed to sound a bit more fluid.
[EDIT] Ok, did another read over in more detail... and whats with the headcrabs? and Snakelestia? Im very confused about these things... wheres the originality? And most of these things you won't be able to implement and explain with what you have in Minecraft. We should try to do this with as little modding possible required. Sorry for being very critical about it, but it needs some work. At this point, i think we should save the writing for the end of the project and just build the adventure map with all needed locations like Everfree, Canterlot, villages, and encampments.