Acme and carter, you have to fill out all of the things in the application. See this topic for info. Reia, you're accepted, but when you talk in character please remember to capitalize your I's.
[b]Minecraft Username:Jakoknight
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[b]Display Name: Jako
[b]Age:15
[b]Race: viridi populus ( Which means Green people in Latin )
[b]Appearance:He's a Viridi populus (Green slime) Very messy due to the fact that he grew up on the streets.
[b]Talents:Exelent in thievery, sneaking, and acrobatics (PARKOUR!)
[b]Character History:Viridi populus home land is very poor lacking in natural resouces from the civil war that happend 100 years ago.
[b]Personality: Easy going, laid back, care free type of person.
[b]Flaws:Fast acting doesn't think out the problem.
[b]Who Knows What?: Knows- A normal 15 year old thats trying to meet days end. Does not Know- That hes a thief and has stolen from many big political bosses and has been exiled from other countries.
[b]Your Skin: A simple slime skin. Like the one from the game.
[b]RP Experience:Never played an RP before :/ So I thought this one looks nice and would love to try it
Acme and carter, you have to fill out all of the things in the application. See this topic for info. Reia, you're accepted, but when you talk in character please remember to capitalize your I's.
please look at this again i fixed it and did it again baisically because my comp froze and undid it all but i fixed
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Uhh, right. I see some obvious problems with the character history. First, are you saying that you build a tower in one day and then threw "splash potions" at children randomly? There's no explanation for any of this, things are just suddenly there. Also, realistically, you couldn't possibly build a tower all by yourself that fast, you don't have an inventory and there aren't any reporters in medieval times.
Also, "parkour" makes for a horrible talent.
you dont get the awesome professional arts of parkour! it can be very helpful and how do you know i dont even have cobblestone and potions?
[b]Minecraft Username:carter51
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[b]Display Name:Bentadere (bent for short)
[b]Age:167
[b]Race:drow
[b]Appearance:white milky eyes and seems a bit suspicious
[b]Talents:writing,planning,scheming,plotting, and a little evil laughing...
[b]Character History:As he walked through the tall grass hungry as ever. The boy notices something in the distance at full squint he can just make out a small town."I'm saved!" he yells as he crawls forward to the faint figure. All of a sudden everything goes black... "Ohhhh" the boy groans as he rises from a hard metal seat. "where am I" he asks as he explores the mossy room. The room its self in a way was quite impressive with mossy walls and a large gap in the roof. After a few attempts he gives up scaling the walls when all of a sudden a dark figure moves in the cave next to his cell. "Who are you show yourself!" he hollers at the darkness. "shhh" a mysteriously familiar voice whispers. Startled the boy leaps back from the sudden explosion that follows a harsh yelling "THE PRISONERS ARE ESCAPING!!!". "Prison?" the boy thinks to himself. In the confusion the mysterious man Quietly walks out through the blown up wall. "Follow me." he says as he grabs the boys arm. "There isn't much time!" the boy runs along the old man half scared and half bewildered. after walking through tunnels and cracks in the walls they come across yet another hole but this one had light at one end and guards patrolling it. ducking into the shadows the old man explains "I am your great great grandfather. I have come here because your amulet told me that you were in danger.". as the old man explained that they were in the stronghold of Zantendere the boy looked down at his amulet. It was glowing a bright green and a dark purple. "Quick boy do you have your spell book?" the boy nodded as he pulled it out of his pocket. "Good" the old man said as he pulled out a bottle of vile purple fluid. "Drink this he said" the boy did as told and it tasted better than it looked. It tasted of different assorted fruits native to his race. "Great now you must take down those guards with a spell except for undead ones. As the boy flipped through the pages of his book he started casting while stepping into the open "ANTERETHMENTON CENTUPLER!". A distant rumbling shook the stronghold. BOOM tendrils of fire whipped around and around the middle of the room. In a flash a fire elemental started singing the guards one by one. as the two dashed to the opening he could smell the scent food waiting for him in the village. When all of a sudden "ARRRGGGGHHH!!!". The old man had been shot by an arrow... "NOOOOO!!!" the boy screamed. But he ran on even though tears blinded his eyes as he arrived at Enderash. That is how young Bentadere had escaped the dread of the Zantendere stronghold...
[b]Personality:likes writing long storys and doesnt like being disturbed[b]Flaws:very slow and has evil thoughts
[b]Who Knows What?:SEE BELOW in "Who Knows What?" im a little suspicious and some may try to kill me...
[b]Your :http://www.planetmin.../herobrine-with
[b]RP Experience:a little but i learn quickly like bent
[b]Minecraft Username:carter51
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[b]Display Name:Bentadere (bent for short)
[b]Age:167
[b]Race:drow
[b]Appearance:white milky eyes and seems a bit suspicious
[b]Talents:writing,planning,scheming,plotting, and a little evil laughing...
[b]Character History:As he walked through the tall grass hungry as ever. The boy notices something in the distance at full squint he can just make out a small town."I'm saved!" he yells as he crawls forward to the faint figure. All of a sudden everything goes black... "Ohhhh" the boy groans as he rises from a hard metal seat. "where am I" he asks as he explores the mossy room. The room its self in a way was quite impressive with mossy walls and a large gap in the roof. After a few attempts he gives up scaling the walls when all of a sudden a dark figure moves in the cave next to his cell. "Who are you show yourself!" he hollers at the darkness. "shhh" a mysteriously familiar voice whispers. Startled the boy leaps back from the sudden explosion that follows a harsh yelling "THE PRISONERS ARE ESCAPING!!!". "Prison?" the boy thinks to himself. In the confusion the mysterious man Quietly walks out through the blown up wall. "Follow me." he says as he grabs the boys arm. "There isn't much time!" the boy runs along the old man half scared and half bewildered. after walking through tunnels and cracks in the walls they come across yet another hole but this one had light at one end and guards patrolling it. ducking into the shadows the old man explains "I am your great great grandfather. I have come here because your amulet told me that you were in danger.". as the old man explained that they were in the stronghold of Zantendere the boy looked down at his amulet. It was glowing a bright green and a dark purple. "Quick boy do you have your spell book?" the boy nodded as he pulled it out of his pocket. "Good" the old man said as he pulled out a bottle of vile purple fluid. "Drink this he said" the boy did as told and it tasted better than it looked. It tasted of different assorted fruits native to his race. "Great now you must take down those guards with a spell except for undead ones. As the boy flipped through the pages of his book he started casting while stepping into the open "ANTERETHMENTON CENTUPLER!". A distant rumbling shook the stronghold. BOOM tendrils of fire whipped around and around the middle of the room. In a flash a fire elemental started singing the guards one by one. as the two dashed to the opening he could smell the scent food waiting for him in the village. When all of a sudden "ARRRGGGGHHH!!!". The old man had been shot by an arrow... "NOOOOO!!!" the boy screamed. But he ran on even though tears blinded his eyes as he arrived at Enderash. That is how young Bentadere had escaped the dread of the Zantendere stronghold...
[b]Personality:likes writing long storys and doesnt like being disturbed
[b]Flaws:very slow and has evil thoughts
[b]Who Knows What?:SEE BELOW in "Who Knows What?" im a little suspicious and some may try to kill me...
[b]Your Skin:http://www.planetmin.../herobrine-with
[b]RP Experience:a little but i learn quickly like bent
woah how are there 2 of them???
o well i cant get rid of them so I HOPE U LIKE IT
Minecraft Username: keekocats
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Display Name: Camille Age: 48 Race: Elf Appearance: Pale, tall, brown hair with brown eyes. Talents: Has mastered the art of stealth. Character History: Her parents died when she was at a young age and since then has wandered the forest in search of a fresh start. Since one has to be quiet to survive in the wilderness Camille has masterd the art of stealth so that she can become the predator and not the prey. She has stumbled apoun the land of Mytatrea in hope that they will let her in, but will they? Personality: Quiet, content, and serious but knows the right time to be wild and let loose. Flaws: Can sometimes not recongize a friend from a foe. Who Knows What?: They know that Camille is a women of her word but can be deceiving. Your Skin: http://www.minershoe...915291514915107 RP Experience: Not much but i will try my best and put my heart in it to learn.
Carter, you're missing flaws. iBOXi, "pained by the memories of his past" isn't much of a flaw. You and keeko and rocket also have to find a link of your skins or take a screenshot of them. Rocket, you have to have flaws; nobody is perfect. And all of you could clean your apps up a bit, fix spelling mistakes, capitalize, etc.
Minecraft Username: kenzie76
--------- Display Name: Leda Age: 57 Race: Elf Appearance: Long White hair, purple eyes, very beautiful, and fair skin. Talents: Well trained in the art of sword fighting. Character History: Leda grew up in the rolling hills of Delilha. Her mother passed away at birth, and ever since her father was a blacksmith, Leda has always loved the sword. Over the next 12 years, Leda did nothing but study the art of sword fighting. When Leda was 29, Delilah raged into battle with Jared, the city of the sea. That is when she put her skill to good use. After 4 days of battle her beloved father was killed. After the war Leda had to avenge her fathers death. So now she is traveling Minecraftia in search of a home far away from Delilah, where all her memories are. She arrived at the door of Mytatrea and would like to enter, so she can study more on sword fighting, so that one day she may avenge her father. Personality: She can be very outgoing, fierce, and loves to help otheres. Flaws: Tends to get agrivated with others easily. Who Knows What? A spunky elf girl. What they dont know is that im trying to kill the man who killed my father. Your Skin: http://www.minershoe...914291414914107 RP Experience: New, but would love to learn.
Minecraft Username: : gigglefoot1 Display Name: Emile_Osman Age: 86 Race: human Appearance: a old man with a long white beard and a long flowing robe on Talents: is a great potion maker and studies in the arts of magic.Great at being grumpy and mean. Character History: all i can remember is waking up and just playing around with magic and thats all i have ever done. i use magic to make my life easyer since i am so old. I also remember having a wife but sadly she has departed from this world. Personality: grumpy to the young generation Flaws: stuborn and ill temperd Who Knows What?: Do know: i am grumpy and have been on my own for a long time. Dont know: that i love to ocationaly steal. sometimes money and sometimes potions. Your Skin: an old man skin. http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/112775/wizard/ RP Experience: i have been on many RP servers before and loved every one.
Minecraft Username: keekocats
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Display Name: Camille Age: 48 Race: Elf Appearance: Pale, tall, brown hair with brown eyes. Talents: Has mastered the art of stealth. Character History: Her parents died when she was at a young age and since then has wandered the forest in search of a fresh start. Since one has to be quiet to survive in the wilderness Camille has masterd the art of stealth so that she can become the predator and not the prey. She has stumbled apoun the land of Mytatrea in hope that they will let her in, but will they? Personality: Quiet, content, and serious but knows the right time to be wild and let loose. Flaws: Can sometimes not recongize a friend from a foe. Who Knows What?: They know that Camille is a women of her word but can be deceiving. Your Skin: http://www.minershoe...915291514915107 RP Experience: Not much but i will try my best and put my heart in it to learn.
Minecraft Username: Chamcham
--------- Display Name: Tralonka Gender: Male (added this section for specification.) Age: 19 Race: Dwarf Appearance: Tralonka is 4 feet 9 inches tall, has Black eyes, slightly decayed grey teeth, a beard covering his nose, around his mouth, and down his chest; he wears black leather garb, black leather gloves, and boots. (the works.) Talents: (i have no idea if i'm allowed to say "can do a double back flip over a lake of lava" or something like that, but;)
Tralanka, being a Dwarf, has an intelect of some how "knowing" where certain ores are in the ground, (idk if i can do this:) and has a passion/hobby for working the furnace. Character History:
(i am sorry if this seems more like a more of a backstory then a character history)
Tralonka was born and raised in a small dwarven mining town inside of a large mountain, he learned the works of mining, working the furnace, and protecting himself from the monsters of the deep, dark, caves.
when he became almost 19 years of age, Tralonka's family was preparing for his Birthday party, when suddenly, the town was swarmed with many creatures from the dark mining tunnels; (thats what you get for not bringing enough torches )
Tralonka decided he would try to put his skills (which were not very many) and try to help protect the town.
Creepers swarmed the houses and the crop fields, exploding anything valuable.
when the attack was over, only a few people were left in town, and they insisted that he packed up as there were still more monsters to come and the town was a complete wreak;
so Tralonka packed his bags with some bread, clothing, and some belongings, and left town. This is where Tralonka begins his way through the open world. Personality: Serious, and rather upset as he had just recently but whenever it comes to ale and cake, Flaws: Tralonka has very little ability to fight, (can only weild wood/stone sword/can't use sword at all, but can use pickaxe?) (this is a joke) and he can't even do a cartwheel. Who Knows What?: no one outside of this secret little mining town, except for a few kind hermits that gave bastion to him for the night, as he had just embarked on his journy from town.)
Your Skin:
Front
Back
i did not make this skin, i do not own it, i found it on skin edit. RP Experience: i have played on a few minecraft roleplay servers (which all were pretty boring, and had a poor comunity of admin and newbie alike.
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[b]Display Name: Jako
[b]Age:15
[b]Race: viridi populus ( Which means Green people in Latin )
[b]Appearance:He's a Viridi populus (Green slime) Very messy due to the fact that he grew up on the streets.
[b]Talents:Exelent in thievery, sneaking, and acrobatics (PARKOUR!)
[b]Character History:Viridi populus home land is very poor lacking in natural resouces from the civil war that happend 100 years ago.
[b]Personality: Easy going, laid back, care free type of person.
[b]Flaws:Fast acting doesn't think out the problem.
[b]Who Knows What?: Knows- A normal 15 year old thats trying to meet days end. Does not Know- That hes a thief and has stolen from many big political bosses and has been exiled from other countries.
[b]Your Skin: A simple slime skin. Like the one from the game.
[b]RP Experience:Never played an RP before :/ So I thought this one looks nice and would love to try it
Ok I just made the changes.
Insted of being a slime person Im gonna be a High Elf. Same story Just different look.
please look at this again i fixed it and did it again baisically because my comp froze and undid it all but i fixed
you dont get the awesome professional arts of parkour! it can be very helpful and how do you know i dont even have cobblestone and potions?
woah how are there 2 of them???
o well i cant get rid of them so I HOPE U LIKE IT
Parkour doesn't exist in our times, nor would it ever.
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Display Name: Camille
Age: 48
Race: Elf
Appearance: Pale, tall, brown hair with brown eyes.
Talents: Has mastered the art of stealth.
Character History: Her parents died when she was at a young age and since then has wandered the forest in search of a fresh start. Since one has to be quiet to survive in the wilderness Camille has masterd the art of stealth so that she can become the predator and not the prey. She has stumbled apoun the land of Mytatrea in hope that they will let her in, but will they?
Personality: Quiet, content, and serious but knows the right time to be wild and let loose.
Flaws: Can sometimes not recongize a friend from a foe.
Who Knows What?: They know that Camille is a women of her word but can be deceiving.
Your Skin: http://www.minershoe...915291514915107
RP Experience: Not much but i will try my best and put my heart in it to learn.
-Jake
Server's never down?
If it is, it's most likely because of a quick restart, and that occurs at midnight typically.
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Display Name: Leda
Age: 57
Race: Elf
Appearance: Long White hair, purple eyes, very beautiful, and fair skin.
Talents: Well trained in the art of sword fighting.
Character History: Leda grew up in the rolling hills of Delilha. Her mother passed away at birth, and ever since her father was a blacksmith, Leda has always loved the sword. Over the next 12 years, Leda did nothing but study the art of sword fighting. When Leda was 29, Delilah raged into battle with Jared, the city of the sea. That is when she put her skill to good use. After 4 days of battle her beloved father was killed. After the war Leda had to avenge her fathers death. So now she is traveling Minecraftia in search of a home far away from Delilah, where all her memories are. She arrived at the door of Mytatrea and would like to enter, so she can study more on sword fighting, so that one day she may avenge her father.
Personality: She can be very outgoing, fierce, and loves to help otheres.
Flaws: Tends to get agrivated with others easily.
Who Knows What? A spunky elf girl. What they dont know is that im trying to kill the man who killed my father.
Your Skin: http://www.minershoe...914291414914107
RP Experience: New, but would love to learn.
Display Name: Emile_Osman
Age: 86
Race: human
Appearance: a old man with a long white beard and a long flowing robe on
Talents: is a great potion maker and studies in the arts of magic.Great at being grumpy and mean.
Character History: all i can remember is waking up and just playing around with magic and thats all i have ever done. i use magic to make my life easyer since i am so old. I also remember having a wife but sadly she has departed from this world.
Personality: grumpy to the young generation
Flaws: stuborn and ill temperd
Who Knows What?: Do know: i am grumpy and have been on my own for a long time. Dont know: that i love to ocationaly steal. sometimes money and sometimes potions.
Your Skin: an old man skin. http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/112775/wizard/
RP Experience: i have been on many RP servers before and loved every one.
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Display Name: Tralonka
Gender: Male (added this section for specification.)
Age: 19
Race: Dwarf
Appearance: Tralonka is 4 feet 9 inches tall, has Black eyes, slightly decayed grey teeth, a beard covering his nose, around his mouth, and down his chest; he wears black leather garb, black leather gloves, and boots. (the works.)
Talents: (i have no idea if i'm allowed to say "can do a double back flip over a lake of lava" or something like that, but;)
Tralanka, being a Dwarf, has an intelect of some how "knowing" where certain ores are in the ground, (idk if i can do this:) and has a passion/hobby for working the furnace.
Character History:
(i am sorry if this seems more like a more of a backstory then a character history)
Tralonka was born and raised in a small dwarven mining town inside of a large mountain, he learned the works of mining, working the furnace, and protecting himself from the monsters of the deep, dark, caves.
when he became almost 19 years of age, Tralonka's family was preparing for his Birthday party, when suddenly, the town was swarmed with many creatures from the dark mining tunnels; (thats what you get for not bringing enough torches )
Tralonka decided he would try to put his skills (which were not very many) and try to help protect the town.
Creepers swarmed the houses and the crop fields, exploding anything valuable.
when the attack was over, only a few people were left in town, and they insisted that he packed up as there were still more monsters to come and the town was a complete wreak;
so Tralonka packed his bags with some bread, clothing, and some belongings, and left town.
This is where Tralonka begins his way through the open world.
Personality: Serious, and rather upset as he had just recently but whenever it comes to ale and cake,
Flaws: Tralonka has very little ability to fight, (can only weild wood/stone sword/can't use sword at all, but can use pickaxe?) (this is a joke) and he can't even do a cartwheel.
Who Knows What?: no one outside of this secret little mining town, except for a few kind hermits that gave bastion to him for the night, as he had just embarked on his journy from town.)
Your Skin:
Front
Back
i did not make this skin, i do not own it, i found it on skin edit.
RP Experience: i have played on a few minecraft roleplay servers (which all were pretty boring, and had a poor comunity of admin and newbie alike.
I will edit this if nessasary.