In-game Name: kory132
Age: 19
Time zone/Location: USA Eastern
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Roleplay Name: Balgart
Age: 42
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsmen
Biography: My Names Balgart iv lived with my family for years in the woods until i was 13 and my village got sacked by a neighboring tribe me and my mom was saved by the royal archers. When i turned 19 my mom died and i set off on my own journey to become a woodsmen like my father and supply anyone in need with my perfect quality lumber. When i turned 25 i was blessed with a wife name harmony and a little girl named Farsi. My wife pasted at 38 years old my daughter has a family now and works like her father and i am very proud of her. I now live in Ofriheim and is one of the current woodsmen there and im am proud of my past if the events never happened i doubt that i would have ever met my loving wife. I also have met a friendly Kree in my journeys he was funny he exaggerated alot of things but he help me fight in my journeys but we had to depart our way when i met my wife. (total of 185 words)
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I hope you except me im new to this but i can learn fast and would love to i hope you accept me.
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Roleplay Name: Krystallus
Age: 25
Race:Cmokan
Class: Mage
Biography(250 words minimal):
I grew up living with magic. My father, Merlin, taught me some of the starting strings. I was traveling from portal to portal exploring the world to find out hidden secrets to use them to my advantage. I've traveled almost everywhere. I've traveled so far down that I could see the void getting ready to open its mouth to swallow me in. I found a Portal that lead me to a wasteland of living hell. I could hear crying everywhere I went. I found a portal that lead me back to a town where they looked like they were from a physic ward. They nursed me back to normal and gave me some supplies, I used them to build a mansion fit for a king for them to live in. I used a spell, what was it, I can't remember, and I built an infinite fire so they would always have light even in dark times. They built me a portal to a sacred land of their people that no one has been in the last century. This land was known as Aether, they told me. I stood in the portal and it took me to a skyland, I was amazed and was very careful about going towards the edge so I wouldn't fall off. I escaped out off this place after I built a house. I made my way back to the portal and landed in a Country. I met people faster then I could say hello. I asked them what this place is called and they said Cmok. I said ok and asked who rules this land. They suddenly knocked me unconsious and I can't remember a thing. All I remember is my some of my past and that I am now a captive.
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): warhawkcrazy97
Roleplay Name: Krystallus
Age: 25
Race:Cmokan
Class: Mage
Biography(250 words minimal):
I grew up living with magic. My father, Merlin, taught me some of the starting strings. I was traveling from portal to portal exploring the world to find out hidden secrets to use them to my advantage. I've traveled almost everywhere. I've traveled so far down that I could see the void getting ready to open its mouth to swallow me in. I found a Portal that lead me to a wasteland of living hell. I could hear crying everywhere I went. I found a portal that lead me back to a town where they looked like they were from a physic ward. They nursed me back to normal and gave me some supplies, I used them to build a mansion fit for a king for them to live in. I used a spell, what was it, I can't remember, and I built an infinite fire so they would always have light even in dark times. They built me a portal to a sacred land of their people that no one has been in the last century. This land was known as Aether, they told me. I stood in the portal and it took me to a skyland, I was amazed and was very careful about going towards the edge so I wouldn't fall off. I escaped out off this place after I built a house. I made my way back to the portal and landed in a Country. I met people faster then I could say hello. I asked them what this place is called and they said Cmok. I said ok and asked who rules this land. They suddenly knocked me unconsious and I can't remember a thing. All I remember is my some of my past and that I am now a captive.
Im not a whitelister, but here's some advice.
Growing up, even in a different dimension or such, and having magic skills taught to you by your father that allowed you to teleport anywhere in the world? That's something that even a character played by an Admin could not do, unless explained otherwise. Also, you put in that you are Cmok. That would be untrue, as you are from a different part of the world. And since I don't think the admins are going to let you have your own race, I would suggest changing that. Another thing, about magic again. The only way to be a mage in this is to be taught by a teacher from the Empire's Mage Circuit. ( Or so I've been told. ) I wanted to be a healing mage, but I couldn't do that due to some of the same reasons that I am presenting to you now. And finally, your bio itself. You we're very unrealistic even for a fictional RP setting. Especially at the end. I don't think one would be knocked out and held captive. It sounds very generic and overused.
I am NOT trying to be a huge d-bag. I am just trying to help you get on to the server. So try re-writing your bio, and changing up some things to better fit the guidelines of this server. Also, I read that mages are over abundant nowadays, so I would ask you to be something else that you like.
In addition, we have a minimum of 250 words. It's not a lot. If you can't write it, then you don't belong on this server, as it is ALL roleplay, which means fast typing, lots of typing. If you can't keep up, you probably won't have fun. Which means doing risky things, getting caught, getting banned; all that unpleasantness.
On that same note, we've denied people for terrible spelling and grammar. Yes, we give you a few mistakes, no one is perfect. But if your bio looks like this, "i want to b abl3 to run across teh land wit u, lol," something is wrong.
This is up to the point LordAmmar said sent in the list. Anyone who applied after that will be on tomorrows list.
ACCEPTED: xChonNom (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - You just scrapped 250. But I find your Bjardsoen character's ambition to be an Imperial knight and interesting one considering your racial choice. Please don't let me down and build upon this, and show how this puts you apart from your average Bjardsoen.
PandaPudding (Cmokan/Herbalist) - Good application! Nicely written and I could see you being an interesting character to interact with. You're missing your character's age though so just incorporate that in-game. I do however ask you learn Minecraft potion recipes and do not to make it up as you go.
Cyndikate (Cmokan/Archer) - Well written and you've given good background for your class selection. I hope you use your character's backstory in future server interactions, as I could see it motivating her in her actions.
TRY AGAIN: Mitunzz_ (Kree/Mage) - Your application failed to reach 250 words. And your biography has no explanation to do with your class choice, and the Kree race cannot be mages.
gunnut (Iredoran/Woodsman) - You're cutting the word requirement close. But I find your character's backstory regarding the exile interesting, so fix up your Biography a bit and reapply. Also loose the trolling.
cdncool (Iredoran/Archer) - You have several spelling and grammar mistakes, and your biography is very incoherent with having no transition between topics. Also I don't understand how you can accidently come across the Empire.
Jagun (Bjardsoen/Swordsman) - 129 words is far below the 250 word requirement, expand on your story and you'll have a decent biography.
Tylertbo (Cmokan/?) - Firstly you can't be two classes you can either be a Smith or Miner. Secondly a Cmokan would not grow up in Gazagan amongst the Kree. To sum up your apllication needs a lot of work.
lippy896 (Iredoran/Swordsman) - You barely reached 250 words. Also I find your application is cliched in regards to reading about heroes and aspiring to be them. And an Iredoran cannot be Swordsmen.
Dystormn (Iredoran/Woodsman) - I like you application, but your character is 25 years old whilst the city Myrire was destroyed around a 100 years ago. Please fix this error and reapply, as you clearly have a good imagination. Clearly you've read the lore but have mate a mistake with you age, as Iredorans can live up to 400 years old.
OOC Information
In-game Name: omnitricks
Age: 22
Time zone/Location: GMT
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IC information
Roleplay Name: Klarish Kron
Age: 43
Race: Cmokan
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
There are two sides to each coin and that is even more true when it comes to life in the Cmokan Empire for one Klarish Kron. Brought up in a long line of cosmetologists during the time of peace, for everyone else the man would be one dealing with goods of luxury for most of the other people raising the quality of their life or their health. That is of course the side which everyone sees. On the other side, the Kron family also specializes in the dark ways of the art utilized in acts such as assassinations which has been invaluable in increasing the family’s name, power and fortune as well as bringing glory to the Empire since the beginning of the Third Age despite the popularity of the use of the magical arts. Though Klarish has also been taught how to utilize this since his childhood, fortunately he has yet to use it except during those very rare circumstances by those very few parties who even know that he is capable of doing so. However as a black sheep of the Kron family, Klarish wants to be able to focus on working on the legitimate side of the family business where he would be able to bring happiness instead of tragedy. So far as of late, he has been successful in keeping true to his wishes but the decline of demand for his services might force him to do otherwise yet again. One tiny hint of poison capable of corrupting the rest of what he is.
Question: Brewing requires quite some items from the Nether. Is the Nether accessible/allowed in the server or is there some other way to get the resources?
ACCEPTED:
PandaPudding (Cmokan/Herbalist) - Good application! Nicely written and I could see you being an interesting character to interact with. You're missing your character's age though so just incorporate that in-game. I do however ask you learn Minecraft potion recipes and do not to make it up as you go.
- Crap, I knew I was forgetting something. I am 27 IG, and I believe I didn't put that in my application, eh? Sorry! xD I'll be on this morning after school. I get out at 10:20AM, and it's 6:25AM now.
OOC Information
In-game Name: dgriffin528
Age:14
Time zone/Location: CST
How did you hear about us? (Optional): My friend, blizzard9434, played on the MERP server
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IC information
Roleplay Name: Dystormn
Age: 153
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsman
Biography(250 words minimal): Dystormn was born to a poor family of farmers in the city of Myri. His mother's name was Alifragalia and his father's name was Ragnamar. Even from the age of six, Dystormn always loved working with wood. Every spare minute he had, you could find him working with wood and planting saplings. One day, he decided that his goal would be to be the best woodsman ever. He would be able to supply his whole village with wood. One fateful day as he was headed to his chop trees, his father, Ragnamar, stopped him and told him that he was old enough to go out into the world and find a better place where he could make a living.
Then, with only his axe and his father's blessing, a few gold coins, Dystormn set out in search of a new city, but couldn't bring himself to leave Myrie. He lived by himself just outside of the city for a few months, when one day he saw long plumes of smoke rising from all around the beautiful city. He ran away a little bit and stood on a small hill. Then Dystormn witnessed the burning of the beautiful city he had spent his whole life in. Sobbing, Dystormn to Cmok, but was not yet ready to be around people after witnessing the brutal destruction of the Iredoran race.
Three days later, when Dystormn was beginning to starve, he finally went into the city. He used all of his father's blessing to buy some food. Dystormn then proceeded to devour all of the food. He saw some of his fellow Iredoran, but he decided not to talk to them. He was still in too much of a state of shellshock from witnessing the violent act. He then left the city and has wandered the forests ever since then.
In-game Name: kory132
Age: 19
Time zone/Location: USA Eastern
How did you hear about us? (Optional): I saw post on forums Looks awsome
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): kory132
Roleplay Name: Balgart
Age: 42
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsmen
Biography: My Names Balgart I've lived with my family for years in the woods until I was 13 and my village got sacked by a neighboring tribe me and my mom was saved by the royal archers. When I turned 19 my mom died and I set off on my own journey to become a woodsmen like my father and supply anyone in need with my perfect quality lumber. When I turned 25 I was blessed with a wife name harmony and a little girl named Farsi. My wife passed at 38 years old my daughter has a family now and works like her father and I am very proud of her. I am proud of my past if the events never happened I doubt that I would have ever met my loving wife. I also have met a friendly Kree in my journeys he was funny he exaggerated alot of things but he help me fight on my journeys and gave me tools now and then to get my lumber easier but he passed at 34 he was killed in the mines while he was working. I miss him dearly and hope he rests in peace as of now I live in the town of Ofriheim and are one of the current woodsmen there. As you can see I am actually very satisfied with my life and how it turned out but I am getting old and I soon will need an assistant to help me with my work. So that's my life story I hope it don't disappoint you have a good day sir.
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Sorry about last post i was half asleep last night hope i get accepted
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): warhawkcrazy97
Roleplay Name: Krystallus
Age: 25
Race: Kree
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
Hello, my name is Krystallus. I just started learning herbalogy by experimenting with different stuff. I am on my way now to a capital, Cmok. I am hoping to look for a job as a Herbalist or become an apprentice of a herbalist. I am looking forward to seeing the huge city and help it progress. We were in bad times, that doesn’t change a thing. I am from the city of Gazagan, my studies weren’t appreciated there so I decided to make the trip. I am 25 years old and a little poor. I came from a family that lived in alleyways, my past wasn’t that great. I’m taking this risk to show my parents that I am what I am and not what they decide I am. This is my biggest and riskiest journey I have ever taken.
My past is pretty dark. My family’s idea of a feast is 10 raw pork on the floor for dinner. I lived in alleyways all my life that I have no idea of what a mansion looks like. To help put food on the table for the family I had to pickpocket people so I could pay for supper on my night and some money to spend on supplies to practice my talent as a herbalist. My mom tried to catch some gold from begging at corners. My dad got food for killing chickens secretly in the markets. Me, I just did my best to try to not explode at my life.
ps. I made sure I had 250 words and good grammer. My friend, reppin402jr, is on this server so I really want to play this awesome server with him.
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IC information
Roleplay Name: Edmond Ailemer
Age:18
Race:Iredoran
Class:Archer
Biography(250 words minimal):
My name is Edmond Ailemer. I am an Iredoran who was born and raised within Myrire. My father was on of the best hunters in our city. He spent most of his life sitting in trees observing every detail Myri had created in nature ,while at the same time paying close attention to his prey. When he caught his prey, he would kill them quickly, and say a quick blessing. Throughout the years, Myri allowed that. My father had thick green hair. It was clear that he was more of a nymph than anything, but my mother was more human. she respected nature, but was not as obsessed with it as my father was. She was an excellent cook. She would cook every animal that my father would bring back to our tree. My sister and I had grown up helping our parents with work. we rarely had time to wander off, and explore. I had chosen to help my father with hunting while my sister helped our mother with cooking. My first day of hunting was a challenge. I was not able to climb any trees, so I went searching for prey a far ways away from my father. After a few hours of searching, I was less focused with nature, and not attentive with my surroundings. I was then attacked by a wild wolf. I was equipped with a practice bow since I was too little to wield a full length bow. I tried to pull the bow out, and search for an arrow in my quiver, but it was too late. The wolf had already pounced on me, and was about to feast on my defenseless body. Its eyes were blood red, and hair stuck up on the upper portion of his back, I had then realized that you are not only the predator, but you may also be the prey. Before the wolf could take a bite out of my heart, an arrow flew straight through its neck. In a blink on an eye, my father had started his prayer for the wolf. That day, i didn't catch anything to bring back home, but it was a big learning experience, and the wolf was delicious. After a few years of hunting with my father, he gave me the bow he had always used. The handle was carved perfectly, and the string had a golden tint to it. He had said that If he died, He would want me to carry on with his job. He favored my skills. I did not change his strategy to hunting, I perfected it. I was able to shoot a 150 foot target long bow, and was almost as good of a climber as he was. Soon after, I was able to travel through the woods without my father, and with no fear of being attacked. A few years later, my little sister died young. I had always called her annoying, because of her young personality, but It soon came to me how much i miss her. My father was so depressed, that he stopped hunting, and he passed away years later. Now, I spend most of my time hunting, and taking care of my mother. She is now very old for an Iredoran, and cannot travel very far without my help. Since she is the only part of my family left, I dare not leave the house.
Logan, you don't seem to understand the point of rp. Talking with people is all it is. If you're looking for something different, maybe join another server?
OOC Information
In-game Name: Kezaraux
Age: 14
Time zone/Location: Eastern Standard Time / Ontario, Canada.
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IC information
Roleplay Name: Rulian
Age: 19
Race: Cmokan
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
Rulian is a unique person to say the least. As a child he was frowned upon by the other children because he didn't fit in with the crowd. Rulian always preferred to go off and look at the plants and local insects. He enjoys wandering among nature and exploring. On his 9th birthday his parents, gave him a little alchemy kit, which cost them a fortune to get in their little town, to fiddle around with. They soon learned that Rulian had an aptitude for brewing potions and sweet tasting drinks.
At Rulian's 15th birthday, he decided it was time that it was high time for him to go off and explore the world. He set out to traverse the lands with his satchel and his handy alchemy kit. Now four years later he returns a man from the far off lands known as Aswein, and sadly he returns without his little alchemy kit which is probably to small for him now anyways, but he does return with something. He returns with a greater knowledge of herbalism and some neat little tricks to get him through his life. Now he wanders the lands he once knew and now he hopes to become acquainted with them again.
Coming back to the village where he was raised, he sees that there is nothing here for him and he decides to move onto bigger things, like maybe getting some official training in herbalism so he could fully pursue it as his job. He is now on his way to the capital of the land, Cmok.
I hope you like my app, and sorry for filling up that space with whole sections for just 3 words of simple errors. I have a habit of pointing those out sometimes. Also please excuse any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, it was partially late when I wrote this.
Found some typing errors, though you should know of them, corrections beside in brackets. They are in bold:
Professions are used to help you craft your story for the Role playing to help bring balance to the groups and an economy. Our goal is to not let the confines of your profession limit your role play. Explore with the your imagination to what can happen. On another note, their are advance professions like: Master Swordsmen, that can wield Diamond Armor and Diamond weapons, Master Smiths who can make Diamond Tools, Weapons, and Armor and more. These Professions can only be recieved by role playing and loyality (Loyalty) to the server.
Mage, scholars and masters of the arcane arts. Mages have long been in the high class citizens of the Empire.
-Uses: Access to a number of Spell, Sword (Gold), Armour (Leather)
-Characters that can use this Profession: Mages, Scholars, Researchers, Battle-Mahes (Battle-Mages), Teachers, Healers, Etc.
-Note: Anyone who applies to be a Mage will have to attend the Mage's Academy and complete the term before become a full fledge Mage of the Empire. Link about the Academy found here: Link
-Information Link about magic found here (Offical post is being developed):Here
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- Do not use, the "My Parnets were killed. Now I want revenge." Type of story, as it is overused and we believe our role players are more creative.
-Do not Power Game in your post. A real person (no matter the race) can not kill 50 or more enemies by himself.
-Do not make yourself an Assasin (Assassin), Theif, or Rogue.
-You are not a Lord or Noble of any kind, you may work your way up in the Role play, but not from the beginning.
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It's hard to come up with things to say and ways to say them properly after a long day, so how about we all just sit down and try to figure out what the hell I'm saying in an orderly fashion?
Event are planned both Role Playing events to keep the overall story line moving, but also smaller events. I believe Connor4donkeys (Leader of the Bjard) is going to start up weekly tournyments.
In-game Name: XlegolasX
Age:14
Time zone/Location: AEST----Australia
How did you hear about us? (Optional): Minecraft forums, thought you looked like a awesome server(not trying to be a suck up)
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IC information
Roleplay Name: Legolas ( nickname-Lego )
Age: 26
Race: Kree
Class: Woodsmen/ archer
Biography(250 words minimal): Legolas was born and raised in the woods giving him a keen sense of land he has never got a break in his life always working always being disrespected by his family and out shined by his older brother Gallius who has made his life a living hell. Eventually he ran away and started a new life. He soon came across a two travellers who also live of the land. Life turned out being a heaven for Legolas for he had friends, food and an easy life. After about 3 months of travelling they finally found civilisation. He lived in a small town of krimstone river until his best friends sadly past away,so instead of living in a town of memory's he set sail to see new land. Soon enough he heard of a place called Ofriheim and its giant walls. He was so desperate to find this city he travelled for two more years and then he sore something he would never expect, his brother and parents murdering two poor civilised people he couldn't believe his eyes so he ran and ran and ran until he could go no more after days of having nightmares and flashbacks he prayed to UDLR to end the nightmare but nothing. Now he lives his days as a traveller waiting for the gods to answer his prayer. Falling into a deep hallucination and starts walking in circles then finally a man in clean white robe and shining diamond armour comes to him and Legolas asks are you the god of Time and order you know are you Uldr, have you come to answer my prayers and he answers with "hahahahahahaha me Uldr where have you been for the last 10 years, no,no no I am not Uldr I am just a citizen of Cmok. So the citizen showed him the way to Cmok and from there he restocked on food and supply's and set his way for Ofrheim but just before he left he was handed a note that was sent by two old friends that are waiting for him in Ofriheim so he left straight away and after 1 month he was in view of the giant walls of Ofrihiem and at that moment he leaped forward and sprinted for the gate but then instead of his tow best friends waiting for him his parents are just standing there waiting for him with dark evil smiles on there faces and at that moment it comes to him the two men that were killed in the wild were his two friends.......Everything went black and then he woke up in a little house with a giant slash across his leg, as he goes to get up an old lady tells him not to move and welcomes him to the great and mighty city of Ofrihiem.The old lady asked who those people where and he had nothing to say but "That doesn't matter any more I have started a new life now and that once was is in the past". He now lives his days in and around The Great Walls chopping wood and surviving of the land.
*******I UNDERSTAND IF I DON'T GET ACCEPTED, I MAY HAVE TAKEN IT TOO FAR BUT OH WHAT THE HELL*******
Age: 19
Time zone/Location: USA Eastern
How did you hear about us? (Optional): I saw post on forums Looks awsome
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): kory132
Roleplay Name: Balgart
Age: 42
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsmen
Biography: My Names Balgart iv lived with my family for years in the woods until i was 13 and my village got sacked by a neighboring tribe me and my mom was saved by the royal archers. When i turned 19 my mom died and i set off on my own journey to become a woodsmen like my father and supply anyone in need with my perfect quality lumber. When i turned 25 i was blessed with a wife name harmony and a little girl named Farsi. My wife pasted at 38 years old my daughter has a family now and works like her father and i am very proud of her. I now live in Ofriheim and is one of the current woodsmen there and im am proud of my past if the events never happened i doubt that i would have ever met my loving wife. I also have met a friendly Kree in my journeys he was funny he exaggerated alot of things but he help me fight in my journeys but we had to depart our way when i met my wife. (total of 185 words)
PS.
I hope you except me im new to this but i can learn fast and would love to i hope you accept me.
Age:14
Time zone/Location:Central
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Roleplay Name: Krystallus
Age: 25
Race:Cmokan
Class: Mage
Biography(250 words minimal):
I grew up living with magic. My father, Merlin, taught me some of the starting strings. I was traveling from portal to portal exploring the world to find out hidden secrets to use them to my advantage. I've traveled almost everywhere. I've traveled so far down that I could see the void getting ready to open its mouth to swallow me in. I found a Portal that lead me to a wasteland of living hell. I could hear crying everywhere I went. I found a portal that lead me back to a town where they looked like they were from a physic ward. They nursed me back to normal and gave me some supplies, I used them to build a mansion fit for a king for them to live in. I used a spell, what was it, I can't remember, and I built an infinite fire so they would always have light even in dark times. They built me a portal to a sacred land of their people that no one has been in the last century. This land was known as Aether, they told me. I stood in the portal and it took me to a skyland, I was amazed and was very careful about going towards the edge so I wouldn't fall off. I escaped out off this place after I built a house. I made my way back to the portal and landed in a Country. I met people faster then I could say hello. I asked them what this place is called and they said Cmok. I said ok and asked who rules this land. They suddenly knocked me unconsious and I can't remember a thing. All I remember is my some of my past and that I am now a captive.
Im not a whitelister, but here's some advice.
Growing up, even in a different dimension or such, and having magic skills taught to you by your father that allowed you to teleport anywhere in the world? That's something that even a character played by an Admin could not do, unless explained otherwise. Also, you put in that you are Cmok. That would be untrue, as you are from a different part of the world. And since I don't think the admins are going to let you have your own race, I would suggest changing that. Another thing, about magic again. The only way to be a mage in this is to be taught by a teacher from the Empire's Mage Circuit. ( Or so I've been told. ) I wanted to be a healing mage, but I couldn't do that due to some of the same reasons that I am presenting to you now. And finally, your bio itself. You we're very unrealistic even for a fictional RP setting. Especially at the end. I don't think one would be knocked out and held captive. It sounds very generic and overused.
I am NOT trying to be a huge d-bag. I am just trying to help you get on to the server. So try re-writing your bio, and changing up some things to better fit the guidelines of this server. Also, I read that mages are over abundant nowadays, so I would ask you to be something else that you like.
- Everyone's favorite Panda!
In addition, we have a minimum of 250 words. It's not a lot. If you can't write it, then you don't belong on this server, as it is ALL roleplay, which means fast typing, lots of typing. If you can't keep up, you probably won't have fun. Which means doing risky things, getting caught, getting banned; all that unpleasantness.
On that same note, we've denied people for terrible spelling and grammar. Yes, we give you a few mistakes, no one is perfect. But if your bio looks like this, "i want to b abl3 to run across teh land wit u, lol," something is wrong.
ACCEPTED:
xChonNom (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - You just scrapped 250. But I find your Bjardsoen character's ambition to be an Imperial knight and interesting one considering your racial choice. Please don't let me down and build upon this, and show how this puts you apart from your average Bjardsoen.
PandaPudding (Cmokan/Herbalist) - Good application! Nicely written and I could see you being an interesting character to interact with. You're missing your character's age though so just incorporate that in-game. I do however ask you learn Minecraft potion recipes and do not to make it up as you go.
Cyndikate (Cmokan/Archer) - Well written and you've given good background for your class selection. I hope you use your character's backstory in future server interactions, as I could see it motivating her in her actions.
TRY AGAIN:
Mitunzz_ (Kree/Mage) - Your application failed to reach 250 words. And your biography has no explanation to do with your class choice, and the Kree race cannot be mages.
gunnut (Iredoran/Woodsman) - You're cutting the word requirement close. But I find your character's backstory regarding the exile interesting, so fix up your Biography a bit and reapply. Also loose the trolling.
cdncool (Iredoran/Archer) - You have several spelling and grammar mistakes, and your biography is very incoherent with having no transition between topics. Also I don't understand how you can accidently come across the Empire.
Jagun (Bjardsoen/Swordsman) - 129 words is far below the 250 word requirement, expand on your story and you'll have a decent biography.
Tylertbo (Cmokan/?) - Firstly you can't be two classes you can either be a Smith or Miner. Secondly a Cmokan would not grow up in Gazagan amongst the Kree. To sum up your apllication needs a lot of work.
lippy896 (Iredoran/Swordsman) - You barely reached 250 words. Also I find your application is cliched in regards to reading about heroes and aspiring to be them. And an Iredoran cannot be Swordsmen.
Dystormn (Iredoran/Woodsman) - I like you application, but your character is 25 years old whilst the city Myrire was destroyed around a 100 years ago. Please fix this error and reapply, as you clearly have a good imagination. Clearly you've read the lore but have mate a mistake with you age, as Iredorans can live up to 400 years old.
In-game Name: omnitricks
Age: 22
Time zone/Location: GMT
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Roleplay Name: Klarish Kron
Age: 43
Race: Cmokan
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
There are two sides to each coin and that is even more true when it comes to life in the Cmokan Empire for one Klarish Kron. Brought up in a long line of cosmetologists during the time of peace, for everyone else the man would be one dealing with goods of luxury for most of the other people raising the quality of their life or their health. That is of course the side which everyone sees. On the other side, the Kron family also specializes in the dark ways of the art utilized in acts such as assassinations which has been invaluable in increasing the family’s name, power and fortune as well as bringing glory to the Empire since the beginning of the Third Age despite the popularity of the use of the magical arts. Though Klarish has also been taught how to utilize this since his childhood, fortunately he has yet to use it except during those very rare circumstances by those very few parties who even know that he is capable of doing so. However as a black sheep of the Kron family, Klarish wants to be able to focus on working on the legitimate side of the family business where he would be able to bring happiness instead of tragedy. So far as of late, he has been successful in keeping true to his wishes but the decline of demand for his services might force him to do otherwise yet again. One tiny hint of poison capable of corrupting the rest of what he is.
Question: Brewing requires quite some items from the Nether. Is the Nether accessible/allowed in the server or is there some other way to get the resources?
PandaPudding (Cmokan/Herbalist) - Good application! Nicely written and I could see you being an interesting character to interact with. You're missing your character's age though so just incorporate that in-game. I do however ask you learn Minecraft potion recipes and do not to make it up as you go.
- Crap, I knew I was forgetting something. I am 27 IG, and I believe I didn't put that in my application, eh? Sorry! xD I'll be on this morning after school. I get out at 10:20AM, and it's 6:25AM now.
ofriheim or olfriheim i cant remember but theres only one carpenter and hes never online
REPOST: I fixed the age of my character.
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In-game Name: dgriffin528
Age:14
Time zone/Location: CST
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Roleplay Name: Dystormn
Age: 153
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsman
Biography(250 words minimal): Dystormn was born to a poor family of farmers in the city of Myri. His mother's name was Alifragalia and his father's name was Ragnamar. Even from the age of six, Dystormn always loved working with wood. Every spare minute he had, you could find him working with wood and planting saplings. One day, he decided that his goal would be to be the best woodsman ever. He would be able to supply his whole village with wood. One fateful day as he was headed to his chop trees, his father, Ragnamar, stopped him and told him that he was old enough to go out into the world and find a better place where he could make a living.
Then, with only his axe and his father's blessing, a few gold coins, Dystormn set out in search of a new city, but couldn't bring himself to leave Myrie. He lived by himself just outside of the city for a few months, when one day he saw long plumes of smoke rising from all around the beautiful city. He ran away a little bit and stood on a small hill. Then Dystormn witnessed the burning of the beautiful city he had spent his whole life in. Sobbing, Dystormn to Cmok, but was not yet ready to be around people after witnessing the brutal destruction of the Iredoran race.
Three days later, when Dystormn was beginning to starve, he finally went into the city. He used all of his father's blessing to buy some food. Dystormn then proceeded to devour all of the food. He saw some of his fellow Iredoran, but he decided not to talk to them. He was still in too much of a state of shellshock from witnessing the violent act. He then left the city and has wandered the forests ever since then.
ok.
-ProngsUpdates original post.
-Prongs
Age: 19
Time zone/Location: USA Eastern
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Roleplay Name: Balgart
Age: 42
Race: Iredoran
Class: Woodsmen
Biography: My Names Balgart I've lived with my family for years in the woods until I was 13 and my village got sacked by a neighboring tribe me and my mom was saved by the royal archers. When I turned 19 my mom died and I set off on my own journey to become a woodsmen like my father and supply anyone in need with my perfect quality lumber. When I turned 25 I was blessed with a wife name harmony and a little girl named Farsi. My wife passed at 38 years old my daughter has a family now and works like her father and I am very proud of her. I am proud of my past if the events never happened I doubt that I would have ever met my loving wife. I also have met a friendly Kree in my journeys he was funny he exaggerated alot of things but he help me fight on my journeys and gave me tools now and then to get my lumber easier but he passed at 34 he was killed in the mines while he was working. I miss him dearly and hope he rests in peace as of now I live in the town of Ofriheim and are one of the current woodsmen there. As you can see I am actually very satisfied with my life and how it turned out but I am getting old and I soon will need an assistant to help me with my work. So that's my life story I hope it don't disappoint you have a good day sir.
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Sorry about last post i was half asleep last night hope i get accepted
Age:14
Time zone/Location:Central
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Roleplay Name: Krystallus
Age: 25
Race: Kree
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
Hello, my name is Krystallus. I just started learning herbalogy by experimenting with different stuff. I am on my way now to a capital, Cmok. I am hoping to look for a job as a Herbalist or become an apprentice of a herbalist. I am looking forward to seeing the huge city and help it progress. We were in bad times, that doesn’t change a thing. I am from the city of Gazagan, my studies weren’t appreciated there so I decided to make the trip. I am 25 years old and a little poor. I came from a family that lived in alleyways, my past wasn’t that great. I’m taking this risk to show my parents that I am what I am and not what they decide I am. This is my biggest and riskiest journey I have ever taken.
My past is pretty dark. My family’s idea of a feast is 10 raw pork on the floor for dinner. I lived in alleyways all my life that I have no idea of what a mansion looks like. To help put food on the table for the family I had to pickpocket people so I could pay for supper on my night and some money to spend on supplies to practice my talent as a herbalist. My mom tried to catch some gold from begging at corners. My dad got food for killing chickens secretly in the markets. Me, I just did my best to try to not explode at my life.
ps. I made sure I had 250 words and good grammer. My friend, reppin402jr, is on this server so I really want to play this awesome server with him.
In-game Name:cdncool
Age:15
Time zone/Location:eastern. United States, SC
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Roleplay Name: Edmond Ailemer
Age:18
Race:Iredoran
Class:Archer
Biography(250 words minimal):
My name is Edmond Ailemer. I am an Iredoran who was born and raised within Myrire. My father was on of the best hunters in our city. He spent most of his life sitting in trees observing every detail Myri had created in nature ,while at the same time paying close attention to his prey. When he caught his prey, he would kill them quickly, and say a quick blessing. Throughout the years, Myri allowed that. My father had thick green hair. It was clear that he was more of a nymph than anything, but my mother was more human. she respected nature, but was not as obsessed with it as my father was. She was an excellent cook. She would cook every animal that my father would bring back to our tree. My sister and I had grown up helping our parents with work. we rarely had time to wander off, and explore. I had chosen to help my father with hunting while my sister helped our mother with cooking. My first day of hunting was a challenge. I was not able to climb any trees, so I went searching for prey a far ways away from my father. After a few hours of searching, I was less focused with nature, and not attentive with my surroundings. I was then attacked by a wild wolf. I was equipped with a practice bow since I was too little to wield a full length bow. I tried to pull the bow out, and search for an arrow in my quiver, but it was too late. The wolf had already pounced on me, and was about to feast on my defenseless body. Its eyes were blood red, and hair stuck up on the upper portion of his back, I had then realized that you are not only the predator, but you may also be the prey. Before the wolf could take a bite out of my heart, an arrow flew straight through its neck. In a blink on an eye, my father had started his prayer for the wolf. That day, i didn't catch anything to bring back home, but it was a big learning experience, and the wolf was delicious. After a few years of hunting with my father, he gave me the bow he had always used. The handle was carved perfectly, and the string had a golden tint to it. He had said that If he died, He would want me to carry on with his job. He favored my skills. I did not change his strategy to hunting, I perfected it. I was able to shoot a 150 foot target long bow, and was almost as good of a climber as he was. Soon after, I was able to travel through the woods without my father, and with no fear of being attacked. A few years later, my little sister died young. I had always called her annoying, because of her young personality, but It soon came to me how much i miss her. My father was so depressed, that he stopped hunting, and he passed away years later. Now, I spend most of my time hunting, and taking care of my mother. She is now very old for an Iredoran, and cannot travel very far without my help. Since she is the only part of my family left, I dare not leave the house.
oh and there should be more events because it seems like all you can do is talk to people farm make stuff and talk to more people
In-game Name: Kezaraux
Age: 14
Time zone/Location: Eastern Standard Time / Ontario, Canada.
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Roleplay Name: Rulian
Age: 19
Race: Cmokan
Class: Herbalist
Biography(250 words minimal):
Rulian is a unique person to say the least. As a child he was frowned upon by the other children because he didn't fit in with the crowd. Rulian always preferred to go off and look at the plants and local insects. He enjoys wandering among nature and exploring. On his 9th birthday his parents, gave him a little alchemy kit, which cost them a fortune to get in their little town, to fiddle around with. They soon learned that Rulian had an aptitude for brewing potions and sweet tasting drinks.
At Rulian's 15th birthday, he decided it was time that it was high time for him to go off and explore the world. He set out to traverse the lands with his satchel and his handy alchemy kit. Now four years later he returns a man from the far off lands known as Aswein, and sadly he returns without his little alchemy kit which is probably to small for him now anyways, but he does return with something. He returns with a greater knowledge of herbalism and some neat little tricks to get him through his life. Now he wanders the lands he once knew and now he hopes to become acquainted with them again.
Coming back to the village where he was raised, he sees that there is nothing here for him and he decides to move onto bigger things, like maybe getting some official training in herbalism so he could fully pursue it as his job. He is now on his way to the capital of the land, Cmok.
I hope you like my app, and sorry for filling up that space with whole sections for just 3 words of simple errors. I have a habit of pointing those out sometimes. Also please excuse any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, it was partially late when I wrote this.
Found some typing errors, though you should know of them, corrections beside in brackets. They are in bold:
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-Uses: Access to a number of Spell, Sword (Gold), Armour (Leather)
-Characters that can use this Profession: Mages, Scholars, Researchers, Battle-Mahes (Battle-Mages), Teachers, Healers, Etc.
-Note: Anyone who applies to be a Mage will have to attend the Mage's Academy and complete the term before become a full fledge Mage of the Empire. Link about the Academy found here: Link
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- Do not use, the "My Parnets were killed. Now I want revenge." Type of story, as it is overused and we believe our role players are more creative.
-Do not Power Game in your post. A real person (no matter the race) can not kill 50 or more enemies by himself.
-Do not make yourself an Assasin (Assassin), Theif, or Rogue.
-You are not a Lord or Noble of any kind, you may work your way up in the Role play, but not from the beginning.
-Prongs
Age:14
Time zone/Location: AEST----Australia
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Roleplay Name: Legolas ( nickname-Lego )
Age: 26
Race: Kree
Class: Woodsmen/ archer
Biography(250 words minimal): Legolas was born and raised in the woods giving him a keen sense of land he has never got a break in his life always working always being disrespected by his family and out shined by his older brother Gallius who has made his life a living hell. Eventually he ran away and started a new life. He soon came across a two travellers who also live of the land. Life turned out being a heaven for Legolas for he had friends, food and an easy life. After about 3 months of travelling they finally found civilisation. He lived in a small town of krimstone river until his best friends sadly past away,so instead of living in a town of memory's he set sail to see new land. Soon enough he heard of a place called Ofriheim and its giant walls. He was so desperate to find this city he travelled for two more years and then he sore something he would never expect, his brother and parents murdering two poor civilised people he couldn't believe his eyes so he ran and ran and ran until he could go no more after days of having nightmares and flashbacks he prayed to UDLR to end the nightmare but nothing. Now he lives his days as a traveller waiting for the gods to answer his prayer. Falling into a deep hallucination and starts walking in circles then finally a man in clean white robe and shining diamond armour comes to him and Legolas asks are you the god of Time and order you know are you Uldr, have you come to answer my prayers and he answers with "hahahahahahaha me Uldr where have you been for the last 10 years, no,no no I am not Uldr I am just a citizen of Cmok. So the citizen showed him the way to Cmok and from there he restocked on food and supply's and set his way for Ofrheim but just before he left he was handed a note that was sent by two old friends that are waiting for him in Ofriheim so he left straight away and after 1 month he was in view of the giant walls of Ofrihiem and at that moment he leaped forward and sprinted for the gate but then instead of his tow best friends waiting for him his parents are just standing there waiting for him with dark evil smiles on there faces and at that moment it comes to him the two men that were killed in the wild were his two friends.......Everything went black and then he woke up in a little house with a giant slash across his leg, as he goes to get up an old lady tells him not to move and welcomes him to the great and mighty city of Ofrihiem.The old lady asked who those people where and he had nothing to say but "That doesn't matter any more I have started a new life now and that once was is in the past". He now lives his days in and around The Great Walls chopping wood and surviving of the land.
*******I UNDERSTAND IF I DON'T GET ACCEPTED, I MAY HAVE TAKEN IT TOO FAR BUT OH WHAT THE HELL*******