Here's my remake of Puss in Boots called Canine in Boots. I wrote it for an assignment in school, and tell me what you think of it. I'm sorry for any Grammar derps in it, because I finished it back in October of last year.
CANINE IN BOOTS
Once upon a time, there was a dog and his name was Canine, and he is a German Sheperd and he fights crime and is the coolest dog on Earth, because he wears boots. He tells this story, so we'll let him do that now.
"Woof! I'm a dog, and I wear boots!!" "I'm a German Sheperd and and my boots are so awesome because they have these bells on them!" "I like to chase things, like my tail, squirrels, and animals besides cats." "They scare me, like a lot." "I use a bow and I also have a quiver on my back, it has 64 arrows in it." "I'm also VERY LOUD!!" "But I'm inside my little tree fort right now, because it is pouring down rain, and it's 5:30 PM and it is very, very dark out." "Kind of ominous I think, but I should explain what my tree fort is like." "It is made of wood and is very cozy and safe." "Inside I have my sweet dog bed sewn of string and is stuffed with wool, it's so soft!" "I also have a way up, because I can't climb ladders, I have a cool elevator and it's fast, the tree fort is up like 40 feet and the elevator scales that in like 20 seconds!" "I live in a very modern world by the way, so now you know why I have an elevator to my tree fort." "I also have a fridge and an oven. If you're wondering how I have something as big as a fridge or oven in a tree house, the oven is as big as microwaves in the past and the fridge is still the same size as before." "That really sucks, because that is really big to have in a tree fort! But there is one last secret in the tree fort, and it is my secret, secret operations base!" "I have a little laptop in my tree fort so you know, but I use it for going on the Internet, playing games, and opening the entrance to my operations lab." "I have an app called 'Open Door' and it is used for opening the entrance." "It's also like a game, too! But now I'm going to show you the lab." "Oh no!" "The city needs me, there are robbers at our National Bank!" "That is really not good because that is where my nation's money is stored and saved!"
"But before we head into the city, we need to find out which one of the 10 banks it is, so that is why I have my Operations Lab." "Ok, I have opened the piston entrance and we head down the middle of my tree trunk to the base." "Welcome to the base, I have my Gear storage on the east wing, and the exit on the west wing." "But on the north wing is my villain tracker, and my 'Crime Fighter 8503' Super Computer." "I need to use it to track who the robbers are, who they work for, and which bank they are at."
"Apparently they are at World Bank # 4256, which obviously is the most popular, so I understand why they're robbing that one. Now we head to the east wing for getting my bow and arrows." "But these aren't the only thing I need to be getting, I need to get my Jet Boots, and my other gear." "I just got a message from the police, they told me the robbers are working for the ultimate villain, he calls himself 'The Boss'." "But we need to go and save the bank from them, we need to head out to the west wing and save that bank!"
"So the World Bank is about 5 miles from here, so if the boots travel at 50 mph, then we will be there in 10 minutes, so time to turn them on." "Follow me, I know where the bank is."
"Finally, we made it to the bank and they're cats!!!" "I think this will be so hard to capture them, so the plan is we sneak up behind them and capture them with nets." "Ha, I think the dog is too afraid to come." Says the cat on the right. "Yeah, I think he is, what a loser." Says the other cat, who was roaring with laughter. "Well, now I'm scared and offended, we need to catch them for what they just said!" Just then, the boots announced, "Low Power, Low Power!" "Great, now we probably won't be able to sneak up right above them and catch them." Just a second after Canine said that, a couple more evil-doers came and joined the two cats. One said, "I am Captain Cat, and I am here to help you two pillage all of these banks." Finally, Canine overcame his fear of cats, and he got out his bow, and some long-ranged Net Arrows, and he shot them, all of them. "FINALLY, I CAPTURED ALL OF THE MOST WANTED VILLAINS IN MY TOWN! The best part is, I am not afraid of cats anymore." said Canine. "Now I can take them to the police station and they'll put them in prison, where they all belong" "Now I can take a rest in my tree fort because I am so tired right now, and the city is safe, for now I guess."
The End!!
So, tell me what you think of it, and I'll see you guys later! :DThat's 906 words, just so you know.
CANINE IN BOOTS
Once upon a time, there was a dog and his name was Canine, and he is a German Sheperd and he fights crime and is the coolest dog on Earth, because he wears boots. He tells this story, so we'll let him do that now.
"Woof! I'm a dog, and I wear boots!!" "I'm a German Sheperd and and my boots are so awesome because they have these bells on them!" "I like to chase things, like my tail, squirrels, and animals besides cats." "They scare me, like a lot." "I use a bow and I also have a quiver on my back, it has 64 arrows in it." "I'm also VERY LOUD!!" "But I'm inside my little tree fort right now, because it is pouring down rain, and it's 5:30 PM and it is very, very dark out." "Kind of ominous I think, but I should explain what my tree fort is like." "It is made of wood and is very cozy and safe." "Inside I have my sweet dog bed sewn of string and is stuffed with wool, it's so soft!" "I also have a way up, because I can't climb ladders, I have a cool elevator and it's fast, the tree fort is up like 40 feet and the elevator scales that in like 20 seconds!" "I live in a very modern world by the way, so now you know why I have an elevator to my tree fort." "I also have a fridge and an oven. If you're wondering how I have something as big as a fridge or oven in a tree house, the oven is as big as microwaves in the past and the fridge is still the same size as before." "That really sucks, because that is really big to have in a tree fort! But there is one last secret in the tree fort, and it is my secret, secret operations base!" "I have a little laptop in my tree fort so you know, but I use it for going on the Internet, playing games, and opening the entrance to my operations lab." "I have an app called 'Open Door' and it is used for opening the entrance." "It's also like a game, too! But now I'm going to show you the lab." "Oh no!" "The city needs me, there are robbers at our National Bank!" "That is really not good because that is where my nation's money is stored and saved!"
"But before we head into the city, we need to find out which one of the 10 banks it is, so that is why I have my Operations Lab." "Ok, I have opened the piston entrance and we head down the middle of my tree trunk to the base." "Welcome to the base, I have my Gear storage on the east wing, and the exit on the west wing." "But on the north wing is my villain tracker, and my 'Crime Fighter 8503' Super Computer." "I need to use it to track who the robbers are, who they work for, and which bank they are at."
"Apparently they are at World Bank # 4256, which obviously is the most popular, so I understand why they're robbing that one. Now we head to the east wing for getting my bow and arrows." "But these aren't the only thing I need to be getting, I need to get my Jet Boots, and my other gear." "I just got a message from the police, they told me the robbers are working for the ultimate villain, he calls himself 'The Boss'." "But we need to go and save the bank from them, we need to head out to the west wing and save that bank!"
"So the World Bank is about 5 miles from here, so if the boots travel at 50 mph, then we will be there in 10 minutes, so time to turn them on." "Follow me, I know where the bank is."
"Finally, we made it to the bank and they're cats!!!" "I think this will be so hard to capture them, so the plan is we sneak up behind them and capture them with nets." "Ha, I think the dog is too afraid to come." Says the cat on the right. "Yeah, I think he is, what a loser." Says the other cat, who was roaring with laughter. "Well, now I'm scared and offended, we need to catch them for what they just said!" Just then, the boots announced, "Low Power, Low Power!" "Great, now we probably won't be able to sneak up right above them and catch them." Just a second after Canine said that, a couple more evil-doers came and joined the two cats. One said, "I am Captain Cat, and I am here to help you two pillage all of these banks." Finally, Canine overcame his fear of cats, and he got out his bow, and some long-ranged Net Arrows, and he shot them, all of them. "FINALLY, I CAPTURED ALL OF THE MOST WANTED VILLAINS IN MY TOWN! The best part is, I am not afraid of cats anymore." said Canine. "Now I can take them to the police station and they'll put them in prison, where they all belong" "Now I can take a rest in my tree fort because I am so tired right now, and the city is safe, for now I guess."
The End!!
So, tell me what you think of it, and I'll see you guys later! :DThat's 906 words, just so you know.